Topic: Could someone have a look at this song I wrote?
Its probably a bit too crap for nay of you guys to comment on, its my first one ive written so was wondering if i could get a bit of feedback?
[SONG]
{t:I'm Lost}
{st:by, Alex Scrimgeour 16/2/07}
Well as I [G]sit by the water and i look to the sky
I have a [D]smoke and drink a vodka Cos i want to get high
But then i [Am]think of all the times when i was holding your hand
But I'm [G]fine,yes i'm [D]fine
And as the [G]memory of your beauty passes through my head
I take a [D]long hard look at all the things that i said
And I re-[Am]member when I told you that i wished you were dead
I was [G]wrong, so [D]wrong
If I could [Am]turn back time well the you know that I would
I would [Em]change all the things ive said and done if i could
I'd [G]even tell you that i loved you and I wish you were here
But you're [D]gone,You're [Am]gone
Its been a [G]month and seven hours since you left me that day
I should have [D]seen it in your eyes when you were walking away
But [Am]how was i supposed to know that you would leave me that way
For [G]him, for [D]him
I want to [G]leave it in the past thats where i think it belongs
I need some [D]time to sit and think and try to right my wrongs
I'll [Am]go to jail for what I did to you that much is true
I dont [G]care, I dont [D]care
If you'd [Am]told me that you loved him I could understand
But the [Em]way it is right now I've got your blood on my hands
It was [G]me who pulled the trigger how d'ya think that I felt
When you [D]slumped,to the [Am]floor
Well I'm [G]gonna leave this letter right beside your grave
I feel [D]bad about my sins and 'bout the way I behaved
But [Am,]how can I repent for all the shit I've caused
I'm [G]lost,I'm [D]lost
I'm [Am]lost
[/SONG]
