• From: The Land Of Song
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wrote this this morning, about spiteful and jealousy people. the recording is a bit rough but it's on myspace.




[Dm]lies that cut in[Am]to my mind


[Bb]hurt me more than [F]would a knife


[Am]picture me as some[Bb]one else


and [C]leave the old me beh[F]ind




[Dm]picture this a sum[Am]mers day


[Bb]our voices carried on the [F]breeze we play


[Am]guitars and tam[Bb]bourines aloud


and [C]leave the old me be[F]hind



leave behind the faceless ones


leave behind the lies and spite


remember i'm just breath and light


and leave the old me behind




[Dm]see the curtains [Am]move above


[Bb]why should we be [F]so in love


[Am]old dried up [Bb]crow you cant


[C]leave the old me be[F]hind



i'm not happy with the chorus chords as they dont seem to flow, i'll sort it later

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

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Re: Leave

that chopro thing still dont work for me russ

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

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  • From: Almancil, Algarve, Portugal
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Re: Leave

Hi Phill,

The only thing you did wrong with the Chopro was to omit the [ song] and [/song] the switch on and switch off of the special formatting. I have put an space between the first '[' and the 's' of song] to stop it coming into play here.

Good song and excellent recording, well done,

Roger

"Do, or do not; there is no try"

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  • From: A black hole in deep space
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phill you forgot to put the word "song" inclosed with [ ] to start and at the end /song enclosed with [ ]  also {t: the name of the song and close it with a  } dont put {/end}  but use the above try it  russ

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that chopro thing still dont work for me russ

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  • From: A black hole in deep space
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roger you chimed in ahead of me lol

"Growing old is not for sissies"

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Hey Phill not bad for a "Quickie"
Ark

  • Registered: 2007-04-03
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Nice song Phil,

about a real problem with some people.

I somehow feel they dont know how to be any other way.
These people are short of loving I guess.

Old Doll.

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !
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thanks again for bailing me out roger and russel
glad you liked it arkady
and yes the local gossips are definitely lacking in the love of a real person, yep it's all about spite and jealousy...your so perceptive helena

phill

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

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