Topic: Those Records we played

This is a song i wrote for my love .

intro
Am C G A7

Verse 1:

      am                       C
Her skins the colour of dairy milk
       G                          A7 slide to 5th fret
And hair that shines like spiders silk 
  am                                C
I love her smile when she knows shes right
     G                  A7 Slide to 5th fret
My love for her is burning out of sight


Verse 2( Same chords as verse 1)

Shes feeling down with all that shes been through
She says its not the things i do
so i hold her close all through the night
My love for her feels so right

Chorus
     C                  G                  F
My darling Jade i wish that you stayed
C           Am               D7               D
We could listen to those records we played
C         F                     G                F
Time moves on but our love doesnt fade
C                   G                      F              F
i just close my eyes to hear those records played


Verse 3

i hold her hand and make her understand
That im the one ill be her superman
The future is something i can see
Living our lives in peace and harmony

Verse 4

ill take you down to the riverside
Away from the stares of city lights
We can embrace and hold our bodies tight
And feel the fireworks fizzing in the night

Chorus

My one my only true love Jade
May we never part and our love never fade
I wish that you could have stayed
And listen to all those records we made.

Don't Cry because it is over...

    smile because it happened.    Gabriel García Marquez

Re: Those Records we played

Weedjie,

Take a bow my friend. A lovely tribute to your love. What a pretty name  "Jade" is.

Well done to you.

Old Doll.

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !

Re: Those Records we played

thanks old doll made her cry when i sung it to her lol

Don't Cry because it is over...

    smile because it happened.    Gabriel García Marquez

Re: Those Records we played

hi weedjie thats a lovely tribute to your lady,i have a daughter named jade she's the youngest of the girls,well done....stay cool

love is life ,life is for love,keep a true heart and live life to the full....stay cool

Re: Those Records we played

Well Done weedjie smile
I'm glad you played it for Jade and obviously so was Jade.
I like the title you choose.It is very relatable. smile Also you should look into formatting your songs to make them "purdy". Chopro is purdy easy once you get the hang of it.
Keep at it

Kenny

Just Keepin on Keepin on
Martin DC15E
Cort MR710F
Squire Strat (Chinese)

Re: Those Records we played

thanks guys!! i know i should use chordpro but sometimes im a little bitty lazy

Don't Cry because it is over...

    smile because it happened.    Gabriel García Marquez

Re: Those Records we played

hi weedjie

a tender lament for a lost love?
lovely words expressing all you feel, I hope she knows how much you feel for her and judging by the sentiment, how much you miss her and want her back.
having read the other replies, it seems i read your song wrongly, i got the impression that jade had left you, if so i'm sorry for the error, but that line "i wish you could have stayed" might have misled me.

all the same nice one

phill

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.