Topic: first time chordie user !! "summer bliss starts with a kiss"

To rearrange the spoken word
try quicker, get it out or you wont be heard,
a pensive momentary lapse,
picture that pressure,your whole world will collapse.

A mind that races ,but tongue paralysed,
round and round it chases, did somebody die ?
like a one legged race horse always in a rush,
a talented painter without a brush.

to put it all in perspective is no mean feat,
kisses laced with razorwire is not so sweet,
it crumbles in it tumbles down
always, always, always a frown.

its o.k its the inside and not the out,
no one ever hears you, you can shout and shout and shout.

Re: first time chordie user !! "summer bliss starts with a kiss"

i liked your Poem,

I like this even better.

ts o.k its the inside and not the out,
no one ever hears you, you can shout and shout and shout.


I call this my silent scream.....but usually smile as i do so lol

Old Doll

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !

Re: first time chordie user !! "summer bliss starts with a kiss"

hi simmo,

nice bitter/sweet bit of verse, you mean you've actually been a member for a whole year and now is your first submission? come on, get your act together, lets have more

phill

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.