An oldie and a goodie neophytte, nicely covered.     

Zurf wrote:

Hey! That's cool! I really like how you started out with staccato strums and syllables and then worked into a steady strum pattern and straight singing. What a neat arrangement.     

The second song, Early Morning Rain, is a Gordon Lightfoot classic. It's been covered by nearly everyone from the 1970's folk scare, but probably most memorably by Peter, Paul, and Mary.  I love how in this song in the first portion Mr. Lightfoot almost whistfully sings about how the liquor tasted good and the women all were fast. Then at the end of the song, the woman he loves is flying home - quite some distance if it's a three hour flight in a 707 (we are left to presume "she" is a woman and not the aircraft - a beautiful bit of underwriting where the listener fills in the blanks), and he remains behind and practically spits out the phrase "cold and drunk as I can be" and we can imagine him on the ground near the airfield watching the plane leave with her and without him. And we are left to imagine the purpose in her coming was to take him home. It's such a wonderfully written song where he gives no details but provides enough hints for the listener to fill in a complete story.

Thanks Zurf, more accidental on my part rather than skills big_smile
I looked up the song Early Morning Rain by Gordon Lightfoot.  A cool song, I have no idea how I haven't heard it before.     

Phill Williams wrote:

The door opened wide and the child burst in
A tornado in a Macintosh and short pants
Shaking off the rain and clutching his nanna
I love you nan, he said and kissed her cheek
Were off now to Disney land... goodbye, goodbye
Yahoo, he screamed and was gone in a flash
We walked to the door and waved as the car drove away
See you soon, enjoy and closed the door.
Tea? Yeah why not!

Excellent bit of writing there Phill, love it smile  You used all the words and made it work, great stuff smile     

Zurf, really good both of them.  The first song, Bob Dylan,  I knew well and have covered it myself quite some time ago.  But mine was no where as good as yours, your guitar skills are good in this song and I only had the ukulele.   The second song I actually don't know, so it was new to me but you sounded good in it.  Both songs you performed really well vocally and instrumentally. 

Here is my version of it done 5 years ago and sung probably way too fast smile  https://soundcloud.com/ukulelejan/10010135a     

830

(15 replies, posted in Poems)

Cleverly written Phill, the imagery of the poem really came to the fore.  Hope you and your wife recover well from CV.  As for myself, no CV just a stupid cold/flu bug for the last 2 weeks with lots of coughing, which is getting very annoying.     

Loving the suggestions everyone smile

Nice one Grah and I might have ago at your song next month too but it wont sound anywhere as good as what you have done that I can promise you lol     

Loving the suggestions everyone smile     

833

(2 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Another good song by you, very relevant to this crazy world at the moment. I think we all need to laugh more in amongst the turmoil. Great song smile     

834

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

That song definitely made me grin lol, great lyrics smile     

easybeat, nothing wrong with the reverb and nothing wrong with the recordings.  I just think as your voice is reasonably quiet, you probably need to either increase the recording volume on the  vocals or decrease the instrumental recording so it doesn't override your vocals.  Hope that makes sense.     

Grah1,
Very catchy, nicely done once again smile

easybeat,
haven't heard you play banjo in a long time,  good to see you mixing it up.  This one bounced along nicely with the banjo.  I still at times struggle to hear the lyrics, just wondered if you turned the vocals up when recording so your voice is above the instrument would help.   Also, can you re-enter the other song you put up in Suggestions too smile

837

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Love it, you have a talent for song writing for sure.  Will look forward to hearing this one.     

838

(86 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)

JUNE 2022 FSOTM – A DAY OF THE WEEK AND OR NUMBERS

Original thread can be found here:  www.chordie.com/forum/viewtopic.php?id=38366
If you missed out, it's never too late!  You can share a link at the thread above, comment there, etc.!
Here are quick links to member's submissions (if I missed any, please post in the original thread linked above and I'll get this post updated!


Zurf   https://photos.app.goo.gl/dpeciJgQeHb8fk4d6     
Zurf   https://photos.app.goo.gl/MPFAME2K7GF2HqdE8   
zurf    https://photos.app.goo.gl/ykJ4dkSuPsnFDmHn8   
Jandle   https://soundcloud.com/ukulelejan/sunda … oming-down
neophytte   https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jd_Aae98fj4
neophytte    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NXnUekJiq6Q
neophytte    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6M0QsJGpNLc   
Jandle   https://soundcloud.com/ukulelejan/dont- … ch-anymore     

Hi everyone,

So, for AUGUST, looking for SUGGESTIONS for SONGS with the words;
TOMORROW
FLOWER or FLOWERS
WITHOUT
WHISKEY

You can do COVERS, or you can do an ORIGINAL.
NOTE:  If you decide to do an ORIGINAL, feel free to post the lyrics and chords in with your SUGGESTION if you want too and if you would like others to attempt it.

READY!  SET!  GO!

Hiya easybeat and Grah1, thanks for the entries, I haven't had a chance to listen to them yet but will do.  Can you please repost your entries into the JULY FSOTM as this topic is ONLY for SUGGESTIONS and I will be closing it, thanks.     

Hi everyone, here we are already well over halfway through the year!  Time is going way to fast it seems.

For the month of JULY, looking for any SONG with the following words in the lyrics.   These 5 different words are:  DOOR … CHILD …GOODBYE … RAIN … LOVE.

You can perform any song you like, so long as it has at least one of those words somewhere in it.

Some suggestions that have been made by members are:

* Early Morning Rain – by Gordon Lightfoot
* Don`t Think Twice, It`s Alright – by Bob Dylan
* To Her Door – by Paul Kelly
* The Door (Mamma`s Song) – by Jim Kenyon (our very own Chordie member TIGLJK).  The lyrics and chords to this song can be found in the SUGGESTIONS for JULY Topic.

Once again, you can perform any of the above suggestions for this month or you can do a song you have found that may not have been suggested.   As long as it has one or more of those words in the lyrics and you can perform as many songs as you like.

It can be a COVER, ORIGINAL and or INSTRUMENTAL, you decide.  Looking forward to what you all come up with.

READY!  SET!  GO! 

842

(8 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Awesome Richard, you have a good musical history to be proud of.  What a great idea and a good read.     

843

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Love it smile     

844

(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Nicely done mojo, I like the lyrics in this song.  I thought the first version was good too.     

Thanks neo, yep reckon that fits the categories, I will have to go find it and have a listen.

TIGLJK, awesome, you have nailed it with this song (covers all the categories too) but I really like the song as well.  I will definitely give it ago, hopefully I  can come up with something.     

Thanks so much Peatle and TIGLJK for the great feedback, it was a new style for me to try and I enjoyed learning it smile  Yes TIGLJK I agree, I hope one of these days Brian, Peatle and myself get to have a jam together, we did some years ago smile

Sorry for the late response been laid low with coughs and sniffles.     

847

(13 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

TIGLJK I remember them, I saw many of the photos and the music they video`ed smile     

848

(13 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Awww that was touching  Peatle, thankyou, made my day reading that smile 

neophytte and Phill, yep hard when there's no other Chordians near you to catch up with.  Still its nice some of you manage to email and keep in touch via other social media so at least that is something.  I remember the days when mekidsmom used to host an annual event for the Americans that could make it.  That looked like lots of fun.     

Awesome Zurf, some good ones you have suggested smile

Anyone else got some suggestions for us to try next month?     

Here is a song I have done for this month.  https://soundcloud.com/ukulelejan/dont- … ch-anymore