1 (edited by Grah1 2014-08-07 12:03:28)

Topic: Chordie communal song

Ok let's see how we do with this idea it's gonna be a bit like consequences you know the game where everyone writes a line of a story
So I'll start this off

I get up in the morning and the birds are chirping...

Next line please but keep it clean

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You're lying there beside me,but your heart is hurting.

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Grandmaw's on the front porch dippin' snuff and burping

Give everything but up.

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wondering what you might have done.

my papy said son your going too drive me too drinking if you dont stop driving that   Hot  Rod  Lincoln!! Cmdr cody and his lost planet airman

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If you had her in the sights of your gun

Thick as two short planks

6 (edited by beamer 2014-08-08 22:39:25)

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Thats a first verse!

I get up in the morning and the birds are chirping
You’re lying beside me , but your heart is hurting
Grandmaw’s on the front porch dipping snuff and burping
Wondering what you might have done
if you had her in the sights of your gun

“It’s like a Jab, you got the squeeze and you got the attack, you got the guitar and the emotion behind the song. 
You can plug into a Marshall, but if you are not attacking it,  it's just going to sound so-so.  If the song doesn't grove, you are just bashing through chords” .
-- Mike Ness,  Social Distortion

7 (edited by beamer 2014-08-07 23:39:07)

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Sorry more than one line but I was having fun - ( I was just listening to Flogging Molly and Drop Kick Murphys LOLOL smile )


oh there is no time for regrets right now

You know you gotta kill her somehow

Oh there is no time no time for regrets right now

Oh there is no time no time for regrets right now

“It’s like a Jab, you got the squeeze and you got the attack, you got the guitar and the emotion behind the song. 
You can plug into a Marshall, but if you are not attacking it,  it's just going to sound so-so.  If the song doesn't grove, you are just bashing through chords” .
-- Mike Ness,  Social Distortion

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Pick up my gun get it over and done

Thick as two short planks

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and soon ill be on the run

“It’s like a Jab, you got the squeeze and you got the attack, you got the guitar and the emotion behind the song. 
You can plug into a Marshall, but if you are not attacking it,  it's just going to sound so-so.  If the song doesn't grove, you are just bashing through chords” .
-- Mike Ness,  Social Distortion

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I'm sick of grandma snorting snuff.

Thick as two short planks

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but grandpa always did like 'em rough

In my late teens I had a drug problem...now in my sixties all my problems have a drug.

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Uncle Leroy had a dragon named "Puff."

Give everything but up.

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Puff was magic, he could do tricks

Thick as two short planks

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Just give him some weed and some match - sticks (enunciate both syllables)

“It’s like a Jab, you got the squeeze and you got the attack, you got the guitar and the emotion behind the song. 
You can plug into a Marshall, but if you are not attacking it,  it's just going to sound so-so.  If the song doesn't grove, you are just bashing through chords” .
-- Mike Ness,  Social Distortion

15 (edited by beamer 2014-08-08 22:39:03)

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WHERE WE ARE NOW: nOW PEOPLE YOU GOTTA READ THROUGH AND SEE HOW YOUR RHYME IS GOING TO FIT IN THE STORY. (GRAH sorry if I took your ship)


I get up in the morning and the birds are chirping
You’re lying beside me , but your heart is hurting
Grandmaw’s on the front porch dipping snuff and burping
Wondering what you might have done
if you had her in the sights of your gun

oh there is no time for regrets right now
you know you gotta kill her somehow
Oh no time for regrets right now
Pick up my gun, get it over and done
And soon Ill be on the run

But grandpa always did like ‘em rough
Uncle Leroy had a dragon named “Puff”
Puff was magic, he could do tricks
Just give him some weed and some match - sticks (enunciate both syllables)

“It’s like a Jab, you got the squeeze and you got the attack, you got the guitar and the emotion behind the song. 
You can plug into a Marshall, but if you are not attacking it,  it's just going to sound so-so.  If the song doesn't grove, you are just bashing through chords” .
-- Mike Ness,  Social Distortion

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I just want to see how this develops

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Well its developing but to where I just don't know LOLOLOL sounds a lot like Everglades  mixed w/  Bad mans blunder  by the Kingston Trio LOLOLOL

“It’s like a Jab, you got the squeeze and you got the attack, you got the guitar and the emotion behind the song. 
You can plug into a Marshall, but if you are not attacking it,  it's just going to sound so-so.  If the song doesn't grove, you are just bashing through chords” .
-- Mike Ness,  Social Distortion

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Scott you  are  the captain of  this  ship  let it  roll I'm enjoying  it .

19 (edited by Grah1 2014-08-09 09:43:20)

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I get up in the morning and the birds are chirping
You’re lying beside me , but your heart is hurting
Grandmaw’s on the front porch dipping snuff and burping
Wondering what you might have done
if you had her in the sights of your gun

oh there is no time for regrets right now
you know you gotta kill her somehow
Oh no time for regrets right now
Pick up my gun, get it over and done
And soon Ill be on the run

But grandpa always did like ‘em rough
Uncle Leroy had a dragon named “Puff”
Puff was magic, he could do tricks
Just give him some weed and some match - sticks (enunciate both syllables)

oh there is no time for regrets....My  soul
gotta take  a shovel dig a big  hole
no time for regrets
cos  the  cops  are  coming
I'm heading  for  the  hills
and I gotta  keep  running ....

(now  lets  add  some chords then we  know  how  to  sing  it ?)

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Ok gimmi a few days to work on it.  LOLOL I can really hear some kicking banjo in here, Who plays one?  When wife wanted a banjo I tried to talk her into a guitarjo,, but she said no.  now we have a banjo that has sat in the corner for 3 years or better.

“It’s like a Jab, you got the squeeze and you got the attack, you got the guitar and the emotion behind the song. 
You can plug into a Marshall, but if you are not attacking it,  it's just going to sound so-so.  If the song doesn't grove, you are just bashing through chords” .
-- Mike Ness,  Social Distortion