• Registered: 2015-07-31
  • Posts: 2,912

Topic: Water Quality

Water Quality
Worlds away, thirst dances in their dreams
A voice from lands where rivers seldom gleam
Talks of the struggle, water’s fleeting theme
With heavy hearts for every drop they seek
I stand awakened, humbled by the meek
Only water they get Is from dirty creeks 

  • From: The Land Of Song
  • Registered: 2007-12-10
  • Posts: 5,820

Re: Water Quality

There's more life in that water
Than the life it may provide
That life will cause infirmity
And some poor folks will die.


I hope you don't mind me adding a second verse to your deeply distressing poem? It's just sad that in this day and age that wars and greedy warlords can watch whole communities die as they thrive in luxury using guns as incentive.     

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