hi jeff , another goodie, very pensive and thoughtful [probably said the same thing twice there?]
as for typos, you can always go back into the song and hit the edit button, i have to do it all the time, then hit spellcheck. why am i telling you this you most likely know better than me anyway, cos i'm not very c/l
phill
4,776 2008-04-28 18:36:37
Re: "You Can't Go Home" (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
4,777 2008-04-27 18:14:17
Re: "The Wait" (11 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hi jeff, funnily enough i find as i get older, time doesn't seem to drag so much, in fact it passes too damn fast!
i like the way you've just written it in the matter-of-fact style, when are you up loading it to myspace?
see you soon
phill
4,778 2008-04-27 18:09:19
Re: t:title "daddycool rock" {vamp all through song} (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
not on myspace yet daddy? like the words they make a me laff
i get the same probs with chopro, no matter what i do i still get it wrong.
keep rockin' young man
phill
4,779 2008-04-27 18:04:41
Re: If it was down to me (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hi daddy,
i've transposed the chords for you into key C.
C-Em-Am-G for the first section, then;
F-C-Am-G for the second part, and play Dm for the Em at the end of the verse.
it's on myspace if you fancy a listen
phill
4,780 2008-04-27 17:08:34
Topic: If it was down to me (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
this one came to me as i woke up this morning, so i wrote it down quick, then recorded it this afternoon, it's all about being prepared to give your life for the one you love.}
if it was down to meUndefined
4,781 2008-04-23 22:07:47
Re: {t:with rock and roll} (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
HI DADDY, HELENA
YOU CAN HEAR THIS IT'S ON MYSPACE, GLAD TO HEAR YOU CAN CUT A RUG HELENA, MY WIFE LOVES TO JIVE, AND AS MOST OF MY ACT IS 60'S AND ROCK AND ROLL SONGS I CAN STATE AS A FACT THAT TODAYS KIDS LOVE THE OLD 'UNS AS MUCH AS US OLD 'UNS [TALKING FOR MYSELF]
ROCK ON
PHILL
4,782 2008-04-23 21:10:07
Topic: {t:with rock and roll} (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
this is the third time i've typed this song on here...
With Rock and Rollby Phill Williams
4,783 2008-04-23 20:45:09
Re: Blue Eyes (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hi ark
your wish is my command, i've just posted another song, but the program is giving me jyp again, but it is on my space, i'll get this one there shortly
thanks again
phill
4,784 2008-04-23 19:14:36
Re: "That Silly Girl I Love" (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hi jeff,
bet she gave you a right hook after reading that?
it's the sort of thing i do and that's my reward, no only joking! lovely song wheres the recording? i tried your page... i played it sort of chuga chuga, which i liked how do you play it?
another goodie keep em coming
phill
4,785 2008-04-23 19:03:29
Re: Blue Eyes (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
thanks helena,
when i sing "brown eyed girl" for her, i
change it to "blue eyed girl"...little things
phill
ps i never have to buy her flowers, as i never stray!!!
4,786 2008-04-22 20:36:19
Re: Greasy Spoon (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
great start, sounds like your 5year old has a future too!
phill
4,787 2008-04-22 20:29:58
Topic: Blue Eyes (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
{st: phill williams}
{c:this is a song i wrote 10 years ago, but i keep updating and changing it, it was written at a time i thought my wife might leave with my daughter...she didnt}
{song}
{Blue Eyes}
verse 1
(f)won't you listen when i'm spea(g)king to you
i've got (c)lots of things on my (f)mind
where've you been, where are you (g)going to
are you (c)leaving me be(f)hind?
{sob}(dm)ooh ooh (g)girl
(c)i'm feeling blue to(f)night
(dm)blue like the mid(g)night skies
are you sad(c), are you cry(dm)ing?
are you (f)thinking of me to(g)night?{eob]
{soc}(c)blue eyes, (dm)so sweet when they (g)smile
(dm)blue (c)eyes, (am)i see tears and i'm (dm)hurting
and im trying not to (f)show
what i know must be (g)coming
from your (c)blue (f)eyes, (dm)give me to(g)night
(dm)blue (c)eyes, (am)i see tears and i'm (dm)hurting
and i'm trying not to (f)show what i know must be (g)coming
to(c)night...{eoc}
verse 2
won't you listen i've been talking all night and i'm
tired and i'm hurting inside
i've a feeling and it's tugging my sleeve
are you thinking of leaving tonight?
{sob}ooh ooh girl, your eyes are blue tonight
blue like the midnight skies
are you sad, are you crying
are you walking from me tonight...?{eob}
rep chorus
{/end}
4,788 2008-04-22 19:30:14
Re: "Suddenly See Blues" (11 replies, posted in Songwriting)
as good as it gets, i've got a long memory too, yes i seem to recall those hormone things, my wife soon cured me of that...ha ha ha
nice one, have you recorded it? dont have time to listen now, i'll try the weekend
phill
4,789 2008-04-22 19:23:22
Re: writers block! (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hi kbrassel
all i can say about writers block is, not to force it, if it's there it will come itself.
on the other hand, if you play guitar, try to learn a new instrument, that usually gets my juices flowing.
or, try writing down 20 or so potential titles, then try writing a song around each, some may be crap, but some may also be good.
kapla
phill
4,790 2008-04-22 19:17:17
Re: OUR LADY BY MARCALAN (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hi there maclaren,
having read through your song i honestly did feel uplifted, i guess we've all seen the x files and all those other conspiracy films that come from over the pond, and we brits just dont know what goes on over yonder, and mabe it also goes on here.
my take on "our lady" was of soldiers returning from war, broken and despondent, wondering why the hell have so many of their comrades died and who might profit from their efforts? probably gazing up at the statue of liberty, as they had done on the outward journey, maybe as helena said, thinking of leaving the states and finding somewhere a little quieter like the emerald isle?
i hope i've read it right, but as i have said before, a true song paints pictures in the mind of the beholder, and each beholder sees his own picture. to me this is one of the greats.
if it is a personal story, i hope you find the peace you seek [we all seek]
phill
4,791 2008-04-22 18:59:13
Re: t:title" inspirations" (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hi daddy,
lovely words mate, i feel truly inspired
phill
4,792 2008-04-22 18:57:09
Re: [song]"t:old cowboy joe" (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
HI DADDY, SORRY I'VE BEEN OFF DOING SOMETHING ELSE FOR THE LAST WEEK AND HAVEN'T HAD A CHANCE TO CATCH UP PROPERLY.
BACK TO THE WEST EH? I CAN ALMOST HEAR PINKY AND PERKY SINGING THIS
YIPPYKIAYH
PHILL
4,793 2008-04-19 13:46:16
Re: "Until I Googled You" (9 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hi james,
like the humour, very "happening" theme to the song, seems like all the googles that came up on my name when i tried it some time ago were lawyers and teachers and such, what a boring name?
nice one
phill
4,794 2008-04-19 13:38:54
Re: [song]t:"tobacco torture" (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hi daddy,
i know i'm a little angel [lol] but i've never smoked, i've been playing pubs and clubs for 30 years now, so i guess i'm a top candidate for passive smoking!
strange thing is, since the indoor smoking ban came in last year, i've had more throat and chest problems than i ever had before, even though it's so good to be able to take in a good deep breath every now and then as required!
dont let those weed maggots get you
phill
4,795 2008-04-19 13:16:47
Re: "My Heart Belongs to You" (9 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hi jets,
great song, i like to get the feel of a song by reading the words first, then listening to it. i'm looking forward to that pleasure!
it's a shame that when you get to a certain age, your finally happy with your life, your love and especially your partner, that you start to wonder how much time you've got left together, and that's what i think this song is about. it doesnt matter if that's what your writing about or something completely different as every song tells a different story to each listener, this is what it means to me, to someone else it might mean something completely different, and that's what good song writing is all about. i may be wrong, as this is just my opinion.
well done on a fine emotive song
phill
4,796 2008-04-16 20:27:25
Re: Arthur (6 replies, posted in Songwriting)
ooh how i remember mr wakeman, feel ever so humble just writing his name!
no i've put the park project to one side for a moment, i'm doing a work related course which doesnt leave me a lot of time so i just pop on here for a quick shoofty when i get a minute.
this blinking cold has returned [i'm being polite] i'm coughing and spluttering all over, might have to cancel saturdays gig, shame home turf too.
anyway must go guinivere awaits
phill
4,797 2008-04-14 21:06:07
Re: Arthur (6 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hi arkady,
king arthur is one of my favorite subjects, i've got a shed full of books on the subject so it was a must for me to look at this. loved the recoding.
yer doing well mate keep it up
phill
4,798 2008-04-10 19:57:54
Re: Broken Bones. Bootleger (13 replies, posted in Songwriting)
gnomefry asked "where did you come up with the title"? the broken bones bit, comes in the first verse, and i think bootlegger is Helena's friend. whoever it is, i interpreted this person as an angel of sorts, maybe a nun?
anyway, i would probably have called it "the gift" or "the gift to live without" but it's Helena's song and her choice to call it "broken bones" and i would not change that for the world.
once again Helena, the words sing just in the reading
phill
4,799 2008-04-08 20:30:02
Re: RE; SHATTERED DREAMS (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
such a sad song badeye, flows very well and the rhyme is excellent. i love story songs and this gives the background then the hook at the end. bet it sounds different to the way i played it!
great stuff
phill
4,800 2008-04-02 09:07:04
Re: "Love in Mind" {fiction} (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
so sweet daddy
phill