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Brilliant piece of writing skills there Peatle, nicely done Larry deserves a medal for living with that lot Larry probably gets more sense out of the mice he is meant to catch than some of the other rodents living there

Jim, very clever to incorporate all those words, I applaud you.  I like the song itself too and agree with jets, that it definitely has that first love feel to it      

Any more entries for this month? I must admit to struggling a bit with the words this month for some reason.  Hopefully I can still find a song to do for it.

Zurf you're missing in action the last couple of months with your entries to FSOTM.  I always enjoy what you enter.

Roger, you seem to have disappeared to after a good start to FSOTM, hope you can join us again.     

AWESOME Jim, thats amazing!  Yes enter it next month (nearly here already), that would be great      

Happy Birthday Chordie

That was brilliant Peatle, she is a great singer and yes loved the drummer, so cool      

Peatle, thanks for having a read of my poem, I had to think a bit about that one, a tricky word

neophytte,  thanks for the comments on my poem, lol I was smiling to myself as it came together      
Nice acoustic guitar on your song and agree with Tigljk about it being interesting and sounding great with the different strum strokes.  I liked the intro to it.   I could hear someone in the audience occasionally tapping along in time to your performance, it made me think how much this particular song would be next level with a drumbeat.  Good to hear the audience joining in too with their singing.  The only thing I would say otherwise, is maybe the vocals could have been a bit louder as the guitar was quite loud and at times overtook your vocals.

easybeat, thanks very much re comments on my poem (wanting to say "me poem" in a Pam Ayers kinda way).

TIGLIJK, thanks very much for comment as well, a long time since I have written anything poem or song
That is another brilliant piece of song writing and all the words to boot.  I don't know how you do it, but you do.  I really hope one of the guys on here or yourself will perform this one as I would like to hear it.

Any more ideas for next month?     

Peatle,  well written and so right!  Smells, scents of times gone by, somehow form a picture in our minds.  Thats the great thing about our other senses (besides our eyesight), smell, taste, touch, even hearing, brings pictures from our memories to our mind.     

Nicely done Phil, a big thumbs up from me and awesome to hear you putting some of your music up again      

Brian, really nice performance by you and I agree with Peatle, loved the Blues, Country sound to it.  Extra special when it's one of your own songs, played by yourself and sung by yourself.    Well done and you get an award for being the first to start this month on FSOTM once again, awesome