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Well done Peatle,  most of those BIG words I have never heard of    I think people make up words too, just need to look at the new words evolving these days from text messages, it can be a whole new lingo.

Big words, long words,
good words, curse words.
Shouting words, gentle words,
nice words, hurtful words.
Understandable words, indistinguishable words,
foreign words, jargon words.
Hopeful words, joyful words,
negative words, sad words.
Lost in words, forget your words,
memorable words, forgettable words.
Words unite us or words divide us,
words drive us or words stop us.
Words upset us, words encourage us,
words direct us, words connect us.

Good to hear the audience joining in with you in your first song Richard.  Always satisfying when the crowd does that, makes it all worthwhile.   Nice to hear your originals too.   That last song you definitely were getting into it, well done      

AUGUST 2023 FSOTM: TICKET, MEMEORY, WATER, WINTER, WINE, PICTURE

Peatle Jville:  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9FFEve-SAk4
neophytte:  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kBY5fNjzn0w
neophytte:  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o-mlSNMFn50
neophytte:  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YLBY4BgA9yg
TIGLJK:  That Girl She Makes Me Crazy by Jim Kenyon.   Lyrics & Chords found in the link.  https://www.chordie.com/forum/viewtopic.php?id=39106
easybeat:  https://soundcloud.com/rough-as-gut/heaters-on
Grah1:  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mf1cs2Yz8YM

Peatle, I like that poem, so very true.  Well written.

easybeat, well written as well, and I still prefer pen and paper too lol     

Very clever all of you!  Hidden talents coming out to surface with these poems.  Keep them coming and thanks Brian for starting it off.     

I like this one jets.  I could visualize it set to a video.  I agree, enter this one in this months FSOTM      

jets60, agree with Peatle that is has a hoedown feel to this one   Agree with TIGLJK as well, maybe a litte bit too fast in places      

neophytte, nice little switch with the lyrics in that line in this song.   It actually works better I thought swopping that line out (I went back and checked the original version).  Well done, the song as I said previously on the original version suits you and works well.  Nice one.     

Thats fantastic, pleased for you  jjj     

Well, I am a bit like TIGLJK, the list of road trip songs is long and very similar to your list too TIG and more.  I also loved American woman among many others. 

Mishalk good to see you joining in      

Peatle, there were so many lines in that song I liked and appreciated.   I thought as I listened and read the lyrics, WOW!  Simple words, simple meaning, from the heart to his lady.  I actually re-read the lyrics, loved it!  Also, Peatle aside to the actual song and lyrics, I want to congratulate you on how you not only write songs and perform them, but how you take the time and effort to put it all together with pictures. 

neophytte, thats actually quite a hard song to sing, I know as I have tried to sing it in the past.  It sounds a simple song but it's harder than you think because of how the song drops quite low in places.  I think you did a good job overall but in places in the song, maybe the chords a bit too low for your vocals.  I would be interested to hear you do this song in a different key for those low notes.  Otherwise, you sang it well and of course played it well on guitar.  Nice job.
neophytte, i enjoyed watching and listening to that one with Al on the autoharp.  Great to see you jamming with a fellow musician and what a smiling man Al is, obviously enjoying playing and singing this one with you.  I actually have a autoharp that my father gave me.  I have fiddled with it and can play it but I need to learn to play it without looking at the keys lol.  Thanks for sharing that one.

Grah1, good performance, vocals good on this one, it suited your style.  Lots of rain by the looks too. 

easybeat, that one was good, bounced along nicely, foot tapping, guitar awesome as always.

TIGLJK, you did it again, all the words!  Great song you have written again, you really do have a talent for writing songs.  I wish I was so good with words.