Topic: Walking In A New World
–Phil Toshio Sudo
Author of Zen Guitar
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Well written Scott !
I can follow the path of the poem perfectly from all the episodes you have described.
I think it would be great if you stepped out of your metal genre for a song and played this ---- wait for it----
I think as a jazzy slow song. In my head the lyric speaks so much that I think a jazzy sound would do it great justice.
I don't know if that makes sense to you. But any way - excellent poem.
Good poem Scott , i enjoyed it .
Beamer your artistry and skill with words make this poem outstanding. Every stanza perfect.
This is jaw-dropping good, Beamer ... knowing bits of the back story you've shared, it's a tribute to the wisdom of learning by experience. Excellent stuff, dude! It appears as a ballad in my mind, but it's your song ... play it however the heck you want, right?
As always guys, Thank you so much. I just wrote it as a poem. but I may try some music with it.
Jim - me and Jazz dont work well at all together. lol but thanks for the vote of confidence. It wont be metal tho if I do do it.
Peatle - Thank you. Its amazing that I come up with a lot of stuff in the middle of my work day.
TF _ " Jaw Dropping" LOL! Now that's a heck of a adjective!
Now here is the challenge : Can anyone tell who I nipped the background picture from?
at first I thought Eagles Greatest Hits album or the One of These Nights Album, but after closer examination - NOT !
A sad poem, I think? With an optimistic outlook? I tried imagining a rhythm or style but failed, maybe best kept as a poem?
A great piece of writing and I love the background, maybe you'll start a new trend?
I’ll give it one more day and one hint. It’s gonna be an album cover from a second wave of British metal band and look for some of the title in it