551

(11 replies, posted in Songwriting)

i was curious what makes people click on a song here? why do some get hundreds of hits and some only few? do you follow a certain person or is there something in the title that's makes you look at a post? I have my reasons just wondering what some others are.

552

(0 replies, posted in Songwriting)

https://soundcloud.com/mojo01/iron-bar-hote
ever start a song and ends up some where totally different than where you thought it was going to go?
again apologies for the recording quality it was done on aa lap top

(D)must have been some good times then (G)I  just don't recall
(D)all I remember is the (G)whiskey and the brawls
(D)all my daddy left me was a(G) colt 45
(D)an old rusty church key and these(G) brown(A) blood shot(D) eyes


that old rusty church key well it don't turn no locks
the only door it opened was the school of hard knocks
I took that old 45 and I hit the road
I just let it take me any where the wind blowed

wound up in Texas down on Galveston bay
that's where that old 45 led me astray
in a little biker bar just off highway 3
in the smoky yellow lights of the refineries

a 20 dollar pool game well it ended a mans life
I had my daddy's 45 and he had a knife
came with out warning in the parking lot
I didn't have much time to think I just fired one shot

there was lots of good times then as I recall
life wasn't all that bad before I took the fall
lots of time to recollect in my dingy cell
life aint all that great in the iron bar hotel

553

(1 replies, posted in Songwriting)

https://soundcloud.com/mojo01/where-were-you
ok here's the recording, sorry for the quality done on my lap top

(G)      (C)                          (D)
I saw you across a crowded room
(G)                 (C)                         (D)
you looked at me and right away I knew
(G)                (C)                (D)
the biggest mistake I never made
(G)            (C)              (D)
was staring at me here today

(G)               (C)                    (D)
where were you when I fell in love
(G)   (C)                (D)
20 years to late for us
(G)              (C)                     (D)
where were you when I fell in love
(G)           (C)                  (D)
times all wrong damn the luck
(C)              (D)                     (G)     (Em)   (C)
where were you when I fell in love
                   (D)                     (G)
where were you when I fell in love


I've got some one back at home
I promised to lover her alone
your eyes say you've got some one to
who's heart would break in two

where were you when I fell in love
20 years to late for us
where were you when I fell in love
times all wrong damn the luck
where were you when I fell in love
where were you when I fell in love

like two ships passing in the night
we both do what we know is right
we both go our separate ways
wondering what if everyday

where were you when I fell in love
20 years to late for us
where were you when I fell in love
times all wrong damn the luck
where were you when I fell in love
where were you when I fell in love

555

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Jim to me it is interesting to see what lines other people like compared to the ones I like the best. some of the lines to me are not that good but hey you have to filler.
thanks every one for the  compliments

556

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

(Em)I got caught in a (G)rising tide
(D)got swept away had no(Em) where to hide
I could not swim against the currents of life
I could not save myself much less my wife
I was not there when you needed me
on the tide I got swept out to sea
some times I cant find myself
like a broken toy I just sit on the shelf
like a wisp of smoke from a bridge I've burned
an old familiar ghost he has returned
like a specter returned from the grave
fads away like the things that you crave
the things you wanted and the things you need
were blown away I did not hear your plea
in my silence I built a wall
I made you beg I made you crawl
here comes that tide its rising again
when will I learn will I make it all end
I got caught in a rising tide
got swept away had nowhere to hide

557

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

https://soundcloud.com/mojo01/swept-away
I have to start writing happier songs unfortunately it seems to be the bad things in life that inspire me. I guess it just my way of getting it out of my system. any way I am no good at naming tunes either I am open to suggestions on the name

558

(26 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

I walked into my local store with the intentions of buying a nice Martin played several picked up a Taylor 710 and a 510 fell in love and walked out with the Taylor 510. im not saying anything bad about the Martins just that like you I found the Taylor easy to play and liked the sound better.

TIGLJK, you are welcome and thank you for your kind words. I like what you did with it

https://soundcloud.com/mojo01/creek-don … in-no-more
ok so I down loaded audacity had another go at it and added a little solo at the end. let me know what you think and suggestions on working with the audacity are welcome

I play it withcapo on second fret
(Am) now the creek don't r(C)un by my c(G)abin no m(C)ore
(Am) cold wind bl(C)owing out si(G)de my front d(Am)oor
nothing but weeds where my cabin once stood
now I wonder these cold darken woods
left my wife and child behind
I went to sea my fortune to find
visions of gold gleamed in my eye
dreams of Spanish plunder and prize
chasing their galleons and stealing there gold
for king and country or so I was told
but a king owes no sailor any loyalty
such is the privilege of being royalty
privateer to pirate is what you will be
when the king revokes your letter of marquee
now the king and his navy have a warrant for me
that is why I have returned from the sea
no one to turn to and no where to go
I have returned to the home I used to know
but there is nothing but dust where I swam in my youth
hard times and change that's the cold honest truth
now the creek don't run by my cabin no more

ill try that Phil and work on getting the words and chords posted

https://soundcloud.com/mojo01/creek-dont-run
here is one I have been fooling around with trying to get the story to make sense let me know what you think, sorry for the quality of the recording it was done on my laptop

564

(23 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

I don't normally not drink on Mondays but it is obvious to that fly died in flight and just happen to fall in your beer in fact I surprised the beer did not revive the fly because after all beer is the temporary solution to any problem

565

(25 replies, posted in Poems)

didn't know how to play it but he knew for sure

566

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

nice blues sound to it. I played it with  E7 A7 and B7 (hope you don't mind) I like it a lot

567

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

easybeat not sure how I did it. to me it doesn't sound that great it was recorded on my lap top microphone (I are a profreshinull recording artist) NOT. just three simple chords with some embellishment on the A chord

TIGLJK yea I like the lizard to found him on yahoo a couple of weeks ago tried to put him on here but the file was to big. tell me  how to put in chordify and I will gitther done

thanks for the comments

568

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

heres another one I don't like the name any suggestions? maybe internet love song? or is it worth naming?
I played it with a capo on the first fret. I left the chorus out between the 2nd and third verses not sure why just though it was to much with it in the song three times. open to suggestions.
https://soundcloud.com/mojo01/dont-fall-for-me

(D) don't fall for(G) me and I wont(D) fall for (G)you
(D)its just a one night (G)thing that we(A) want to do
(D)what you think is(G) love (D)is just a lonely(G) tease
it wont(D) fill your (G)heart or put your(A) mind at ease

(G)so don't fall in (D)love with(A) me
(G)it will only break your (D)heart when I(A) leave
(G)its a losing(D) game your (A)in
(G)one you(A) just cant(D) win

what I want and what you need
just don't matter because I wont be freed
so don't think that you are gonna change my mind
I can see it coming girl im not that blind

though you may have dreamed you never felt my touch
you always had to know the distance was to much
you know im sorry if I left a scar
you know I never meant for to go this far


(G)so don't fall in (D)love with(A) me
(G)it will only break your (D)heart when I(A) leave
(G)its a losing(D) game your (A)in
(G)one you(A) just cant(D) win
(G)a game you will (A)never(D) win

569

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

TIGLJK you would be correct im not a very good proof reader. im glad you liked it. I was leaning towards battered and bruised or devils brew I will wait on a few more votes

570

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

after getting a few suggestions I also realized that besides a title  It needed something more so I added another verse I think closes it.
story of my life I guess working the oil field just cant think of a good title any suggestions?

https://soundcloud.com/mojo01/needs-a-name


(G) spent half of my life on the(C) gulfs open(G) waters
(G) the other half drinking(D) trying not to(G) fall
(G) dodging the foot steps(C) left by my(G) father
(G)but I hear the voice of his(D) ghost down the hall

(D)these blood shot eyes are a(C) window
(D)to a soul that's been (C)battered and (G)bruised
(D)I've been scared and left un(C)attended
(D)I've been stained by the(C) devils own(G) brew

now I cant escape the blood in my veins
its part of a curse and it came my name
there aint no reasons for the demons in me
I never saw depression war or disease



these blood shot eyes are a window
to a soul that's been battered and bruised
I've been scared and left unattended
I've been stained by the devils own brew

now I like the whiskey just a little to much
some call it a weakness some call it a crutch
so what if I like to get drunk everyday
I pick up my whiskey my guitar and play

but these blood shot eyes are a window
to a soul that's been battered and bruised
I've been scared and left unattended
I've been stained by the devils own brew


now I walk in the foot steps left by my father
but I cant blame him for the path that choose
each one of us must look in the mirror
and see our own truth that we cannot refuse

571

(0 replies, posted in Songwriting)

https://soundcloud.com/mojo01/the-other-side
playing with a capo on first fret

572

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

https://soundcloud.com/mojo01/blue-moon

573

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I have an account I recorded the song straight on to sound cloud

574

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

not bad , can you tell me how you posted your link to sound cloud? i would prove to you my singing is much worse than yours but can figure out how to post a link to souncloud

575

(0 replies, posted in Songwriting)

ok going to try another one


(D) I go to a quiet place in place (D4) (D) (D4) (D) (G) in my mind
(D) sometimes the silence (D4) (D) (D4) (D) (G) is hard to find
(D) I ask myself a question (D4) (D) (D4) (D) (G) as old as time
(D) the answer to which in this life (D4) (D) (D4) (D) (G) we will never find
(D) they say only God knows (D4) (D) (D4) (D) (G) but he wont say why
(Em) I guess we'll find out (G)on the other(D) side(D4) (D) (D4) (D) (G)
(Em)the truth will find you (G) on the other (D) side(D4) (D) (D4) (D) (G)


some times this guitar           it speaks to me
but sometimes the message          even I cant see
just some words on a paper           they disappear
did anybody listen         did anybody hear
I guess we'll find out on the other side
the truth will find you on the other side


sometimes I wonder    what's over there
should we even question      should we even dare
does it really matter       does anybody care
the only one who can answer    is the man upstairs
I guess we'll find out on the other side
the truth will find you on the other side
(Em)on the other side(G) on the other(D) side