Topic: writing a song

Gidday

@ our uke get togeather recently,we wrote a song(kind of)
We each added a line,put a few chords to it & it worked out!(after taking some interesting directions)
i wonder if one of you Chordians, much more clever than i.
Would like to try something like this on chordie?

Put up a starting line & choose the best next line that has been submitted.add that line to the song& carry on ect

thanks, Brian

The King Of Audio Torture

Re: writing a song

sounds like it would be fun we have done that here before,Why don't you start the songs first few words.

my papy said son your going too drive me too drinking if you dont stop driving that   Hot  Rod  Lincoln!! Cmdr cody and his lost planet airman

3 (edited by easybeat 2013-06-11 22:06:53)

Re: writing a song

Now my girl has left me
I`m having so much fun

The King Of Audio Torture

Re: writing a song

shes gonna regret using me.

my papy said son your going too drive me too drinking if you dont stop driving that   Hot  Rod  Lincoln!! Cmdr cody and his lost planet airman

Re: writing a song

But I'm glad what's done is done.

J  E  T  S
...and yet a Washington Football Club fan ...long story...HTT...WFT

Re: writing a song

Time to fly,
like a bird,
See me in the sunset
Ill pass you by

“Find your own sound.  Dont be a second rateYngwie Malmsteen be a first rate you”

– George Lynch 2013 (Dokken, Lynchmob, KXM, Tooth & Nail etc....)

Re: writing a song

so don't give me your evil eye!

my papy said son your going too drive me too drinking if you dont stop driving that   Hot  Rod  Lincoln!! Cmdr cody and his lost planet airman

Re: writing a song

I thought I would put it in as the the first two verses.  I was actually thinking of the second as a chorus, but it turns into a great verse also.  I like where this is going.


Now my girl has left me
I`m having so much fun
shes gonna regret using me.
But I'm glad what's done is done.

Time to fly,
like a bird,
See me in the sunset
Ill pass you by
so don't give me your evil eye!

“Find your own sound.  Dont be a second rateYngwie Malmsteen be a first rate you”

– George Lynch 2013 (Dokken, Lynchmob, KXM, Tooth & Nail etc....)

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You wont find another like me.

my papy said son your going too drive me too drinking if you dont stop driving that   Hot  Rod  Lincoln!! Cmdr cody and his lost planet airman

Re: writing a song

I may not be perfect,
and I don't want to be.

“Find your own sound.  Dont be a second rateYngwie Malmsteen be a first rate you”

– George Lynch 2013 (Dokken, Lynchmob, KXM, Tooth & Nail etc....)

Re: writing a song

She left me for another,
Thinking she was right.
I'm having so much fun now,
I've finally seen the light.


Joe

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Im looking around for a girl just right for me.

my papy said son your going too drive me too drinking if you dont stop driving that   Hot  Rod  Lincoln!! Cmdr cody and his lost planet airman

Re: writing a song

I hope she dont need money to please

Let no talents go unused

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And I don't have to squint to see her beauty

J  E  T  S
...and yet a Washington Football Club fan ...long story...HTT...WFT

Re: writing a song

How many verses are going for?  Where is the hook?   is it time for us to all make a copy and arrange it to each his own?  I did change a few lines below soit semed to flow a bit better, but nothing is in stone is it?  We have not seen easybeat since he suggested this. I think its his playground to say.


My girl has left me
I’m having so much fun
She’s gonna regret using me
But I’m glad whats done is done.

Time to fly , Like a bird
See me in the sunset
Ill pass you by
Not to worry over your evil eye

You won’t find another like me
I may not be perfect ,
And I don’t want to be

She left me for another
Thinking she was right
I’m having so much fun now
I have finally seen the light.

Im looking around for a girl just like me
I hope she don’t need money to please
And I don’t have to squint to see her beauty

“Find your own sound.  Dont be a second rateYngwie Malmsteen be a first rate you”

– George Lynch 2013 (Dokken, Lynchmob, KXM, Tooth & Nail etc....)

Re: writing a song

Beamer,I think he posted it just too makeup a bunch of lyrics for a song,we have done this a few times in the past. Sometimes it just gets goofy wording etc. So it is mostly for fun.

my papy said son your going too drive me too drinking if you dont stop driving that   Hot  Rod  Lincoln!! Cmdr cody and his lost planet airman

Re: writing a song

dino48 wrote:

Beamer,I think he posted it just too makeup a bunch of lyrics for a song,we have done this a few times in the past. Sometimes it just gets goofy wording etc. So it is mostly for fun.

Well in that case I dont feel bad about changeing it all up.  Im going to start working on a melody for it. but here is my arrangement of the words.
My girl has left me
I’m having so much fun
She’s gonna regret using me
But I’m glad what’s done is done.

She left me for another
Thinking she was right
I’m having so much fun now
I  can finally see the light.

It’s Time to fly , Like a bird
See me in the sunset
As I pass you by
Never again to worry over your evil eye

I may not be perfect,
And I don’t want to be
You won’t find another
Who loved you as me

I’m looking for a girl who can take me as I am
Sometimes I’m a sinner and an ornery man
All I have to offer is only all that I am.

“Find your own sound.  Dont be a second rateYngwie Malmsteen be a first rate you”

– George Lynch 2013 (Dokken, Lynchmob, KXM, Tooth & Nail etc....)