• From: The Land Of Song
  • Registered: 2007-12-10
  • Posts: 5,649

Topic: PASSING MOMENTS

This is probably the finished version, I've added a couple of extra chord changes and another verse and middle eight...it's all about unrequited love at age 13! how sad is that? I must be dumb, cos I cant work out how to get my song from file to here

Passing MomentsPhill Williams


[Em] Passing moments [Am] soon be gone


[B7] Though memory will [Em] linger on


[Em] Ever feeding on my love


Does memory last longer than love?




[C] Ever needing- [D] ever growing


[Bm] Ever feeding [C] on my love




Twilight romance in winter crisp


Bodies warming, lips to lips


in the playground; constellations above


counting stars with one-sided love




(She is;) Ever taking, stealing youth


Stole my heart she broke it too





(middle eight)


[G] Entwined together we [Am] warmed the night


[B7] Shallow puddles frozen, [Em] filled with winters bite


[Am] My young heart was over[d]taken with her [C]scent


[Em] Then left me bruised, [Am] battered and [B7] spent




Passing moments through the years


Mounting up like angels tears


As each failing love expires


I must heal this broken heart of mine




[C] Ever wishing [D] she'd return


[Bm] Wishing someday [C] I would learn


[Em] To live without her, [Am] seems I can


[Bm]She'll be sorry when I'm a man



Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

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  • From: derbyshire
  • Registered: 2007-05-17
  • Posts: 2,843

Re: PASSING MOMENTS

HI PHIL LOVELY SONG,don't use b7,bm onlyBb but it flows well...stay cool

love is life ,life is for love,keep a true heart and live life to the full....stay cool

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  • From: Starkville, Mississippi USA
  • Registered: 2006-03-04
  • Posts: 2,069

Re: PASSING MOMENTS

Hi Phill & welcome to the Songwriting forum!
I edited in the necessary voodoo codes for you.  You can hit 'edit' on your posting and see what I did.

Unrequited love is no fun at any age.  However, at 13 it probably feels more intense - wish my memories of that distant phase were more clear.  I'll give this one a twang and howl this evening.

"That darn Pythagorean Comma thing keeps messing me up!"
[url]http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pythagorean_comma[/url]

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