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I re made this song -  took the old version off soundcloud and put this on instead.
It has gone through about a thousand re-writes !   and now I listen to it - I would take out the word "least" in the choruses

Here it is https://soundcloud.com/tigljk/heavens-d … e-mix-2015

I really believe that someone ( obviously not me) with a good voice and guitar skills could make this into a real good version.

Hope you like it.

Hopefully this will be it !

I listened to the change that I had made and read the message from Phill about putting my stamp on the Dylan song - At first I thought it was a good thing  - but last night  ( actually this am) I woke up and it it hit me - Phill's message was that it was still Dylan's song !   It hit me like a brick - I wanted this to be my song. Sooooo, I took it away from the Knocking on Heaven's Door chords in the verse and changed the chords.  It plays much different, and with apologies to Bobby D, I like it much better.  I will put a new version on soundcloud soon as I can. I made one slight change in a lyric and  I am keeping the title because I like it and it seems right for me.  I am amazed on how this thing tansformed from Playing knockin on Heavens door in my kitchen to this.  Thanks to all for your constructive help - love chordie !!

I hope you like it.

Jim

Beamer

A title like that requires everyone to check it out.

Powerful stuff - leaves a lot for the imagination - I've read it three times now and each time thought of different scenarios. 

I have no clue how it would play in terms of music - I don't know anything about Metal type music.
However - I would love to hear your version played when transferred into production of a song.

Great job man !!

Be sure to visit the "Gum wall"  and "fish tossing" at Pike's Market in Seattle !   

Jim

Ok - here is the link to the updated version - I can't say the singing or playing is any better, but the song is I think - Thanks Phill for the suggestion of adding a chorus.

Hope you like it. 

https://soundcloud.com/tigljk/heavens-d … vivor-2015

Phill,

You are spot on once again !!

After you pointed that out out I was like - holy sh** !

So I re-wrote it - made the changes above....  I like it much better.

I think that the chord and subtle strum change in the chorus gives it more of an uplifting sound instead of the dreary sound of the verses ( which in fact would be the point of the song - to be uplifted)

Wish we were neighbors - although our wives are probably glad we're not !

If you have any other suggestions I'm always good to go there.

If you want to give a whack and spin your own version - ( which is always freaking awesome)  go for it.

Thanks for the input.

Unlike Dylan, the reason my verses are always played different is because I'm not a very good guitarist !

I'll try to put out a new audio on soundcloud with the changes soon.

Thanks again,  my good friend  !

Jim
Let me know what you think.

I like fortisimo - red wine - mellow and has a nice little kick.

I do as Doc says and have a glass every night

TF

Outrageously fantastic !!

Love it - make it a song man - schools across the world would use in classes !!
Way to go !!

JK

I love when the NZ All Blacks do "the Haka" -    so freaking cool and intimidating - and done for the rigt reasons!

Love it !

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8hEYwk0bypY
it's muddy Waters - Mojo Working

It is Awesome - James Cotton on Harp is out of this world fantastic
Thanks Badeye for a terrific choice.

Maybe he can play a funeral song for the Jays - they played crappy for the past two games- even though the ump in game one crippled them