1 (edited by SGinCYQX 2007-09-29 16:30:41)

Topic: Hollywood Suicide

Not quite sure what I'm gonna use for music yet. Open to suggestions

She's living with her parents,
Over on the wrong side
Gets home and lights up,
She can't help her hard times

The world is killing itself tonight,
Hollywood suicide
Track marks and we see the light,
Hollywood suicide

He's been at his Mom's place
Since he shot his wife
Says watching her squirm
Was the best time of his life

The world is killing itself tonight,
Hollywood suicide
Track marks and we see the light,
Hollywood suicide

She sits and watches a flame,
As it flickers and dies
The best friend you could want,
It hurts to see her cry

The world is killing itself tonight,
Hollywood Suicide
Track marks and we see the light
Hollywood suicide

The world is killing itself tonight,
Hollywood suicide
Track marks and we see the light,
Hollywood suicide

"You have to get over the love of power, and enjoy the power of love, in order to know peace."
-Jimi Hendrix.

Re: Hollywood Suicide

SGinCYQX great lyrics you've posted i'm not sure what rythm you're using but i'd try [a] [d] [em]see how you go...

love is life ,life is for love,keep a true heart and live life to the full....stay cool

Re: Hollywood Suicide

this kinda sounds like a punk rock song. ( hope that doesnt offend you ) almost like a misfits song or an old rancid song, try C G D . it seemed to work when i played it like that . fast at frist then slow it down about 3rd or or 4th verus. any way I like it. reminds me of a girl I knew who died of an overdose. great lyrics. let me know when its done

Everything is bad including me
But being bad is good policy
Reverend Horton Heat

Re: Hollywood Suicide

selso wrote:

this kinda sounds like a punk rock song. ( hope that doesnt offend you ) almost like a misfits song or an old rancid song, try C G D . it seemed to work when i played it like that . fast at frist then slow it down about 3rd or or 4th verus. any way I like it. reminds me of a girl I knew who died of an overdose. great lyrics. let me know when its done

Will do. AND, you're exactly right. I'm thinking four whole notes for the intro and chorus, and 8th note powerchords for the verse.

Thanls

"You have to get over the love of power, and enjoy the power of love, in order to know peace."
-Jimi Hendrix.

Re: Hollywood Suicide

right on bro, great song!

Everything is bad including me
But being bad is good policy
Reverend Horton Heat

Re: Hollywood Suicide

Thanks man!

"You have to get over the love of power, and enjoy the power of love, in order to know peace."
-Jimi Hendrix.