Topic: the parking lot remake with chorus

https://soundcloud.com/mojo01/parking-lot
i played this song for for guitar playing friend of mine he liked it but said it really needed a chorus so we threw some ideas around and this is what i came up with , just more tears in your beers song writing from yours truly . personally i think it  improved the song a lot 

out of tune out of key and out of touch

Re: the parking lot remake with chorus

Mojo that has come out real good.     

Re: the parking lot remake with chorus

OMG Mojo - you sound so much like Guy Clark !  Fantastic !
I would love to have the lyrics and chords to this !
Send it in to get recorded, it's really, really good !!!!!

Jim     

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Re: the parking lot remake with chorus

Sounds great!

Cheers

Richard     

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Re: the parking lot remake with chorus

you are truly a master of laid back country music. excellent.     

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

Re: the parking lot remake with chorus

Great to hear a new song from you.
really enjoyed your performance.     

The King Of Audio Torture