Topic: I NEED HELP i need a story line for the rest of this song

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this something i wrote a long time ago and never finished it. i found it going through old notes looking for material. i recorded what i had just to see what it sounds like but i cant seem to come up the story line to close it out. suggestions anyone? i am not particularly happy with the last line of the chorus either look forward to hearing suggestions from this talented crowd 

out of tune out of key and out of touch