hi daddy,
i love the way all your love songs are so obviously about your wife. "as long as your there lifes toils we share" thats such a brilliant line...well done
phill
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hi daddy,
i love the way all your love songs are so obviously about your wife. "as long as your there lifes toils we share" thats such a brilliant line...well done
phill
hi ark, kap54 and helena,
thanks for replying, i don't understand how this song hasn't come up on my web, it's not a very good recording and i'm in the process of rerecording it. i have been very busy for the last month or so, i had an intensive course for work and then i went on holiday, and i've been writing a lot of new songs, and i haven't even got time to finish one off before another on e begins, and you cant afford to let one slip away...know what i mean?
yes as usual your so right lena, jealousy is such a waste of time and emotion, especially when it's over something stupid like what this song was written about...just something i said about my ex!!! that was 26 years ago, i think it's passed now, but you never know?
thanks again
phill
nice words well written, it could as easily be a poem as a song, do you have a melody for them?
phill
hi bluesky, like the yellow sub
songs come in different ways, sometimes i get an inspiration for some words and a tune comes with them, but if i dont record it straight away then i forget how the music goes and i usually have to rewrite the words to fit the new tune!! occasionally the whole thing comes as if i'd heard it on the radio, so i guess all i can say is; we all write in our own way, try just tinkling on a guitar or keyboard until a chord sequence forms a melody, then words will follow, then comes the hard part, get them to make sense to other people
hope this helps
phill
hi kap54
i was a bit luckier than most of you, my dad was 77, a sudden and fatal heart attack, good for him, but you get the feeling you never had the chance to say all the things you wanted to.
sometimes when i smell a pipe or a cigar, i smile because i feel he's there watching and i hope approving. none the less, a sensitive and emotive work, remember they arn't really gone as long as you remember them.
phill
hi griever,
liked the way you've put this together, sounds like a warm atmosphere i guess we've all been there at one time or another. these pubs are getting more and more hard to find, so tell me where is it?
good one keep it up
phill
hi kap54,
i liked the song a lot, even though it is a little too close to home, the tanker drivers of one company have gone on strike here, [uk] driving up the price even further! and as a singer i'm a little worried that i may not be able to get to gigs, just as you are worried that you cant get to your delivery point. if the price of fuel is high in canada, us and australia, just imagine how crippling it is here, i was in oz last year and i couldnt get over how cheap petrol was out there compared to the uk.
and apart from all the politics your song takes me back to the protest songs of the 60's where bob dylan and his like thought they could change the world by writing songs in the hope of changing society. as long as there are employers and employees, governments and revenue collectors, tax men and taxpayers...society will always remain as the who say; " here comes the new boss, just like the old boss..."
sorry this is so depressing, i've just come home from holiday, i'm back in work tonight, it's 8.30 am, and i can't sleep, so i'm just ratty as hell.
love the song, keep em coming
phill
ps. is the internet the new cb?
hi telemaster,
you've made a very good start! in your mind you've most likely got the tune and words sync'd up. but the most important thing is you've put down your thoughts in your own personalised way
as far as the solo is concerned, you only put in a solo if it's needed, or the song is a bit short, which [unless it goes like the clappers] it isnt.
excellent for a first attempt, keep working on it and i'm sure you'll get there. [you should have seen my first song, but no one ever will!!!]
regards phill
hi jeff, they grow up too quick dont they?
my little girl and boy, suddenly became grown up with partners and kids of their own while i was busy working, so my advice to any young parent is to enjoy your kids before they grow up and you miss it all.
great song very poignant
phill
hi chuck,
i played it my way as it isnt on your web site, i played it bluesy and it was really enjoyable to play, and i dont agree with jeff, i thought the chorus ran great.
excellent song, looking forward to hearing it hint hint
phill
hi goonie 1,
love the words, the metre seems perfect till you try playing it, at first i thought it was a blues number, but i couldnt get the beat, tried c/w and reggie, please put it on myspace cos i think it's a good one and i'd love to know how it goes.
phill
hi zurf,
i wrote a song the other day while i was having new windows put in, well the stuff they use, some kind of solvent or something, really spun my head as i went right off track and wrote some weird lines. now you must realise that i went through the whole of the 60's without polluting my body with any form of stimulant, and here i was as high as a kite! so worry not i've heard sgt. peppers and most of pink Floyd, so no problem, just keep em coming
Phill
hey jeff,
i think the descriptive word is "soul mate", you dont have to write it in your song for me to know what you mean, i met mine and i'm glad to know you met yours
great song
phill
hi getfiddle,
nice song, i think it's the sad bits of life that get the creative juices flowing, and then the get you back bit hits in, "didnt love you anyway" yeah
good one when are you gonna get it on myspace?
phill
wow, that's heavy man,
you've certainly got a way with words, and i hope you get this song listened to, and don't we all wish we could dump those lying thieving politicians yes theyre just as bad here in the uk, our petrol [gas] costs us over £5.00 per gallon, you can work out your self how much that is in dollars! and most of it is tax, and the rest is profit for the oil companies.
anyway i agree, it's time we all woke up
phill
hi jeff,
funnily enough i only had one sleepless night of nursing each of my 4 kids, they never used to wake up for the 2 o'clock feed after the second week! lucky or what?
but having said that, when my wife went into hospital for our third baby, a girl, our oldest son had to go to another hospital, 10 miles away to have his appendix out, the same night, so i had a couple of sleepless nights there, commuting from one hospital to another, then work in the morning, but as you say, if i could do it again, i wouldn't change a thing.
love the song and the sentiment
keep on rocking
phill
hi getfiddle, welcome to our parlour, sit yourself down and have a cup of tea, sorry coffee. a cheeky little number if i'm not mistaken, stings a little bit, are you taking a poke at someone? bitter experience make the best songs.
i don't want to be picky, but i believe it's spelt arpeggio, meaning plucked and running up and down the piano keys, or indeed the guitar strings, or even the fiddle!!!
great song, keep 'em coming
phill
HI ARK, YOU'VE CAUGHT ME OUT, ACTUALLY THE CHORUS FX IS BUILT INTO THE GUITAR, IT'S A GRIFTER ACCOUSTIC WITH A BUILT IN PICK-UP, LEFT HAND AND I LOVE IT, AND ON TOP OF THAT I USE THE CHORUS FX ON MY KORG D8 RECORDER, SOUNDS A BIT MUCH NOW I'VE PUT IT DOWN, BUT THAT WON'T STOP ME USING IT.
GLAD YOU LIKED THE SONG, AND I TAKE IT YOU LISTENED TO "IF IT CAME DOWN TO ME" AS THAT HAS ME RECITING [AS OPPOSED TO RAPPING] A LITTLE VERSE I HAD IN MY HEAD AT THE TIME.
KEEP ROCKING
PHILL
BLUE EYES IS NOW ON MYSPACE, SO ARKADY, YOU ASKED FOR IT SO THERE IT IS. LET ME KNOW IF YOU LIKE IT
PHILL
THANKS ARK AND HELENA, AND DADDY TOO, SEEMS I'VE GOT A LITTLE TIME ON MY HANDS AT THE MOMENT, WHILE THE WIFE IS WATCHING HER SOAPS, GLAD YOU LIKE THE SONG, I RECORDED IT FIRST THEN POSTED IT ON THE FORUM.
PHILL
hi jeff , another goodie, very pensive and thoughtful [probably said the same thing twice there?]
as for typos, you can always go back into the song and hit the edit button, i have to do it all the time, then hit spellcheck. why am i telling you this you most likely know better than me anyway, cos i'm not very c/l
phill
hi jeff, funnily enough i find as i get older, time doesn't seem to drag so much, in fact it passes too damn fast!
i like the way you've just written it in the matter-of-fact style, when are you up loading it to myspace?
see you soon
phill
not on myspace yet daddy? like the words they make a me laff
i get the same probs with chopro, no matter what i do i still get it wrong.
keep rockin' young man
phill
hi daddy,
i've transposed the chords for you into key C.
C-Em-Am-G for the first section, then;
F-C-Am-G for the second part, and play Dm for the Em at the end of the verse.
it's on myspace if you fancy a listen
phill
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