1 (edited by TIGLJK 2016-02-21 23:55:58)

Topic: This Time I May Be Wrong New Song

I had this line in my head -  "This time I may be wrong"   played around with the cowboy chords - and this is what I came up with.
Hope you like it.

[song]

{t: This Time I May Be Wrong}

[G] I remember  nights  that we spent together
looking up at the [d] stars
making wishes and blowing kisses
in the back seat of my [G] car

and the first time I put my arm around you
and I  held you oh so [C] tight
ooh,  you looked into my [G] baby blues
and we [D] kissed all through the [G]  night

{SOC}
Chorus

[C] Well I never felt that [C7]way before and my
[G] My heart was   pounding strong
didn’t think  I’d  ever   fall in love
But this [D] time I may be [G] wrong 

{EOC}

[G]Every touch, every kiss, every time you smile
  always  seems perfect to [D]  me
Right from the start,  in my heart
I knew you were meant for [G] me

[G]I can't imagine a day without you
and seeing your pretty   [C] face
and sweetly  kissing your  [G] ruby lips
anytime, any [D] where, any  [G]place

{SOC}
Chorus
[C] Well I never felt this [C7]way before and my
[G] My heart is  pounding strong
     didn’t think  I’d  ever   fall in love
But this [D] time I know I’m [G] wrong 

{EOC}

{C: slower – fade out}

[D] didn’t think  I’d  ever   fall in love
But this [C] time I know I’m [G] wrong 
[D] didn’t think  I’d  ever   fall in love
But this [C] time I know I’m [G] wrong

[/song]

"Use the talents you possess, for the woods would be very silent if no birds sang except only the the best." - Henry Van Dyke

Re: This Time I May Be Wrong New Song

Your lyrics work pefectly and the chords fit nicely.

Re: This Time I May Be Wrong New Song

here is a quick take on it - it's fun to play --- wish I could freaking sing !

https://soundcloud.com/tigljk/this-time … t-be-wrong

"Use the talents you possess, for the woods would be very silent if no birds sang except only the the best." - Henry Van Dyke

Re: This Time I May Be Wrong New Song

I've always said you were the champion of the great chorus but now I see you're top man with verses too.

There are two "L's" in Phill

Re: This Time I May Be Wrong New Song

Just listened to your  This Time I Maybe Wrong on soundcloud it is a good song your guitar drives it along nicely As a song writer your vocals do the job setting down a good template for someone to cover.

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Re: This Time I May Be Wrong New Song

That's what I usually hope for, one of the good players and singers here to do just that. There are many talented people here on Chordie for sure. 
Thanks for the listen smile

"Use the talents you possess, for the woods would be very silent if no birds sang except only the the best." - Henry Van Dyke

Re: This Time I May Be Wrong New Song

Isn't it great how a single line can give genesis to such great work ... nicely done. I thought I was wrong once, but I was mistaken (hyuk).

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Re: This Time I May Be Wrong New Song

good one TIGLJK  I must agree with  Phill  on the verses there all good but that first one is  really is catchy .

out of tune out of key and out of touch

Re: This Time I May Be Wrong New Song

Tenement Funster wrote:

Isn't it great how a single line can give genesis to such great work ... nicely done. I thought I was wrong once, but I was mistaken (hyuk).

i loved that....really made me laugh big_smile

There are two "L's" in Phill

Re: This Time I May Be Wrong New Song

Mojo

Mojo

Thanks  for the indirect suggestion - after I read what you posted I realized the last verse was okay - but didn't really carry the theme as the first verse had.     So I changed the last stanza a bit - I like it better - a little more catchy and in the same moments of the first verse I think-  I hope you like it.

That's what is so great about chordie - man I love this site !

and see...... I was wrong smile

If one of you guys that can really play and sing as opposed to my abilities, want to cover this - I'd love to hear a version smile




Jim

"Use the talents you possess, for the woods would be very silent if no birds sang except only the the best." - Henry Van Dyke

Re: This Time I May Be Wrong New Song

well I would not have suggested changing it but dang if you didn't improve on it.

out of tune out of key and out of touch

Re: This Time I May Be Wrong New Song

well

the new format has left me a bit frustrated

As you can see above - the lyrics and chords to my song got chopped off....
what makes me sad is that the only place i had the edited version was right here ! sad

"Use the talents you possess, for the woods would be very silent if no birds sang except only the the best." - Henry Van Dyke

Re: This Time I May Be Wrong New Song

TIG,  Make a post here. It's Roger's "Bugs"  thread.

http://www.chordie.com/forum/viewtopic.php?id=28666

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Re: This Time I May Be Wrong New Song

Thanks Joe

lot of growing pains and lessons learned in the transition

Chordie still is awesome though

Jim

"Use the talents you possess, for the woods would be very silent if no birds sang except only the the best." - Henry Van Dyke