Topic: Into the spiders web

Into The Spiders Web
https://soundcloud.com/noah-miller-2203 … der-webs-1

Musical Composition:
Noah - Fret Killer - Miller
Lyrics:
Scott – Beamer - Sailer,
Kay – KO - Oltman

V1 (0:11)
Can’t you see?
What you’re doing to me
Chasing you around,
Don’t like what I found
0:21 - 0:25 (5 second break)

0:25 – 0:35 (v2 10 second verse)

V2
Spinning me up
To keep me down
I hear your voice
I can’t make that choice

(0:38 – 0:49 fill1)

No Vox till chorus: 1:11- 1:21
CH:
Tangled in a web of lies
How long till I am dead
Smiling as I slowly die
Poison travelling to my head

V3
Suffocating through twisted silk,
Gasping for breath like a drowning man.
My dying excites you
As I cry out you stare into my eyes

CH:
Tangled in a web of lies
How long till I am dead
Smiling as I slowly die
Poison traveling to my head

CH:
Tangled in a web of lies
How long till I am dead
Smiling as I slowly die
Poison traveling to my head

ENDING
My dying excites you
As you stare into my eyes
My dying excites you
As you stare into my eyes 

“Find your own sound.  Dont be a second rateYngwie Malmsteen be a first rate you”

– George Lynch 2013 (Dokken, Lynchmob, KXM, Tooth & Nail etc....)

2 (edited by Peatle Jville 2021-03-30 09:11:24)

Re: Into the spiders web

Scott listening to the soundcloud and reading your lyrics  I could imagine someone with a Alice Cooper type voice singing this song.

Re: Into the spiders web

Peatle Jville wrote:

Scott listening to the soundcloud and reading your lyrics  I could imagine someone with a Alice Cooper type voice singing this song.

Thank you! 

Or Lincoln Parks Chester Bennington, but he is dead.     

“Find your own sound.  Dont be a second rateYngwie Malmsteen be a first rate you”

– George Lynch 2013 (Dokken, Lynchmob, KXM, Tooth & Nail etc....)

Re: Into the spiders web

A wild scenario.  Easily envisioned

Music has a strong drive like metal should


Good stuff Beamer!!!     

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