Topic: you tube video of song I wrote

Took forever - but I think it came out pretty well
let me know your thoughts.
https://youtu.be/47t_be8NJBE 
Cheers,
Jim 

The price of anything, is the amount of life you exchange for it.   - H.D. Thoreau
Your vision is not limited by what your eye can see, but what your mind can imagine.
Make your life count, and the world will be a better place because you tried.
"Use the talents you possess, for the woods would be very silent if no birds sang except only the the best." - Henry Van Dyke

Re: you tube video of song I wrote

That's brilliant Jim, did you wear your tightest underpants to sing it? LOL I'm guessing the recording is AI? I hope you wrote the words as the hook, the hooks as there were a few were top drawer, I can say no more I'm speechless...brilliant     

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

Re: you tube video of song I wrote

Jim, I love the way you put this concept together. To me it is interesting how you managed to step into someone else’s shoes and express their feelings through music. I wish I had that skill to step inside the young ones of today's sunlit shoes and paint with colours meant to fuse. If only my words could flow like streams, I would also write the hymns of youthful dreams. Whenever I attempt to write a song or a poem pretending to be a young person it tends to come out all cynical and jaded somewhat stilted and it never really fly's. You have captured in this song of a young lady emotions in love real good.