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(12 replies, posted in Poems)

Piri no doubt that would be one of Larry's favorite instrumentals. I'm sure Larry not being a cat of money wouldn't care less about the new Prime Ministers billionaire status.
Will the new PM still be living at Number 10 this Christmas a week is a long time in politics nowadays.
Jan your right Larry deserves a medal. I see on  youtube he has taken to chasing Foxes away . I hope it wasn't Basil Brush.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YvZZyoz9Gs8

TIGLJK wrote:

OK FOLKS- here it is- my recording of the song I wrote.

I hope you like it.  I had a lot of fun writing it.

Jim

https://soundcloud.com/tigljk/last-night

Jim I could imagine that song being used in a movie scene with a man with a bad hangover getting up in the morning.     

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(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Piri, in the last few weeks two young ladies I worked with before I retired have had their life's cut short by cancer. Your lyrics for me capture how people are feeling at this time over the loss of these two. A brilliant piece of song writing in a good but not over complicated way. I look forward to hearing you do this song.

Thank you to you all on Chordie.

Who I have interacted with in my short seven years' time on Chordie.

You have taught me a lot everyone.

Before my time on here 2O years ago on October 25th.

The internet gave birth to chordie.

A time when many were flocking to online.

A new opportunity to share on how it can be done.

Quickly growing in numbers with a diverse bunch posting on how it is done or questions on how it could be done.

Strum or finger picking guitar information for everyone.

A new frontier town, Chordie, with many flocking in.

People from all around the world came here mining for musical gold.

Then after the musical gold rush many left town.

Now there is only a few of us around.

Hope those out there with guitars and other instruments.

Will find out that here is a place where the good people are.

So here I am raising a glass to the future and past.

Happy Birthday Chordie.

Hi
This Tuesday October 25th is Chordie's  twentieth birthday. 

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(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Well written Jim, I look forward to hearing it in November.     

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(12 replies, posted in Poems)

Cheers everyone I love your comments New Zealand is a wonderful country with mostly good people but like the rest of the world we are groaning under the pain of the foolishness of humanity. Our politicians from both sides are losing their way it's a bit hard to write about in a few words here as it is a very complex thing to explain. Basically, our schools, hospital and infrastructure is broken with all these committees talking about it but no real action at the coal face. Most of our farmers have been pouring money and work into making sure their farms are ecologically sound. Instead of rewarding farmers for being good environment stewards the government has come up with a new proposed extra special tax for farmers to make life harder for them than what it is now.  Farmers are the economic backbone of NZ and that is where most of our overseas earning come from. The positive thing people are starting to say enough is enough and hopefully this will mean that some commonsense people might rise up to stop this madness but who knows. Unfortunately, in our school kids are being taught to believe absolute rubbish and it's making them think that the farming sector is to blame for all sorts of things. If the proposed tax and herd reductions go ahead, it would be ruinous to many farmers and our country. The kids here love to eat but they are ignorant about where the food on their plate comes from. So, we need Larry from number 10 to come and sort us out also LOL. We need the Uk and the USA to do well because what happens in your country affect us as well. So, if your economy catches a cold and sneezes, we in NZ end up with a financial situation that is like a bad flu and pneumonia. I will attach a link to the Wikipedia page about Larry who is a real cat at 10 Downing Street.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Larry_(cat)     

Grah good humour not only in your songs but also your banter with the crowd.     

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(12 replies, posted in Poems)

Cheers Brian and Piri it is so surreal what's happening with the British politically powerful I really don't know what to make of it.     

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(12 replies, posted in Poems)

Number 10 Larry

Little furry Larry.

Sometimes with that aimless look photographed in the press.

In his natural furry dress.

Has had lots of problems to address.

Making himself famous.

Amongst all the political mess.

He has had a lot of responsibility to carry.

Does Larry.

In his time at Number 10.

Under his four powerful paws.

He’s had four Prime Ministers .

Enter his residential doors.

From Cameron to Liz Truss.

He is a residential must.

He keeps their secrets and doesn’t break their trust.

In amongst all the turmoil and flurry.

The last one he  got rid of in a hurry.

He’s not a doggy purr son.

Its not his scene.

Because of that he never visited the Queen.

To him her Majesty’s dogs were obscene.

He felt  far more important in his cat arrogance above those animal things.

In his years at Number 10.

Influential night time parties.

Legal and illegal meetings now and then.

Many glad he couldn’t put paper to pen.

Under him this little thing he has, had more Prime Ministers than our King.

King Charles The Third hasn’t yet met Larry The First.

Or be subject to his meows and purry outbursts.

He has posed with Trump and Obama.

Breaking through the Presidential security armour.

Little furry Larry.

Is a quiet political charmer.

In amongst all the drama he has his own karma.

The press has said Larry the cat is here to stay.

At fifteen years of age, he hasn’t got much to say.

He is happy living his life without no pay.

Will number five at Number10 get Larry’s blessing.

Or will he keep us guessing. 

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(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Good one Jeff sometimes it is tricky addressing our future demise.     

Jim. that is brilliant how you composed your tronic or elec song using all the words for October's chordies song of the month.

Here is a water song I like by Kiwi songwriter Brooke Fraser. it's too hard for me to cover. Check out the drummer in this video a very original and subtle style of playing. Maybe someone will cover this song Something In The Water.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_7NsyxBzd8c     

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(10 replies, posted in Recording)

Piri I think the track sounds real good as it is as it has a nice stripped back feeling to it.

Nice one Richard.     

Jandle wrote:

Well, I struggled with the word ELECTRONIC for this month's FSOTM, so I wrote this instead. 

ELECTRONIC Poem

I been thinking about songs
Using the word ~electronic~
It had me bamboozled
Something chronic.
I tried to make it harmonic
Something iconic
But nothing came to me
My ideas very embryonic.
So, I sat down and visualised it
It had to be symphonic
Pictured it all lit up
All ~electronic~
Then the word faded
As I sipped my gin and tonic
Oh well, I will go watch my Panasonic.

Wow Jan your poem is pure genius.     

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(9 replies, posted in Poems)

Good one Piri, I’m a burble purple verbal turtle after a few drinks. Here is a link to that good old Sheb Wooley song "The Purple People Eater.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5jV-E09efRE


Jim.
Those are good words from you. I often wonder what the meaning is behind or what is the Blue Moon of Kentucky ? Donovan used colours in a couple of his songs. Mellow Yellow and that other song Colours. I like that expression leading a colourful life. Growing up people here use to say it's good to eat plenty of greens meaning vegetables. With Supermarkets taking over the old Green grocer shops are now few and far between the same as Butcher shops. Back to music and colours Fleetwood Mac "The Green Manalishi (With the Two Prong Crown)" Of course don't forget Bluegrass Music. What is Bluegrass I guess it's not the stuff people smoke LOL? I suppose the grass is bluer on the other side.

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(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Excellent lyrics Jim and so true the future so quickly has become the past. There is so many stories that can be conjured up with that line in your song, "I see your smile, but your sadness shows."     

Thats a good set of retail songs there Grah with a nice bit of humour.     

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(9 replies, posted in Poems)

Cheers Jan thank you for taking the time to read my poem and make a comment. My sister over in Canada has her eightieth birthday this Sunday. She sent me a photo over email just before showing a picture with some purple lavender roses given to her by her neighbour for her birthday this weekend. It got me thinking back in the old days to see that someone would have had to paint a picture of her and the roses taking ages then ship it to me. Now we can take a picture and send it around the world in an instant. I read a lot of history books and the picture sent my mind of on a tangent just now thinking about the colour purple today. Purple was the colour of royalty to the ancient Romans it came from a lengthy process involving snails making it expensive. The source of the dye was the mucus produced by predatory sea snails found in the Mediterranean Sea. Purple dye cost about half a Roman soldier’s annual salary, or some say the equivalent of the cost of a diamond engagement ring today.

Purple the colour of ancient Roman royalty.

Purple from an empire that’s gone.

Purple roses and my sister in a picture sent across the world.

Purple I can see in an instant

Purple Rain, Prince

Purple Haze, Jimmy Hendrix

Purple the word in a email on paper or heard in a song.

Purple from back in time and far away in a picture.

Purple roses with a scent that can’t be sent.

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(9 replies, posted in Poems)

Thank you, Brian, Piri and Jim I love your feedback on my nostalgic words.

When I look around there is a world today that is full of sad vain shallow people grasping at the wind trying to show their real value. In my opinion. In the fifties and sixties in the free world most of us who were around then can reflect on a simpler but more satisfying way of life. This is what I was trying to capture in the poem. As expectations rise the happiness level drops the more you get the less you have got mentality. I won't take away from some people that they are experiencing tough times today but when I look at the people older than me who went through the worldwide depression and war they never gave up. My generation was the benefactor of that determination as our elders had to carry on and not give up.  I guess its human nature to have a sentimental longing or wistful affection for a period in the past: Even as time progresses that will stay the same I guess and we all remember the good bits even though in that time the world wasn’t perfect and not everyone had a good time.

Grah you cover Joe's ( Mojo) excellent well written song well. The camera work and recording make me feel like I'm in the audience there enjoying your performance while watching the people outside the window walking past the Bank on the other side of the road.

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(9 replies, posted in Poems)

Here is a looking back in time poem I wrote.

If Only I Could

If only I could take a photo of the smell of leather.

In a leather jacket shop.

If only I could take a photo of the sound of clicking typewriters.

Old women sitting in rows in a typing pool quietly sitting up straight.

All like children in a strict school room not allowed to speak.

If only I could take a photo of my father's mother’s laughter.

If  only I could take you back to my mother’s , mother's old village.

A place where poor people could teach you how to be rich.

If only I could take a photo of the aroma  of communal food.

If only I could take a photo of the sound of laughter and joy from when I was a boy.

I’m sure you would understand simple joy. 

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(7 replies, posted in Poems)

Brian and Piri that is brilliant.

Funny bird talk of the avian kind.

Great banter guys thank you.



I like my birds without feathers.

Well cooked upon my plate.

Not some dodgy poultry.

Cooked by a chef committing adultery.

On a big breasted chicken.

Laid upon my plate.

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(7 replies, posted in Poems)

Here is a poem I wrote about celebrity.
Reality Star

Reality TV stars you might as well be from Mars.

Flash cars, red carpets and stars.

Glossy looking covers with nothing  in between.

Celebrity celebrity its all very vain.

Celebrity celebrity its all very vain.

Mindless stuff that drives me insane.

She’s  an influencer on the internet.

Her father was a supermarket tabloid prophet.

Good friends regulars at the plastic surgeon’s office.

Mumma behind the camera making sure all looks nice in artificial paradise.

No one sees when he drinks he’s not very nice.

Celebrity celebrity its all very vain.

Celebrity celebrity its all very vain.

Mindless stuff that drives me insane.

Tell all books about nothing but looks.

Spending money on drugs supplied by crooks.

Time in rehab is part of the ride.

Don’t worry says the accountant.

Many celebrities make more money when they die.

Press cameras love the downward slide.

Celebrity celebrity its all very vain.

Celebrity celebrity its all very vain.

Mindless stuff that drives me insane.