Peatle, thanks for having a read of my poem, I had to think a bit about that one, a tricky word 
neophytte, thanks for the comments on my poem, lol I was smiling to myself as it came together
Nice acoustic guitar on your song and agree with Tigljk about it being interesting and sounding great with the different strum strokes. I liked the intro to it. I could hear someone in the audience occasionally tapping along in time to your performance, it made me think how much this particular song would be next level with a drumbeat. Good to hear the audience joining in too with their singing. The only thing I would say otherwise, is maybe the vocals could have been a bit louder as the guitar was quite loud and at times overtook your vocals.
easybeat, thanks very much re comments on my poem (wanting to say "me poem" in a Pam Ayers kinda way). 
TIGLIJK, thanks very much for comment as well, a long time since I have written anything poem or song 
That is another brilliant piece of song writing and all the words to boot. I don't know how you do it, but you do. I really hope one of the guys on here or yourself will perform this one as I would like to hear it.