Topic: If Love...

If love is a gift, I thank you for giving
If love is a vision, it's you that I see
If love is a flower, come walk in my garden
If love is a song, come sing it with me.

If love is a road, let's walk it together
If love is a river, I drown in its flow
If love is a feeling, I know that I love you
If love is a thought, you're all that I know.



To Judith

Re: If Love...

nice one stonebridge,

well thought out and executed specially; "if love is a flower come walk in my garden"

trouble is; we will all expect more from you now...keep em coming

phill

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

3 (edited by Stonebridge 2009-08-07 09:36:34)

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Thanks Phill
I don't normally write poems or lyrics, I stick to the tunes and music.
This is probably the only "poem" I've ever sat down and written with the intention of it being just that. A poem, rather than a song.
It was written about 10 years ago when I met "Judith". I found it in a text file on my old computer and thought I would share it.
Judith and I are still together. smile

PS. It probably could be made into a nice love song, but I'm too close to the words to do it. Whenever I try to think about a tune, all I hear is tunes I already know from other, famous, love songs. It's really strange.
I'll leave it to someone else to set. All welcome...

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wow, that is a perfect gem, absolutely beautiful.  I now have tears in my eyes, soppy old gal that I am.

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Stonebridge, That was really very captivating... That would make any ladies heart melt! xx