• From: Chico, Ca.
  • Registered: 2007-09-08
  • Posts: 327

Topic: Been a while but I fell in Love

My  Own                                                                          M Mc vicker   2008



One day I’ll find
You at my sleeve.
Poking fun at my sleepy face
and wanting to dance

I’ll say ,† Enoughâ€
You’ll say; you ain’t tough
And I’ll smile at you

We’ll hold on
To each other and laugh
In the kitchen we’ll waltz

Tennessee Waltz? Remember me?
I can’t see.
Life, before I knew  your name.

I thought ; If I had one idea,
and took it from beginning to end.
I would try another.

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2 Reply by Old Doll (edited by Old Doll 2008-02-03 16:37:04)

  • Registered: 2007-04-03
  • Posts: 3,489

Re: Been a while but I fell in Love

Hi Marcalan,

Welcome back to the Songwriting section.  Since you were here its been decided to add chords to most pieces you post.

Ya dont want your knuckles rapped..

Lovely wee piece.lots of imagery here.   " I was dancing with my darlin at the Tenneesse Waltz, lalalallalaalalalalaalalalala.

Would you like to dance Marcalan?  lol Then ill make ya breakfast!


Old Doll.

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !
  • From: derbyshire
  • Registered: 2007-05-17
  • Posts: 2,843

Re: Been a while but I fell in Love

hi marcalan lovely little piece ,shame its not chorded but well done...stay cool

love is life ,life is for love,keep a true heart and live life to the full....stay cool

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