1 (edited by Rooster3 2007-05-20 00:32:25)

Topic: My Troubled Angel

Hey everybody...I'm new to the website so, hello!..Would ya'll look over a song i wrote for a girl a while ago when she was having a rough patch.  I hoped ya'll could tell me what you think.
Thanks.

My Troubled AngelStitcher


Copywrite: Blake Stitcher




INTRO – [E], [A], [G] [F#], [E] [B7], [E]




Verse 1:


She [E]swears that she, just can’t [A]take it anymore,


The way the [D] world is [A] pushin’ down on [E]her.


When both [E] time and the world [A] seem like they’re too much,


That’s when she [D] sees life not like a [A]gift but just a [E]curse.




Chorus:


[E]When she’s fallin’ fast in the troubles of life,


And when her [A]wings to fly won’t spread and nothing’s goin’ right,


I’ll [D]spread my arms to [A]herand


Pull her [E] close so that she won’t fall.


[E] And though her tears may fall down from heaven above,


And the [A] sky cloud over and block out the sun,


I’ll [D] catch her and give her a [A]shoulder on which to [B7]cry,


And I’ll just [A] hold my troubled angel [B7] who can’t [E] fly.





Verse 2:


My [E] Troubled Angel, is [A]freefallin’ down,


Through the [D] dark [A] clouds to the [E] ground.


Her Wings are [E] broken hearted and she [A] can’t spread them to fly,


Come fall in my [D] arms troubled [A] angel, I’ll [E] Love you tonight.




Chorus




Bridge/Interlude:




[A] She can’t stop tumblin’ down through the [E] layers of sky


And the [D] clouds [A] part to [G, F#]let her through[E]


Because the [A] loving winds that blow to [E] help her fly


Can’t [D] heal a broken [A] heart over – [B7}night…




Chorus




That's basically it except for a few add-ins here and there...

"Fly on Proud Bird, At Last You Are Free"
-Charlie Daniels

Re: My Troubled Angel

Hello Rooster3 and welcome to chordie!  I like the imagery and message of your song.  Would love to hear the recording when you get it done.  Hope to see more of your stuff when you get a chance.  James

"That darn Pythagorean Comma thing keeps messing me up!"
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Re: My Troubled Angel

thats class lyrics right there...seriously i like it...she'll prob love it!*!*

Re: My Troubled Angel

Sounds great - lyrics kind of remind me of she talks to angels by black crows which is one of my favorite songs. Would love to see/hear the finished product.

J  E  T  S
...and yet a Washington Football Club fan ...long story...HTT...WFT

Re: My Troubled Angel

Wow nice song,that should help mend a broken wing.I'm gonna try it again.

Good luck...Badeye.

one caper after another

Re: My Troubled Angel

Hello Rooster3,

That is a wonderful song you have there and it should melt your ladies heart. I too would love to hear the finished version when you have recorderd it.

I do keep a MySpace site, Friends of Chordie, especially and exclusively for Chordie members to use. You are more than welcome to have it posted there if you wish.

Contact me on: roger4songs@yahoo.co.uk  if you would like to do so.

Well done and thank you,

Roger

"Do, or do not; there is no try"

Re: My Troubled Angel

Hi Rooster3,

From an Old Doll,   " those words are beautiful "  I have read your words over and over.   I had tears in my eyes at

your understanding of where this lady is coming from ! I don't need to know what age you are , but to me they are

wise words.. "The wisdom of an old soul.." I would buy this song if and when released.  Have you written any more

songs ?.

Slan

Old Doll

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !

8 (edited by Rooster3 2007-05-13 12:05:12)

Re: My Troubled Angel

Hey  lena.odonovan@gmail.com!  I would have called you by your username but i didn't see another one.. I'm 19 and yes ma'am i've written a few more.  i wrote one for a girl who i knew that donated her hair to an organization that made wigs for those that were undergoing chemotherapy and i've written a few more also...  Thank you so much for your appreciation of my song...I have it posted on another website at countrytabs.com  - here's the link to that page. 
http://www.countrytabs.com/viewmp3.asp?id=1134
just copy and paste it into the area up top!  When you get to the page, just click on "Stitcher - My Troubled Angel" and it'll come up for you to listen to.  I don't think you have to "save target as" like it says.  I think you can jus clickon it but if not you can "Save target as" and it'll download shortly for you to listen to.  Once again,thank you.

"Fly on Proud Bird, At Last You Are Free"
-Charlie Daniels