1 (edited by Roger Guppy 2007-10-24 22:51:41)

Topic: Song. Treasure. Words/Melody Helena Donovan.

Hi Forum,
I wrote this song For Badeye and His Gem,  for there 24th Wedding Anniversary. It is some time ago now. I recorded 3 songs this week.
This is one of them. Forgive the nerves please. I dislike recording.
Its posted on FOC: http://www.myspace.com/friendsofchordie

Treasure.Words/Melody Helena Donovan.


[D ] [G]


Did you always know that  she would be


[A][ D]


your treasure for  all eternity


[D] [G]


A twinkling gem like stars above


[A ] [D]


to give you never ending love.


[G]


Did she look at you when  first you met


[A],[D]


with expectation on her breath


[G]


And know this man would nurture  her




[A] [D]


nurture  both your  chakra   tiers.




Chorus.


[A][D]



Its rare you know this kind of union


[A ][D]


blessed on high from Gods dominon.


[G][A]


Both took your fate with ease and grace


[A] [D]


Hand in hand at loves slow pace.




[D] [G]


May you always know each  others soul


[A][D]


like  the steps to the jive in  rock and roll


[G]


So lead each ot--her  onward now


[A] [D]


and dance the same steps 24   years from now.




Repeat chorus+ last verse.





Thank You.

Old Doll.

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !

Re: Song. Treasure. Words/Melody Helena Donovan.

So nice Lena I'm well impressed such a pretty voice. Lovely recording.
Well done

Regards
Ark

Re: Song. Treasure. Words/Melody Helena Donovan.

Lena I love your song. Both Gem and I think it's beautiful.
Your voice is as soft as a big white puffy cloud. Gem and I
thank you very much. I got Rogers E-Mail and thank you for
the delivery.

Hope you have a great day... Badeye.

one caper after another

Re: Song. Treasure. Words/Melody Helena Donovan.

Hi Helena,

A lovely song for a lovely couple and wonderfully performed too. Well done.

Roger

"Do, or do not; there is no try"

Re: Song. Treasure. Words/Melody Helena Donovan.

That was awesome!

I have officially given up 'writing' as well as 'playing'

bonedaddy

I'm the son of rage and love

Re: Song. Treasure. Words/Melody Helena Donovan.

Old Doll,
I'm a big, tough guy who likes football, mixed martial arts, and tonka toys. Your song put a little lump in my throat and a bit of moisture in me eyes. Very well done. You're a beautiful person with the voice to match.

Congratulations Badeye to you and your wife, Gem. 24 years is amazing!

Peace and Guitars,
SouthPaw41L(Toney)

Give everything but up.

Re: Song. Treasure. Words/Melody Helena Donovan.

Oh Lena you are so brave, loving it.
What a special tea time treat that was,
and your voice is heavenly as an angels should be,
looking forward to hearing more, hope there's no stopping you now.
Lotsa love xxx

aka ......   Boxer Petal....<3

Re: Song. Treasure. Words/Melody Helena Donovan.

Hi All,

A big "thank You" to you as always, Also Gem and Badeye, who was

the inspiration for this song.

For all  your encourageing words.  DiĆ” Linn.

Old Doll.

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !

Re: Song. Treasure. Words/Melody Helena Donovan.

hi helena i think you're the treasure we need to hold on to,lovely song well done...stay cool

love is life ,life is for love,keep a true heart and live life to the full....stay cool

Re: Song. Treasure. Words/Melody Helena Donovan.

WOW!  Old Doll, an exquisite song - beautifully sung and played.  It's songs like this that make participating in the chordie Songwriting forum so much fun!

Keep recording and the process will become less strenuous.  I think somewhere along the way there is a fork in the road where you turn and suddenly the recording process becomes more automatic . . . I haven't quite made it there yet, but I know it will happen eventually.  James

"That darn Pythagorean Comma thing keeps messing me up!"
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