1 (edited by Jody Wayne 2011-04-24 01:42:28)

Topic: I Wish This Sad Song Wasn't Mine

I wanted to write a sad country song, so I did.  Now there is a song titled: "I Wish This Sad Song Wasn't Mine", that is mine.

This is the product of one years worth of work.  I hope you enjoy it.

***See the re-written version below.***


I Wish This Sad Song Wasn't MineBy Wayne Fiala


[D]If whiskey flowed down Whiskey [G]River,


I'd drink that river [D]dry.


Then fill it back up a[A]gain,


with these tears from my [D]eyes.




I saw you at Whiskey [A]River,


kissin your ol' [D]friend.


You look happy in his [A]arms.


Guess you're still in love with [D]him.




"Girl", you're married to a[G]nother.


What you're doin just ain't [D]right.


I saw him cryin in a bar [A]room,


drinkin whiskey half the [D]night.


(Short Brake)




He took off his wedding [A]ring.


Said I don't want this [D]thing.


He downed a shot of [A]whiskey,


then I heard him [D]sing:




I drink my whiskey from a [G]bottle,


one shot at a [D]time.


While I'm singing to the bar-[A]maid,


I wish this sad song wasn't [D]mine.


I get my lovin from the bar-[G]maid,


one shot at a [D]time.


While I'm singing to the [A]whiskey,


I wish this sad song wasn't [D]mine.


(Short Brake)




He slipped the bar-maid a [A]twenty.


Rolled up in it, was his [D]ring.


As the bar-maid poured more [A]whiskey,


she cried when she heard him [D]sing:




Girl, you're married to a[G]nother.


What you're doin just ain't [D]right.


Now, I'm cryin in a bar [A]room,


drinkin whiskey half the [D]night.


If whiskey flowed down Whiskey [G]River,


Lord, I'd drink that river [D]dry.


Then fill it back up a[A]gain,


with all these tears from my [D]eyes.


I drink my whiskey from a [A]bottle.


I wish this sad song wasn't [D]mine.


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Re-write,  "I wish This Sad Song Wasn't Mine" v2




(Intro)


[D]We saw you down by the [A]River,


Dancin with your old boy [D]friend.


You looked happy in his [A]arms.


Are you still in love with [D]him?




(Bridge)


Girl, you're married to my [G]brother.


What you're doin just ain't [D]right.


I found him cryin in a bar [A]room,


drinkin whiskey half the [D]night.




(Very Short Brake)




(Verse 1)


He was blurry eyed and [A]cryin.


Oh.. Oh.. Tear drops fell like [D]rain.


He was fallin ap[A]part,



when he tried to sing: Her Cold Cold [D]Heart.




(Verse 2)


Then he looked me in the [A]eye.


Said: I've lost her to that other [D]guy.


She traded me for [A]lust.


She'll never know the tears it's [D]cost.




(Chorus 1)


And if whiskey flowed down Whiskey [G]River,


I'd drink that river [D]dry. Oh.. Oh.. Oh..


Then fill it back up a[A]gain,


with all these tears from my [D]eyes.




(Chorus 2)


I could jump right in that [G]river!


and swim from shore to [D]shore.




"that's for sure"


Then just keep on [A]goin.


I cain't take this pain no [D]more!




(Short Brake)




(Verse 3)


He took off his wedding [A]ring.


Said I cain't wear this [D]thing.


We downed a double [A]shot,


and kept on drinkin while he [D]sang:




(Verse 4)


I drink my whiskey from a [G]bottle,


one shot at a [D]time.


While I'm singing to the bar-[A]maid,


I wish this sad song wasn't [D]mine.




(Verse 5)


I get my lovin from the bar-[G]maid,


one shot at a [D]time.


While I'm singing to the [A]whiskey,


I wish this sad song wasn't [D]mine.




(Short Brake)




(Verse 6)


He slipped the bar-maid a [A]twenty.


Rolled tightely in it, was his [D]ring.


As the bar-maid unrolled [A]it,


she wept when she heard him [D]sing:




(Bridge 2)


Girl, you're married to me [G]now.


What you're doin just ain't [D]right.


You've got me cryin in bar [A]rooms,


drinkin whiskey half the [D]night.




(Chorus1)


If whiskey flowed down Whiskey [G]River,


I'd drink that river [D]dry.


Then fill it back up a[A]gain,


with all these tears from my [D]eyes.




(Outro)


I drink my whiskey from a [A]bottle.




(Speak) Whiskey River...


I wish this sad song wasn't [D]mine.



Re: I Wish This Sad Song Wasn't Mine

Hey Jody - Good/Sad song...I heard it in my head in a kind of Willie & Waylon style...I think the Whisky ref led me there.

J  E  T  S
...and yet a Washington Commanders fan (unless they change their name again) ...long story...HTT...C

Re: I Wish This Sad Song Wasn't Mine

I agree with Jets... my favorite line:
"If whisky flowed down Whisky River,
I'd drink that river dry.
Then fill it back up again,
with all these tears from my eyes."

Good lyrics!  I like it bunches, and simple chords to boot!

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What constitutes excellent music is in the ears of the listener.

Re: I Wish This Sad Song Wasn't Mine

hi jodie,
my favourite line is "I wish this sad song wasnt mine" i think that speaks words, of-course your glad it is yours...

phill

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

Re: I Wish This Sad Song Wasn't Mine

Wiskey tears and broken dreams seem to be related nice wording Jody smile

"Growing old is not for sissies"

Re: I Wish This Sad Song Wasn't Mine

Hey jody
You certainly work at a song and the lyrics it just get better each time.
Hope you can record sometime.
Well done
ark

Re: I Wish This Sad Song Wasn't Mine

Hi Jody,

Well you know i like your writings as theres always a good story in there.
This piece has all the Jody markings.

Good stuff sir..

Ill chech the tube to see if it recorded..

Old Doll.

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !