551

(5 replies, posted in Poems)

that would be so awesome - love to experience it     

Richard 

very nice cover of this song.
I had not heard this for a long time thoroughly enjoyed it !     

Jan - Girl with the golden voice ! She should have been in a recording studio years ago IMHO !

Just leaves it to imagination what she would sound like with a band rather than her Uke (which is very good! )

Jim     

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(2 replies, posted in Songwriting)

A new song I wrote - pretty much thinking about when I was first dating my wife. ( and being scared to tell her those three magic words smile  !!!    I chose the title bc - it seemed to capture  what happened - we've been married 39 years  smile
I borrowed a couple lines from the Bible - but I figured if the Byrds could do a whole song (Turn,Turn Turn) , I could pilfer a couple sentences. smile  Still needs some tweaking - feed back is appreciated !


Here To Stay by Jim Kenyon


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Verse 1




[G]Well I‘ve been too scared to [C]say thatI [G]love you


Oh, I [G]want to, but I’m [C]really not sure [G]how


I guess in [C]love, you don’t need any [G]reasons


But I [D]know that I could [C] use a couple [G]now




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Verse 2


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[G]You and I are far from [C]perfect, as we both[G]know


but we [G]are perfect for each [C] other it now [G] seems


You know it’s [C] love when you can't fall [G]asleep


Because[D] reality is [C] better than my [G] dreams




Chorus


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[C]Love is always patient [G]Love is always kind


[C]Love endures whatever comes it’s [G]way


And it’s [C] always ready to offer trust and[G] comfort



Oh, I [D]surely hope that [C] love is here to [G] stay




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Verse 3


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[G]How you hold me at night, just[C]drives me [G] wild


and your [G]kisses, bring out the [C]hot desire in [G]me


you make me[C] smile even when you’re not [G]around


lost with [D]you for[C]ever, is where I want to [G]be.


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Chorus


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[C]Love is always patient [G]Love is always kind


[C]Love endures whatever comes it’s [G]way


And it’s [C] always ready to offer trust and[G] comfort


Oh, I [D]surely hope that [C] love is here to [G] stay


Oh, I [D]surely hope that [C] love is here to [G] stay


Oh, I [D]surely hope that [C] love is here to [G] stay




555

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Jeff - Love this song - strong message about persevering !  Music sounds terrific - it made me feel like you were putting a voice inside my head to keep on keeping on !  Thanks for sharing.  Jim     

556

(5 replies, posted in Poems)

Peatle
I totally agree with Phill
It is exactly how I feel about my town.
I felt smart reading this as well because you (and Jan ) have already educated me on what a Tui is !  smile

Great poem Peatle - I know bc I have re-read it several times !!
Excellent messages from the heart.

Jim     

557

(14 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Graham

How long does it take to get a band to be able to nail a song completely ?  If you are adding nine songs it must take quite a bit of practice and tweaking.
Have you been playing together a long time.

I ask you these questions bc I know it takes me a long time just to remember the lyrics smile

and as to my critique of the song, I am an expert on bad timing and voicing bc all my songs are that way smile     

I am looking forward to your new posts on the songs !  Once again , I AM SOOOO JEALOUS - I wish I had the talent to be a performer.

Jim     

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(14 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Graham

Sounded great - loved the songs except - knocking on Heavens door. Thought the timing or voicing of the lyrics was off.
Still-  it is awesome you and the boys can do this.. Great sound - lots of fun - I am jealous !

Jim     

559

(26 replies, posted in Poems)

EB

My choice would be d) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nzX4xK6jZaM   
  it's on " ewe" tube !
It's a " shear delight" to hear so many funny thing here.!

Did you know that there are three times as many sheep in Wales as there are people ?
They come in all sheeps and sizes !
You "herd" it here first !

What instument do  Jan and Peatle on Chordie like to play ?   A " ewekulele ".



you guys are all tooooo funny !  If you keep writing all these sheep puns you could win  the 2022  "Woolitzer" Prize !


Thanks for the laughs

Jim     

560

(26 replies, posted in Poems)

Brian
That last line is hilarious !     

561

(26 replies, posted in Poems)

Fantastic Peatle     

the poor guy - doesn't he know the weirdest part of gathering a sheep at a bar, is that on the way out the door - the rest will follow you ?  smile

you are so clever Peatle

really enjoyed it

Jm

562

(9 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Mojo that looks like a real clean machine !  Hope it sounds great for you.

Jim     

Brian Thanks  for the kind words.


Thanks Graham

Here is my version.   I can only imagine how much better you will make it !  Can't wait for that !

https://soundcloud.com/tigljk/everythin … al_sharing     

Brian

Really liked your song

https://soundcloud.com/rough-as-gut/flowers-and-whisky   

I left comment on SC

Great job!

Jim     

OK as usual I couldn't resist the challenge of using them all in an original..... smile
TOMORROW… FLOWERS …WITHOUT… WHISKEY.
so here it is .. bluesy, country song

Everything In The World To Me by Jim Kenyon


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Verse 1


[Em]Seems we’re always waiting for tomorrow


[Em]believing something good will happen then


And [Em]the nighttime whispers better times are coming


but it [B7]never seems to [Am]want to tell you [Em]when


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Verse 2




[Em]So I’ve been living in a world of yesterdays


[Em]Where you only remember things you love


Just [Em] like the smile of a woman who’s gone away


and some [B7] whiskey for [Am] when you’ve had [Em]enough


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Chorus


[Am]So I’m waiting for a new day to make me[Em] happy


And [Am] let my heart feel again what love used to [Em]be



But i [Am] don’t want tomorrow to start without[Em] her


Because she’s[B7] everything in the [Am]world to [Em]me


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Verse 3




Yeah [Em] I loved her like wild flowers love the sun


[Em]But she told me she needed something more


She [Em] said it was something I couldn’t understand


Right as [B7] she turned and [Am]walked out the [Em]door


.


Chorus


[Am]So I’m waiting for a new day to make me[Em] happy


And [Am] let my heart feel again what love used to [Em]be


But i [Am] don’t want tomorrow to start without[Em] her


Because she’s[B7] everything in the [Am]world to [Em]me





Nice one Graham !

Fun song !


Jim     

567

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Jan
Thank you.

That is probably the best description - wish I had of thought of it ! smile

Jim     

568

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Peatle and Phill

Thanks for the kind words.
You are both correct - it is about a wandering soul- but it is actually
in reference to a musician trying to make it and that he can't hold down any real relationship because they are always looking for something else.. 
I happen to be listening a couple days ago to a great podcast called" the day when music became art".
In one chapter Steve Earle talked about running away to Houston at age 14, then going to L.A. at 19 - getting married and then divorced.Moving to NYC and getting married and divorced He then headed to Nashville and later New York. I believe he has been married five times.( so I also thought that the song could be about people that are in and out of relationships { or marriages}  )
The chorus came to me about three weeks ago when a guy I was talking to said his kids were like the breeze, always going from here to there - and it kinda stuck with me.

Anyways - thanks again for the positive comments.  I really wish I was a good singer -  the songs I write sound so much better in my mind than when I record them. Also the fact that I live in "cowboy chordland" ( featuring "the GCD trio":)  - limits what they sound like musically.    It's why I love chordie, bc the kind people here often will do a version of them and make them so much better.

I will put a recording up soon, so get your ear plugs ready !! smile     

569

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Brian

Quite interesting. I would have to understand much more music before I ever attempted to write a progressive rock piece, although it does seem like it would be a really cool thing to do.  There have been some great progressive albums, I have a few.
Thanks for sharing this, I enjoyed the speaker - he knows his stuff.

Jim     

570

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I've had a few of these lines in my head for a while and today they seemed to gel together. This is what I came up with.

On The Breeze by Jim Kenyon


Verse 1


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[G]It’s been two years since I left Houston


And now I’m [C]getting tired of livin' in L.[G ]A.


[G]Thought maybe I’d head East to Nashville


And see if [C]better luck would come my [G]way


.




Verse 2


.


[G]They say the songs there speak of people’s lives


folks are [C]nice, and the girls are so [G]pretty


[G]and hearts there, can make you feel at home


and a man [C]might have a chance in that [G]city


.


Chorus


.


[C]I’m just like songs on the radio, [G]floating on the breeze


[C] running from or to someone,or [G]something that I need


[C] looking for a good time, or a song [G] to put my mind at ease


I’m just [D]like those songs on the radio, just [C] floating on the [G]breeze


.





Verse 3


[G]No one knows what the future holds


Seems so far,[C] that every door’s had a [G]lock


[G]I still don’t know what I’m looking for


so I’ll keep [C]moving ‘til the wind begins to[G] stop


.




Chorus


.


[C]I’m just like songs on the radio, [G]floating on the breeze


[C] running from or to someone,or [G]something that I need


[C] looking for a good time, or a song [G] to put my mind at ease


I’m just [D]like those songs on the radio, just [C] floating on the [G]breeze


.




Slow


[D]just like those songs on the radio, just [C] floating on the [G]breeze


Yeah I’m [D]just like those songs on the radio, just [C]floating on the [G]breeze





https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9DBqlOJAWIs

very interesting     

572

(13 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Phill

Try a little Crown Royal - it's so smooth it doesn't taste like whiskey. 
On Ice with a splash of 7-up or sprite!
I am not a whiskey drinker - don't really care for it - but Crown is delightful once in a while smile

Jim

PS  Still a really good song Jeff !!! smile     

573

(13 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Peatle - Hilarious Joke  !!!!  Love it

Good Stuff Jeff ! I enjoy a little Crown once in a while--- your song is spot on !   Thanks for sharing   Jim     

574

(10 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Colvon

Let your playing make you happy, whatever you play.
They're people here on chordie that are always willing to help.
I see you are from Wales - a couple  others on here I believe are from around there as well.
enjoy your music

Jim

575

(4 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Richard
I had never heard this song before - liked it  - and you played and sang it so well !
Thanks for sharing

Jim