• Registered: 2012-03-21
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Topic: i have been playing this in my mind for years. New to the site.

I was born in December 1952
Second boy child born to Walt and Lou
Eairliest childhood memory
was being yanked out of school
heading for California
for the rent check was due

I grew up a angry child
as we never settled down
every time I'd make a friend
we would move to another town

I swore if i ever
had me a son
I never would do what my daddy had done

Well i have me a son
and what have i done
it seems that i am my father's son

still working on another verse
have been playing G C Am D

  • dino48
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Re: i have been playing this in my mind for years. New to the site.

Lyrics are good so far,hope too see the rest of it out soon.

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  • From: Gainesville, Virginia USA
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Re: i have been playing this in my mind for years. New to the site.

dino48 wrote:

Lyrics are good so far,hope too see the rest of it out soon.

Yep - what Dino said - You got the makings of a good song....and a good country song at that.  smile

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  • Registered: 2012-03-21
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Re: i have been playing this in my mind for years. New to the site.

Thanks . i seem to be stuck, i have wrote two or three ending's but they just do not feel right. what i have so far came out in one night and then nothing!!!

  • Registered: 2012-01-23
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Re: i have been playing this in my mind for years. New to the site.

jets60 wrote:
dino48 wrote:

Lyrics are good so far,hope too see the rest of it out soon.

Yep - what Dino said - You got the makings of a good song....and a good country song at that.  smile

even a good blues? what exactly do you plan on doing with it?

  • From: Tooele Ut
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Re: i have been playing this in my mind for years. New to the site.

That happens to the best writers.  Stuck on an ending.  Good luck.  It sounds good so far.

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