Peatle,
I agree with all above.. Really nice voice- gonna move forward and rise up I am sure.

Jim     

Good stuff Graham - looks like a lot of fun
jim     

Thank you fellas for taking the time to take another look at this.

Jeff - yes I liked the first version as well, but got noodling around and started singing it this way and it was just more comfortable to me.
EB - yeah that chord is an easy move from the A  I was playing it and it sounded good - so I too looked up what it was actually called too.
       The reason I have not been so active of late has been that my school called me back in to teach until they can find someone - the teacher they had quit 5 days before the start of school. Plus I am still coaching soccer.
Phill - thanks - I hope you do give it a go. I'm sure you would make it sound a lot better than I can 

Peatle - Thanks for your kind words. tried to sneak in  some analogies there.

again - thanks to all for the comments- much appreciated

Jim     

Brian,

Do so !  That is brilliant stuff---- I'm telling ya the kindergartners loved it.
The teacher thought I wrote it at first and told me I should get it published - so it isn't just me.
The robot one was so clever as well !! You have a talent buddy, follow your passion!
Jim     

Brian,
your poem was read to the kindergarten class at my school. They thought it was hilarious
I added their teacher's name to the lady that had socks stolen.

So - get it frigging published !

Jim     

I agree with Jan and Peatle as well - Nicely done !!     

Richard
i quite agree with Peatle on this  - very impressive.

Be cool to attend

Jim     

Wow -That is amazing and clever !  Well Done and welcome to chordie     

Holy Cow Mojo !!!

That is an incredible song.
Get it on the radio or something - If Luke Byran wrote it and sang it it would be on the charts immediately !

The Lyrics, the melody, the performance, and your unique voice made this a pleasure to listen too.

Thanks for sharing.

Can you post the lyrics and Chords ?

Jim     

Great version Neo

The CAT !!    I thought it was a fake one at first:)

Thanks for sharing

Jim     

Peatle

I liked that a lot - thought he was excellent.

I have been away a week on vacation  with my family - one of the best weeks of my life.
So much fun having all my kids and grandkids together in one place with my wife and I.
Topsail Island, NC  - it is a paradise for sure

Thanks for posting this Peatle !
Here is a link to Guy Clark - keeping with the " roll" theme !

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qVpqrnDonto

Jim     

That's very interesting Peatle - never heard that before about the proposal and refusal - can't say I truly believe it.

Good stuff though - nice singer.

Thanks for posting

Cheers

Jim