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Topic: poem /song ?

https://soundcloud.com/rough-as-gut/cyclone
Recently i was invited to submit a poem to an upcoming poetry book
subject was` water` thought, as it turned out rhymey maybe it would work as a song.
not sure it worked,but its kinda interesting none the less. 

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Re: poem /song ?

I don't know if it's my tablet or soundcloud, or more accurately nosoundcloud, when I go on to your poem I get the "somethings gone wrong" banner same as I got with Jim's song the other day. Sorry, it's very annoying.     

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Re: poem /song ?

Nice sounding guitar and vocals.     

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Re: poem /song ?

I liked the guitar picking style Brian
interesting lyrics
Thanks for sharing

Jim     

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