Thanks Dirty Ed it's sounding more promising . ($200 a year! Expensive. I thought Great Britain was the only rip off country to be fair they could have a service worth $200 ) the one in England has a demo service I may try that's what got me intrested and copyright protection.
201 2018-02-25 09:23:27
Re: I'm thinking about joining this organisation (9 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
202 2018-02-25 08:48:52
Re: Lady you've got me going crazy (21 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Cheers Peatle Jville I was going for a fun upbeat sound, but I love what Baldguitardude has done with it too,a more laid back feel.
203 2018-02-25 07:53:08
Re: Lady you've got me going crazy (21 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Baldguitardude I like it very much. Its slower but in a good way I was a bit disappointed that it was just the one verse. But I love how you sing it and your guitar arrangment fits well with the song. I'd love to hear how you would arrange the whole song. Thank you Joe I enjoyed that. I'm off to sound cloud to listen again.
204 2018-02-24 17:31:18
Re: Nothing Left to Hold But the Throttle (19 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Great song deadeye good lyrics playing and voice if I had one negative thing to say it that the guitar drown out the voice a bit. But apart from that excellent.
205 2018-02-24 10:52:42
Re: POST #3000 (16 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Congratulations Tenement Funster.
206 2018-02-24 10:49:26
Re: I'm thinking about joining this organisation (9 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Thanks for you advice Peatle Jville I don't have a Facebook account but my brother has so I'll have look through his.
207 2018-02-23 20:54:22
Re: I'm thinking about joining this organisation (9 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Cheers Phill,I'll tread carefully then. Thanks for the quick reply.
208 2018-02-23 20:23:56
Topic: I'm thinking about joining this organisation (9 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
I'm thinking of joining The Guild of International Songwriters & Composers.
Is anyone on here a member?
209 2018-02-23 18:21:34
Re: Lady you've got me going crazy (21 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Cheers Baldguitardude no I don't mind at all. I don't feel I do it justice and would love to hear your recording. Thank you for asking.
210 2018-02-23 16:22:30
Re: Lady you've got me going crazy (21 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I just done a short rough recording so you can see how it sounds. Be kind it was hard for me to sing this nearly gave up.
211 2018-02-23 13:22:50
Topic: Lady you've got me going crazy (21 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I was inspired to write this song because of the
Overwelming feelings I have for a woman I know.
Capo 1st fret
Lady, you’ve got me going crazy
Verse 1
F
I knew you was special, from the moment I saw you
Am Bb/Gb C
I just wanted to hug and adore you, I feel so happy in your company
F Am
Just one look in your eyes and I start to fantasise
Bb/Gb C
That you are there laying, close, naked, next to me Oh, Oh, Oh,
Chorus
F Am
Lady, you’ve got me going crazy
Bb/Gb C
This passion is so hot it’s filling up inside of me
F Am
I’m drowning, save me! Come on and save me!
Bb/Gb C
I want you so bad, it’s getting hard to breathe,
C7 F
Every time we meet
Verse 2
F
Life is too short if there’s a chance we should take it
Am Bb/Gb C
Jump on in I know we can make it, let’s get drunk on this sexual chemistry
F Am
I don’t want to take it slow, I want to let it blow
Bb/Gb C
It feels so good every time your body's close to me, Oh, Oh, Oh,
Repeat Chorus
F Am
Lady, you’ve got me going crazy
Bb/Gb C
This passion is so hot it’s filling up inside of me
F Am
I’m drowning, save me! Come on and save me!
Bb/Gb C
I want you so bad, it’s getting hard to breathe,
C7 F
Everytime we meet
F Am
Just one look in your eyes and I start to fantasise
Bb/Gb C
That you are there laying close naked next to me,oh oh oh
Repeat Chorus
F Am
Lady, you’ve got me going crazy
Bb/Gb C
This passion is so hot it’s filling up inside of me
F Am
I’m drowning, save me! Come on and save me!
Bb/Gb C
I want you so bad, it’s getting hard to breathe
C7 F
Zoe sleep with me.
©Trevor Scrivens 22/02/2018
212 2018-02-23 07:29:45
Re: Bad Moon Rising - #Cover (14 replies, posted in My local band and me)
Lovely voice and great playing and a good cover Jandle. I hope to here more from you on your electric guitar.
213 2018-02-22 13:00:00
Re: rebel man (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Good song mojo01 Good words,excelent playing and voice.
214 2018-02-21 08:03:59
Re: The Lone tree (22 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thanks Jandle this song is close to my heart being it's about one of my kin. If I can get the money together I would like to get it recorded proffessinaly.
215 2018-02-21 07:59:11
Re: The Lone tree (22 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Cheers mojo01 it was a pain to write, fitting the story in without over doing it . I think I got It right and it was also weird writing a song without a chorus.
216 2018-02-20 13:40:27
Re: The Lone tree (22 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thank you for your kind coment.Much appreciated Tenement Funster. I would say the monster these days is already in our back yard.
217 2018-02-19 13:42:49
Re: The Lone tree (22 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thanks DE . Intresting story about your great grandfather. I would love to hear your song if you recorded it. All those monuments to the civil war being pulled down in the name of political correctness is so wrong. They start that here and there will be hell to pay.
218 2018-02-19 11:55:46
Re: The Lone tree (22 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thanks ark In our world of blame and hedonistic pusuits I wonder how long it will be before they are fogotten or they pull down their monuments as is happening in America at moment in the south. Absolutely wrong and I for one will fight to the death to stop it happening to ours.
It's miracle anyone come back from that carnage and those that did had lost limbs suffered shell shock and probably had horrific nightmares. How could anyone live with the hell they witnessed ? They were a special breed of men.
219 2018-02-19 10:55:51
Re: The Lone tree (22 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Phill I think Gallipoli was Winston Churchhills biggest disaster lucky for him his atempt on the beaches of France in ww2 went better.
Way back in time king to common man fought together unlike now a days they are not so honorable.
220 2018-02-19 09:31:03
Re: The Lone tree (22 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Peatle Jville My other great grandfather William Scrivens fought at Gallipoli and he returned home to later see off my grandfather Frederick Scrivens at the beginning of world war 2. It's a tradition of old Kentish families going back to Saxon times to be first into battle. It was once a privilege given by a king. I still have a original photo taken of him and two mates. A cherished item.
221 2018-02-19 07:22:39
Re: The Lone tree (22 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thank you Jim , My aunt has been looking into the past family members and had left a folder with my Father with all the infomation she had found out. In there was a page written called the fighting Farnes as I read it these words stuck in my head "The lone tree" (the actual tree was cut up for keepsakes but they planted a replacement on the very spot) I said to my dad I'm gonna go home and write a song for Joseph and this is the result. It is something that touches the heart and soul of every European also some from other parts of the world that fought along side us. I just hope I've done him justice.
222 2018-02-18 22:37:35
Re: The Lone tree (22 replies, posted in Songwriting)
These words are used here to on remembrance day. They shall grow not old, as we that are left grow old:
Age shall not weary them, nor the years condemn.
At the going down of the sun and in the morning,
We will remember them. Thanks for posting I've never read the whole poem before. Very moving.
223 2018-02-18 21:05:10
Re: The Lone tree (22 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thank you Peatle Jville much appreciated. The picture on sound cloud is pastel done by a soldier of the actual tree where Joseph and meny others died.
Harry patch "The last fighting tommy " said the truth : War is organized murder and nothing else” ...“Politicians who took us to war should have been given the guns and told to settle their differences themselves, instead of organising nothing better than legalised mass murder.” ...“Irrespective of the uniforms we wore, we were all victims”
I wanted to honor one of my greater family ,men and women I have great respect for I have pictures on my mantle of some of them. People come over don't understand why ,they say you didn't know them.I just say they are part of who I am and that's enough.
Thank you for your imformative post. Like you say there are meny stories like Joseph's." Lest we forget"
224 2018-02-18 18:40:36
Re: The Lone tree (22 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thank you Phill, he lost his other brother Robert Farnes too when the Hythe had collision with another ship. Sad time for all.I just posted a first time singing it so a few mistakes but you'll get how it goes.
225 2018-02-18 16:00:23
Re: Throw Away The Swords (12 replies, posted in Songwriting)
TIgljk A good song I look forward to hearing it. like you I think America should keep there guns just don't let mentally ill people buy them. I can understand how he was reported and the FBI couldn't find him ,something stinks about it.