1 (edited by Peatle Jville 2025-09-27 11:36:10)

Topic: Bullet Sin

Here I am attempting to do a song I wrote it still needs refining to get it into a better shape. I'm not up to playing guitar much nowadays and my vocals are not good.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JdeMg80GUPo

Re: Bullet Sin

good to see you are still writing pete,my writers block continues.     

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Peatle, so good to see you back not only singing and playing again but writing songs again, that's awesome smile  Good message in this one,  "when the bullets fly, nobody wins".  So true.  Hope to see you do more for us Peatle smile     

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pure truth Pete!

Great message !     

The price of anything, is the amount of life you exchange for it.   - H.D. Thoreau
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Make your life count, and the world will be a better place because you tried.
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Cheers thank you everyone for giving my rough attempt at writing a song a listen. Keep up the good work Chordians.     

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Good tune - I understand your sentiment, but disagree with the line "firing a bullet is a sin", as my brother has a farm in the rural areas; sometimes a shot gets fired to scare the foxes away ... anyway, dropped you a like on YouTube!

Cheers

Richard     

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neophytte wrote:

Good tune - I understand your sentiment, but disagree with the line "firing a bullet is a sin", as my brother has a farm in the rural areas; sometimes a shot gets fired to scare the foxes away ... anyway, dropped you a like on YouTube!

Cheers

Richard

Richard you have lost me there. My song has nothing to do with shooting animals or owning a gun it is about people shooting people in anger. Aside from that thank you for taking time to have a listen.