1 (edited by boxer 2007-09-26 15:16:38)

Topic: thro' my eyes

Hello everyone, here's a little song I put together over the last few days, hope you like it......

thro my eyesby, boxer


[G][D][C][G][D][C]




[G] the moon she's sending [D] beams down thro the [C] clouds,


gent-[G]lycarressing [D] ripples on the [C] lake.


the [G] trees whispering our [D] secrets thro the [C] night,


on this [G] mountain [D] where we used to [C] play.


and i want you to [G] see how it [D] feels,


thro' my [C] eyes,


see it thro' my eyes,


see it thro' my [G] e- [D]y-[Am]es.


see it thro' my [G] e- [D]y-[C]es.



[G] leaves are turning [D] colour, its getting [C] cold.


the [G] fire glows a [D] warmth i cannot [C] hold.


[G] winters getting [D] closer, it's gonna be [C] grey.


was it [G] really that easy for [D] you to cast me [C] away.




chorus




and an abrupt end after chorus




see it thro' my [G]eyes.



aka ......   Boxer Petal....<3

Re: thro' my eyes

oh dear it doesn't look "all purdy like"
sorry, hope it makes sense x

aka ......   Boxer Petal....<3

Re: thro' my eyes

This is a beautiful piece of poetry. Nice use of words, it makes great sense to me. Excellent work!

SouthPaw41L(Toney)

Give everything but up.

Re: thro' my eyes

Hi Boxer
,
Lovely song. I actually played it just now! I bet it doesnt sound at all like i played.

But lovely Words. I would love to hear you play it.

Hope your little jewel is coming along?.

Also Thanks for the Add.

Old Doll.

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !

Re: thro' my eyes

Hi boxer!  I took the liberty of editing the voodoo codes to make it all purdy like.

'Tis a lovely/sad song . . . I, too would love to hear you play and sing it.
If you get it recorded, Roger Guppy can put it up in the Friends of Chordie MySpace page.
James

"That darn Pythagorean Comma thing keeps messing me up!"
[url]http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pythagorean_comma[/url]

Re: thro' my eyes

nice one boxer smile
It reminds me of my days home at Seedtick when winter was coming on it was always very sad because my cousins were all going home for school and the world was becoming just as you said very 'gray'..... anyway i wont harp on my memories for long. very nice choice of words.

All You Need is Love smile

Re: thro' my eyes

Hi Boxer,

A lovely song with a lot of depth and feeling which plays very well finger picked. Well done.

Thank you,

Roger

PS a recording of it would be nice for FoC.

"Do, or do not; there is no try"

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hi boxer funny enough i was walking back from mothers tonight the moon was full and a cold breeze your song fits it perfect   well done...

love is life ,life is for love,keep a true heart and live life to the full....stay cool

Re: thro' my eyes

Hi everyone, just want to say thanx for all the encouragement, and thanks James for making it "all purdy like".
Am looking into borrowing a microphone and will see what I can do, haven't got a clue tho. x

aka ......   Boxer Petal....<3

Re: thro' my eyes

Hi boxer
Just saw your song today. Played it like Roger, arpeggio style works very well.
Nice lyrics. Like to hear a female voice (I know your a Lady) on them and would be interested on how you feel the melody should go.
Well done

Regards

Ark