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Topic: A holiday song still nameless

Well here I am lying in the sunny canary islands with instructions from one of my current band mates to write a song so this is what I've come up with so far  Sue Davey hope it suits your voice.
I see this as a bit of a country rocker ,let me know your thoughts.
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Lying by the pool,looking kinda cool,
Soaking up the suns golden rays.
I don't need a fuss,I'm not in a rush,
Maybe some cute will come my way.
Chorus
B.                              A.           E
So just give me another Coca-Cola,
B.                         A.                    E
While your at it add a shot of rum.
B.                        A.                 E
Just give me another coca cola
B.                            A.                      E
My holiday from heart ache has begun

I'm wearing rayban specs as part of my disguise,
The darkness hides the teardrops in my eyes.
I'm pretty sure that you would maybe see right through,
And then I would just have to hypnotize.........you.

Chorus

Shaded by a palm ,makes me feel so calm,
All those nasty feelings go away.
Another glass of wine,then I'm feeling fine,
Hope that I can find a way to stay.
Chorus.

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Re: A holiday song still nameless

Graham

I like it a lot
can't wait til you post your band playing it

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Re: A holiday song still nameless

Sent it to Sue this afternoon she seems to like it so  when I get back to the UK well try it think I might put a slide solo in there ,what do yo think Jim?     

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Re: A holiday song still nameless

Nice work - times have been hard for us and I'm itching to get a holiday ...     

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