• From: Texas
  • Registered: 2007-07-31
  • Posts: 950

Topic: Sad Old Song

Another country waltz type song by Last_Rebel, hope yall like it just finished it up night before last. I think it had a George Jonish type feel persobally. I'm open to suggestions and I think maybe it needs another verse but it just got to this point and quit...



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  And I have this little thing for a third chorus with no verse to match so I just took it out, but here it is if anybodys interested:

I've seen another year pass
And I aint forgot yet
But Im learning to get along
Ive got time on my hands
But its better than
It was when I wrote that song

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  • Registered: 2007-04-03
  • Posts: 3,489

Re: Sad Old Song

Hi last rebel,

I have read this a few times earlier, and again now.
Personally i would leave it just as it is.
I like the feeling of " I wonder what happened next.

Good work.

Old Doll.

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !