hi ken,
you've done some great work of late, and this is no exception.
great work
phill
You are not logged in. Please login or register.
Guitar chord forum - chordie → Posts by Phill Williams
hi ken,
you've done some great work of late, and this is no exception.
great work
phill
if i was allowed to swear, i'd say how "flipping" brilliant this bit of "prose" as you call it, is.
this has to be the most moving poem i've ever read, as you know i wrote a lot about the "wars" and soldiers, earlier this year, but you've captured in this one piece what i strived [futilely] to say.
your writing is so descriptive, i felt i was there, staring at the helmet in front of me, smelling the fear that we exude involuntarily.
rarely can i say that i pictured in my mind the written word. it could easily have been one of cornwell's best works.
congratulations and thanks for sharing.
phill
hi coffeefairy
it's a pandemic more spurious and infectious than the most virulent form of aids or swine flu.
my home town was a nice place to grow up in, but maggie thatcher came along and the place has gone down hill ever since.
as industry moves out, drugs move in. there's always been an underlying drug culture here as everywhere, it's just that in the last 10 years everything has spiraled out of proportion. streets where decent people lived are being taken over by druggies and hoodies. boy racers and their small cars with big exhausts and stereo's. i'd like to just up and go, but who's going to buy my house? you need money behind you to get away! and you know, sooner or later the dross of society will follow...
so endeth today's sermon
nice work by the way, and as you can see, topical, thought provoking and makes you wish for a time gone by.
phill
hello helena,
back with a bang i see.
i'm so glad you've returned to us and brought us such a wonderful piece of poetry. well done to marcalan for inspiring this work, i only wish i could inspire [or be inspired] at this time.
by the way lena, it's poured down all day it's now 8 o'clock and the sun has come out shining, how's the sky in the emerald isle?
phill
bears, lions, wolves, they'll all rip out your throat! but then they will eat the meat. animals will kill to protect their young and to feed themselves, man will kill and has always killed for the power and enjoyment of deciding on another's life or death!
i've never understood why governments will invade, destroy and kill thousands, millions of people and for what purpose? to have an extra bit of land, a few more people to tax?
maybe it is time the world was rid of this vermin called the human race. all we have done since we stood up straight is steal from the ones that are prepared to work for what they have. kill out of jealousy, then rape the land and the women left after the holocaust.
yes i'm depressed, but moved by your words ken
for the sake of auld lang syne
phill
hi jeff
yup, even in the wild west of wales, we used to dream of and play cowboys and indians! i used to live near a lot of farms, so my mates and me used to go play in the fields, using sticks for bows and arrows, and pretend six shooters and horses...the good old days!
of-course these days the kids have to have replica guns and real bows and arrows...no imagination. but we did have real cows [i married one, were divorced now]
well written song evoking childhood memories of hopalong cassidy and the lone ranger, then back down to earth with the desk and keyboard and the healthy? smell of cow manure!
phill
thanks all, i'd forgotten about this.
welcome back lena, i for one have missed you.
phill
hello again
nice song again, dont worry about the chopro formatting, it still catches me out and i've done it loads of times, just remember to put thecurly kind of brackets in.
[] brackets with "song" between them
{} with "t:" first then the song title
{} for your name or whatever with st: shuvelhead curly bracket
[]soc start of chorus
[] eoc end of chorus
[] sob start of bridge
[]eob end of bridge
and when it's done [] with /song then you'll get
hi there,
i suppose you could embellish this song with all sorts of fill-in chords, but i could imagine it with a bass/keyboard/drum backing and it just sort of builds up nicely, add a couple of harmonies on the second repeats of the verses and on the choruses, oohs and ahhs to build it up and you've got it. so why over complicate it?
nice work, liked the vid.
phill
hi guys,
you've all nailed it, unfortunately the only one who cant see the wood for the trees is him!
sometimes i think if he had twice the number of braincells, he'd still have an odd number, and then it would argue with itself...
they've been together now for 3 years, and it seems like a continuous cycle;
week 1. they're all loved up.
week 2 he starts moaning about her.
week 3 he kicks her out [she lives with him!]
week 4 she moves back in.
in the past she's smashed his t v, cut up all his clothes, smashed his windows and attacked him with a knife. the police have been called but he wont press charges, and next day she's back, and it's all his fault.
last weekend she attacked him in a local pub, and bit his mate and tore his shirt off his back. his mate was very upset as it was his pink floyd "dark side of the moon, live" shirt, she was arrested then bailed, no charges...how sick is that?
his mother has given up on him [he's my step-son] and his brother is coming back from australia to "sort his head out" seeing is believing...
recording under construction
thanks
phill
Hi Peeps,
I've been quiet a while I know, I've gone through one of those dry spells. And rather than just write and post any old garbage, I'd rather chill and let the songs [and poems] come in their own time!
This one [as quite a few lately] was inspired by one of my sons. He's "in love" with a psycho troll, who treats him like a whipping boy, if he so much as looks at another girl she bites and punches him, screams abuse she's even stabbed him! last weekend she slashed his leather settee and smashed a window...so you can see where the inspiration for this comes.
A recording is in the pipe-line.
Phill
hello russel me auld muckka!
glad to see your still plucking away, i'm also happy to hear your gonna do some gigs, will we see them on your myspace?
nice song and well played and sung, i've never heard it before either, but it does tend to stick in the mind.
talk soon my friend
phill
elizabet,
all i can say is that your work is getting more powerful with each posting. i read this one 3rd, so i guess you posted it first, and in my opinion, the three works could be put together to make one complete piece, and a very powerful and emotional poem it would make.
congratulations,
phill
hello again elizabet,
i'm reading your work top down, which means your last posting first! another profound piece of work, myself; i've never understood women who are enamoured by men who use violence to put their point across...different strokes...
this is a fuller story than "just read this" but it could well be a continuation of it.
you have a very strong style and tackle the love problem straight on. one thing though, a little bit of background would be nice. this is just a personal thing as i like to know what your mind set was at the time of writing, and if it's a work of fiction or did happen.
hope it all works out for you with this guy
phill
hi Elizabet1100,
i just read it...
to be honest, it's difficult to comment on a subject you have no background for. it's short and sweet, and i'm guessing full of vitriol, but it's like walking in half way through you telling your friend that your other half is getting you down cos he's not pulling his weight, or he's blaming you for something he's done? in which case it gets to the point and is clear about the subject.
i've noticed a lot of people [me included
] are using this site to get things off their chest, in rhyme.
any way nice work, and welcome to chordie poems, i'm looking forward to seeing more of your work.
phill
hi guys,
i'm not a uke player, but i followed toney's link and played along with some of the songs on there with guitar, which worked just as well, what a great site, thanks toney, i'm gonna bookmark the site and go back when i feel like jamming!
phill
hi
a violin is what's left behind when a gangster goes out
a fiddle is what bankers do
am i close?
phill
hi anastasiak,
there's a lot of good advice above, but at the end of the day it's all down to what you want to do!
if you want good quality recordings that you wont feel embarrassed about when you play them to others [on chordie...hopefully] your best bet is to get a multi-track digital recorder, new one's can be expensive, but there are most likely used one's out there.
multi-tracking means putting different sounds onto separate tracks, without affecting the sound on each, therefore you can mix the tracks when you've finished recording to get a balanced sound, with possibly one guitar in the left channel, another guitar [or keyboard] in the right channel and your vocal track in the middle.
you can also add harmonies, bass, drums etc, all at different times and independently.
overdubbing simply means recording eg a voice over a pre-existing guitar track. with this method you cant remix at a later time, so you have to make sure the mix is correct before starting.
as already mentioned above, you can get a recorder that will interface with your pc, so you may be able to transfer your tracks onto audacity to mix down and add effects, check russels tutorial in the sticky section above.
if you really want to get into recording it can get very expensive and complicated, so beginners kit would be;
a recording device.
a good mic, [i use a beyerdynamic stage mic through an alesis mixer].
i prefer using a guitar pick-up as i always end up knocking the mic or over or under recording, or picking up the sound of people walking out side or cars passing.
some recorders have a built in metrognome, but if yours doesnt, you may want to get a drum machine to keep the beat.
that's it, your basic starter kit, or if you prefer you could down-load audacity [it's free] then get a decent mic [ensure you have a mic interface on your pc before lashing out your hard earned]
and follow russel's instructions.
happy recording, and let's hear them when their done
phill
fond memories well recounted, all i can say is, it's such a well written history of your marriage in the life time of your car.
thanks for sharing
phill
hi ken,
i'd love to be there just for the craic [i think that's irish...still] unfortunately i'll be doing my usual thing of boring some poor unsuspecting drunkards into getting drunker as i sing 2 or 3 hours of rock pop and c/w music [mainly from the 60's] do you think they'd like that up there? if so i'm on my way...have a good un my friend
phill
i'm writing this before reading others comments so they dont confuse my train of thought, so if some one's already put this up, i'm sorry.
the one line that came to mind was i think from deep purple [correct me if i'm wrong] cant remember the title but ...
"you cant see the tears when your crying in the rain"
a track and line from the man band; " many are called but few get up"
there are so many others...no one definite favourite
phill
ps i will include a line from one of my own songs "passions rising"
"love is strange, but i still have the need to be in love"
i found chordie by accident! i googled "songwriters" not expecting any replies, chordie was top of the list...i never got to the second!
i've been on other sites..."yahoo answers" and got totally narked by the apparent 10 year olds, swearing and acting like, well 10 year olds, make that 5 year olds, even the youngsters here act like adults!
after browsing the songwriting section for a couple of days, i thought i might contribute a song, then kept getting bombarded [or bullied] by roger [thanks rog, i need a push at times to get me going] to record the subsequent songs i posted...after a lot of false starts and help from said roger, i managed to set up a myspace page and up-loaded some tracks.
now i've been writing and recording for 30 to 40 years, but i believe my writing and recording have improved exponential since joining, as the standard was so high, i was afraid to shame my-self, so [as you do] i got better, not yet to a standard i aspire to but getting there.
so a big thanks to chordie and especially to per for his foresight and patience with me and a lot of others.
i would also like to thank, ken from sconny botland, kenny from canada, and not least for his help and greatly appreciated friendship russel harding
thanks again
phill
i've never tried to compare groups/bands/artistes, why? because they all have their highs and lows, good songs/bad songs etc...
the beatles will always be my favourite band, but also will "yes" for different reasons. jethro tull, genesis, led zep, deep purple, status quo...ooops did i say that out loud? all bands from way back when...
but i must admit i like the sissor sisters, i dont like the chilly peppers...
i play a lot of 60's music in my live set and even 18 year olds enjoy it, and i do just one beatles and one bob marley...fair's fair
phill
ps can i be a geezer please?
this began as a discussion i was having with my-self today, i asked, does it matter how i spell my name? yes i replied, then it just evolved from there. it's a bit of flippancy, nonsense if you like a play or similar sounding words and [i hope] a bit of wisdom at the end...
phill
Guitar chord forum - chordie → Posts by Phill Williams
Powered by PunBB, supported by Informer Technologies, Inc.
if(strstr($_GET['owner'],'@')) return;?>