Cheers Dino
1,602 2014-02-28 20:39:11
Topic: Underground train (4 replies, posted in Poems)
At xmas we stayed with my son in London, during this time there were several suicides on the underground ,I was surprised by peoples attitude to these deaths .Most seemed unmoved and unconcerned but were only concerned by the delays to their journeys .I decided to write this poem which I may make into a song at some future date .
Underground train by Graham Windle copyright 01/01/2014 allrights reserved.
Under ground train
You have made me late again
Appointments I must keep
My time it isn't cheap
I cant accept your reasons
Why you lag behind
Why is there a problem
Somewhere down the line .
He left his home this morning
He couldn't stand his life
He found out that his best friend
Had run out with his wife
He took a tube to Euston
He saw the main line leave
There was nothing for him but to sit and grieve
Back down in the subway
The hustle of the crowd
The noise of the commuters
His senses overpowered
The rushing wind approaches
But now he feels so fine
The loudspeaker announces
There's something on the line
Under ground train
You have made me late again
The comments from my clients
Cut me like a knife
Much much more than money
The cost was someone's life.
1,604 2014-02-28 08:33:14
Re: Frantic (16 replies, posted in Songwriting)
here's a better recording of this
1,605 2014-02-27 23:47:13
Re: Doesn't That Look Like Heaven? (13 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Great sound Phill you have a really good voice ,I listened to some of the other stuff too I liked the hanging due tomorrow song ,well done
1,606 2014-02-26 08:10:33
Re: Colonel Clark (2 replies, posted in Bands and artists)
Thanks Dino appreciate the comments . I was a little unsure how this one would be received I've posted it in a few places and so far its all been good .
1,607 2014-02-25 21:17:35
Topic: Colonel Clark (2 replies, posted in Bands and artists)
https://soundcloud.com/graham-windle/colonel-clark
This is an original Anti War Song I wrote for the new year ,Hope it doesn't offend any one .The Character depicted is generic, fictitious and doesn't represent any person living or dead .
1,608 2014-02-23 22:09:40
Re: The Day the Sun Refuses to Hide (14 replies, posted in Songwriting)
well played jeff nice song .
1,609 2014-02-23 12:11:52
Re: The Day the Sun Refuses to Hide (14 replies, posted in Songwriting)
any chance of a vid of you doing this Jeff ?I really like the changes in the pre chorus
1,610 2014-02-19 23:53:59
Re: Only You (7 replies, posted in My local band and me)
nice work ,Just try to sing into the mic ,don't turn away from it and your sound will be a little more consistent in level ,otherwise great first attempt ,looking forward to the next one .
1,611 2014-02-10 01:08:57
Re: There Goes My Everything cover by Jim Jenkins (3 replies, posted in My local band and me)
nice rendition Jim
1,612 2014-02-09 11:22:06
Re: Grey skys just give me the blues (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
The sound cloud stuff is just me and a looper ,The stuff on Reverbnation is mostly the band I play with in Greece" GB Blues "
1,613 2014-02-09 11:19:28
Re: Cheap Champagne (11 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thanks so much .I'm in the uk at the moment I will be playing some stuff in London in march.
1,614 2014-02-08 19:41:03
Re: Grey skys just give me the blues (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thanks for the nice comments Bob glad you like the songs
1,615 2014-02-07 08:29:16
Re: Peace, Love, and Chickenfried Steak (6 replies, posted in Bands and artists)
Delicious
1,616 2014-02-06 18:58:44
Re: Money Talks. (8 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Fits perfectly as a blues song up to the word grin ,write some more verses the lyrics are great
1,617 2014-02-06 17:50:12
Re: Yamaha pacifica (5 replies, posted in Electric)
haven't written yet I must do it soon.
1,618 2014-02-06 09:48:33
Re: GuiTar kit (13 replies, posted in Guitars and accessories)
I thought about buying a kit while here in the UK ,it will be interesting to hear how it goes together and how it sounds when finished .
1,619 2014-02-05 18:57:58
Re: Far, Far Away (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Nice song Jeff been writing about weather myself lately .
1,621 2014-02-03 21:43:39
Re: Criticism (17 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Feed back good or bad is ok as long as people take the time to listen to what you've done
1,622 2014-02-03 00:08:28
Re: Grey skys just give me the blues (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thanks guys its great to get some feed back on these songs .
1,624 2014-01-31 23:58:04
Re: Cups... because, it's happening (5 replies, posted in My local band and me)
nice sound
1,625 2014-01-31 18:40:03
Topic: Grey skys just give me the blues (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Grey skys just give me the blues
Copyright Graham Windle ©2014 All rights reserved
https://soundcloud.com/graham-windle/grey-skys-just-give-me-the
A G D A
You cant always be in the places you choose
A G C D
You cant always hear a piece of good news
A G D A
Hope you'll see the sun come through
G D A
Grey sk iii....ys just give me the blues
A G D A
The old people walk through the city unseen
A G C D
Nobody cares about the places theyve been
A G D A
They go to the market and stand in the que's
G D A
Grey sk iii....ys just give me the blues
A G D A
Trains arrive and then they go
A G C D
The time will pass before you know
A G D A
Solve the puzzle from the clues
G D A
Grey sk iii....ys just give me the blues
( repeat till end )
Play with a rock rythmm