i was curious what makes people click on a song here? why do some get hundreds of hits and some only few? do you follow a certain person or is there something in the title that's makes you look at a post? I have my reasons just wondering what some others are.
552 2015-06-13 17:37:49
Topic: iron bar hotel (0 replies, posted in Songwriting)
https://soundcloud.com/mojo01/iron-bar-hote
ever start a song and ends up some where totally different than where you thought it was going to go?
again apologies for the recording quality it was done on aa lap top
(D)must have been some good times then (G)I just don't recall
(D)all I remember is the (G)whiskey and the brawls
(D)all my daddy left me was a(G) colt 45
(D)an old rusty church key and these(G) brown(A) blood shot(D) eyes
that old rusty church key well it don't turn no locks
the only door it opened was the school of hard knocks
I took that old 45 and I hit the road
I just let it take me any where the wind blowed
wound up in Texas down on Galveston bay
that's where that old 45 led me astray
in a little biker bar just off highway 3
in the smoky yellow lights of the refineries
a 20 dollar pool game well it ended a mans life
I had my daddy's 45 and he had a knife
came with out warning in the parking lot
I didn't have much time to think I just fired one shot
there was lots of good times then as I recall
life wasn't all that bad before I took the fall
lots of time to recollect in my dingy cell
life aint all that great in the iron bar hotel
553 2015-06-07 16:32:34
Topic: where were you (1 replies, posted in Songwriting)
https://soundcloud.com/mojo01/where-were-you
ok here's the recording, sorry for the quality done on my lap top
554 2015-06-06 17:29:02
Topic: where were you when i fell in love (2 replies, posted in Songwriting)
(G) (C) (D)
I saw you across a crowded room
(G) (C) (D)
you looked at me and right away I knew
(G) (C) (D)
the biggest mistake I never made
(G) (C) (D)
was staring at me here today
(G) (C) (D)
where were you when I fell in love
(G) (C) (D)
20 years to late for us
(G) (C) (D)
where were you when I fell in love
(G) (C) (D)
times all wrong damn the luck
(C) (D) (G) (Em) (C)
where were you when I fell in love
(D) (G)
where were you when I fell in love
I've got some one back at home
I promised to lover her alone
your eyes say you've got some one to
who's heart would break in two
where were you when I fell in love
20 years to late for us
where were you when I fell in love
times all wrong damn the luck
where were you when I fell in love
where were you when I fell in love
like two ships passing in the night
we both do what we know is right
we both go our separate ways
wondering what if everyday
where were you when I fell in love
20 years to late for us
where were you when I fell in love
times all wrong damn the luck
where were you when I fell in love
where were you when I fell in love
555 2015-05-20 11:36:16
Re: swept away (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Jim to me it is interesting to see what lines other people like compared to the ones I like the best. some of the lines to me are not that good but hey you have to filler.
thanks every one for the compliments
556 2015-05-20 01:47:20
Re: swept away (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
(Em)I got caught in a (G)rising tide
(D)got swept away had no(Em) where to hide
I could not swim against the currents of life
I could not save myself much less my wife
I was not there when you needed me
on the tide I got swept out to sea
some times I cant find myself
like a broken toy I just sit on the shelf
like a wisp of smoke from a bridge I've burned
an old familiar ghost he has returned
like a specter returned from the grave
fads away like the things that you crave
the things you wanted and the things you need
were blown away I did not hear your plea
in my silence I built a wall
I made you beg I made you crawl
here comes that tide its rising again
when will I learn will I make it all end
I got caught in a rising tide
got swept away had nowhere to hide
557 2015-05-19 21:21:29
Topic: swept away (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
https://soundcloud.com/mojo01/swept-away
I have to start writing happier songs unfortunately it seems to be the bad things in life that inspire me. I guess it just my way of getting it out of my system. any way I am no good at naming tunes either I am open to suggestions on the name
558 2015-05-17 12:18:06
Re: Now I'm Confused (26 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
I walked into my local store with the intentions of buying a nice Martin played several picked up a Taylor 710 and a 510 fell in love and walked out with the Taylor 510. im not saying anything bad about the Martins just that like you I found the Taylor easy to play and liked the sound better.
559 2015-05-15 12:05:09
Re: Alzheimers - Twist on Mojo's lyrics - Creek Don't Run..... (9 replies, posted in Songwriting)
TIGLJK, you are welcome and thank you for your kind words. I like what you did with it
560 2015-05-14 22:12:50
Topic: the creek dont run by cabin no more 2nd attemp (2 replies, posted in Songwriting)
https://soundcloud.com/mojo01/creek-don … in-no-more
ok so I down loaded audacity had another go at it and added a little solo at the end. let me know what you think and suggestions on working with the audacity are welcome
561 2015-05-13 01:28:34
Re: the creek dont run by my cabin no more (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I play it withcapo on second fret
(Am) now the creek don't r(C)un by my c(G)abin no m(C)ore
(Am) cold wind bl(C)owing out si(G)de my front d(Am)oor
nothing but weeds where my cabin once stood
now I wonder these cold darken woods
left my wife and child behind
I went to sea my fortune to find
visions of gold gleamed in my eye
dreams of Spanish plunder and prize
chasing their galleons and stealing there gold
for king and country or so I was told
but a king owes no sailor any loyalty
such is the privilege of being royalty
privateer to pirate is what you will be
when the king revokes your letter of marquee
now the king and his navy have a warrant for me
that is why I have returned from the sea
no one to turn to and no where to go
I have returned to the home I used to know
but there is nothing but dust where I swam in my youth
hard times and change that's the cold honest truth
now the creek don't run by my cabin no more
562 2015-05-12 23:53:24
Re: the creek dont run by my cabin no more (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
ill try that Phil and work on getting the words and chords posted
563 2015-05-11 19:31:20
Topic: the creek dont run by my cabin no more (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
https://soundcloud.com/mojo01/creek-dont-run
here is one I have been fooling around with trying to get the story to make sense let me know what you think, sorry for the quality of the recording it was done on my laptop
564 2015-04-21 08:50:15
Re: beer (23 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
I don't normally not drink on Mondays but it is obvious to that fly died in flight and just happen to fall in your beer in fact I surprised the beer did not revive the fly because after all beer is the temporary solution to any problem
565 2015-03-31 09:16:22
Re: Lyrics Game: What's The Next Line? (25 replies, posted in Poems)
didn't know how to play it but he knew for sure
566 2015-03-13 20:50:32
Re: Coal Black Sadie (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
nice blues sound to it. I played it with E7 A7 and B7 (hope you don't mind) I like it a lot
567 2015-03-11 00:27:12
Re: dont fall for me (6 replies, posted in Songwriting)
easybeat not sure how I did it. to me it doesn't sound that great it was recorded on my lap top microphone (I are a profreshinull recording artist) NOT. just three simple chords with some embellishment on the A chord
TIGLJK yea I like the lizard to found him on yahoo a couple of weeks ago tried to put him on here but the file was to big. tell me how to put in chordify and I will gitther done
thanks for the comments
568 2015-03-10 21:26:20
Topic: dont fall for me (6 replies, posted in Songwriting)
heres another one I don't like the name any suggestions? maybe internet love song? or is it worth naming?
I played it with a capo on the first fret. I left the chorus out between the 2nd and third verses not sure why just though it was to much with it in the song three times. open to suggestions.
https://soundcloud.com/mojo01/dont-fall-for-me
(D) don't fall for(G) me and I wont(D) fall for (G)you
(D)its just a one night (G)thing that we(A) want to do
(D)what you think is(G) love (D)is just a lonely(G) tease
it wont(D) fill your (G)heart or put your(A) mind at ease
(G)so don't fall in (D)love with(A) me
(G)it will only break your (D)heart when I(A) leave
(G)its a losing(D) game your (A)in
(G)one you(A) just cant(D) win
what I want and what you need
just don't matter because I wont be freed
so don't think that you are gonna change my mind
I can see it coming girl im not that blind
though you may have dreamed you never felt my touch
you always had to know the distance was to much
you know im sorry if I left a scar
you know I never meant for to go this far
(G)so don't fall in (D)love with(A) me
(G)it will only break your (D)heart when I(A) leave
(G)its a losing(D) game your (A)in
(G)one you(A) just cant(D) win
(G)a game you will (A)never(D) win
569 2015-02-26 02:28:10
Re: i have one that needs a title (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
TIGLJK you would be correct im not a very good proof reader. im glad you liked it. I was leaning towards battered and bruised or devils brew I will wait on a few more votes
570 2015-02-25 16:44:07
Topic: i have one that needs a title (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
after getting a few suggestions I also realized that besides a title It needed something more so I added another verse I think closes it.
story of my life I guess working the oil field just cant think of a good title any suggestions?
https://soundcloud.com/mojo01/needs-a-name
(G) spent half of my life on the(C) gulfs open(G) waters
(G) the other half drinking(D) trying not to(G) fall
(G) dodging the foot steps(C) left by my(G) father
(G)but I hear the voice of his(D) ghost down the hall
(D)these blood shot eyes are a(C) window
(D)to a soul that's been (C)battered and (G)bruised
(D)I've been scared and left un(C)attended
(D)I've been stained by the(C) devils own(G) brew
now I cant escape the blood in my veins
its part of a curse and it came my name
there aint no reasons for the demons in me
I never saw depression war or disease
these blood shot eyes are a window
to a soul that's been battered and bruised
I've been scared and left unattended
I've been stained by the devils own brew
now I like the whiskey just a little to much
some call it a weakness some call it a crutch
so what if I like to get drunk everyday
I pick up my whiskey my guitar and play
but these blood shot eyes are a window
to a soul that's been battered and bruised
I've been scared and left unattended
I've been stained by the devils own brew
now I walk in the foot steps left by my father
but I cant blame him for the path that choose
each one of us must look in the mirror
and see our own truth that we cannot refuse
571 2015-02-18 16:00:43
Topic: the other side recording (0 replies, posted in Songwriting)
https://soundcloud.com/mojo01/the-other-side
playing with a capo on first fret
572 2015-02-17 15:57:19
Re: first posting (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
573 2015-02-17 15:22:33
Re: Song post (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I have an account I recorded the song straight on to sound cloud
574 2015-02-17 14:55:42
Re: Song post (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
not bad , can you tell me how you posted your link to sound cloud? i would prove to you my singing is much worse than yours but can figure out how to post a link to souncloud
575 2015-02-14 14:08:49
Topic: the other side (0 replies, posted in Songwriting)
ok going to try another one
(D) I go to a quiet place in place (D4) (D) (D4) (D) (G) in my mind
(D) sometimes the silence (D4) (D) (D4) (D) (G) is hard to find
(D) I ask myself a question (D4) (D) (D4) (D) (G) as old as time
(D) the answer to which in this life (D4) (D) (D4) (D) (G) we will never find
(D) they say only God knows (D4) (D) (D4) (D) (G) but he wont say why
(Em) I guess we'll find out (G)on the other(D) side(D4) (D) (D4) (D) (G)
(Em)the truth will find you (G) on the other (D) side(D4) (D) (D4) (D) (G)
some times this guitar it speaks to me
but sometimes the message even I cant see
just some words on a paper they disappear
did anybody listen did anybody hear
I guess we'll find out on the other side
the truth will find you on the other side
sometimes I wonder what's over there
should we even question should we even dare
does it really matter does anybody care
the only one who can answer is the man upstairs
I guess we'll find out on the other side
the truth will find you on the other side
(Em)on the other side(G) on the other(D) side