Topic: My Best friend's and my song we made up together!!

this song is about a girl whos mum doesnt listen to her...nobody has ever felt this way im sure, soon this girl will sing this song and it will reach all around the world...i hope u like it  <img src="images/smiley_icons/icon_cry.gif" border=0 alt="Crying or Very Sad">


I dont want to hate u


Mum, won&#8217;t you listen to me?

(For a second)

I&#8217;m not what you want me to be

(Just listen)

I wanna say that I love you

But you don&#8217;t even care


You say how could you be so stupid?

(When you did it yourself)

You say stop being an idiot

(When your one yourself)

I know that I&#8217;m not perfect


CHORUS:

But you don&#8217;t understand

What my life is like

Going by everyday

Wanting one more chance

But you don&#8217;t even care

What you&#8217;re doing to me

Stop and look around you

I don&#8217;t wanna hate you


Mum won&#8217;t you let me explain

(Probably not)

It wasn&#8217;t even my fault

(Does it matter?)

You say that you don&#8217;t want me


CHORUS


Bridge:

I&#8217;m the one that has to suffer this

I&#8217;m the one that has to pay

Mum look at me one last time

And tell me what you think&#8230;


CHORUS

Follow your heart
It usually makes the right decisions <3

Re: My Best friend's and my song we made up together!!

Hello hinder_rox07 - Like the idea for this song.  What are the chords?  Is it a quiet/contemplative acoustic thing or a strident/raucous electric thing . . . seems that either approach could suit the lyric.  James

"That darn Pythagorean Comma thing keeps messing me up!"
[url]http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pythagorean_comma[/url]

Re: My Best friend's and my song we made up together!!

james, thank you for replying and we are still working on chords for this song as we made it up the other day...when i get the chords i will post them to you or either that maybe you would like to help  with the chords by playing the song how you would like to hear it


hinder_rox07 <img src="images/smiley_icons/icon_smile.gif" border=0 alt="Smile">

Follow your heart
It usually makes the right decisions <3

Re: My Best friend's and my song we made up together!!

Alrighty then hinder_rox07 - I'll try out some chord ideas and get back to you soon.  Meanwhile, you and your collaborator see what you can do to set the lyric to some music.  Let's just see what we come up with . . . James

"That darn Pythagorean Comma thing keeps messing me up!"
[url]http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pythagorean_comma[/url]

Re: My Best friend's and my song we made up together!!

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! I WILL TRY OUT SOME CHORDS AS WELL AND GET BACK TO YOU!


hinder_rox07

Follow your heart
It usually makes the right decisions <3

Re: My Best friend's and my song we made up together!!

got me at it too.

to be honest when i first looked at it i thought hmmm, na, but see when i sat down wit hthe guitar, it makes it different, I like it.



I am working on the chorus just now as


Am            Em

But you don&#8217;t understand

F               C

What my life is like

Em         F

Going by everyday

G                  G7

Wanting one more chance

Am             Em

But you don&#8217;t even care

F                    C

What you&#8217;re doing to me

Em                F

Stop and look around you

G

I don&#8217;t wanna hate you




ok, came back in to edit this post.

the Em goes above the U in understand.

the C goes above L, in like. etc,etc, etc and same goes for the other chords.

I dont know why it doesnt show as this, I typed it liked that but then the chords get crushed away over to the left.


Ken

ye get some that are cut out for the job and others just get by from pretending

Re: My Best friend's and my song we made up together!!

Well done Ken, I like your treatment of the song.  Here is what I have come up with.


I made some minor adjustments to the lyric (mostly for dramatic effect).  I hear it so that the verses are sung rather calmly by a solo voice and then the chorus and bridge are quite intense and in 2-part harmony.

<div class="song"><link rel="StyleSheet" href="../css/chordie.css" type="text/css" media="screen" title="Chordie style"><div id="singlesong"><div id="singlesongc"><div class="header"><h1 class="finaltitle"> I Don't Want To Hate You</h1><h2 class="finalartist" style="text-decoration: none">Words by hinder_rox07 & friend</h2></div><div class="song"><div id="firstcol"><div class="textline"><span class="comment">chords suggested by James McCormick</span>

</div><div class="textline">. . . .V1

</div><div class="chordline"><span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">C</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>Mum, won?t you listen to <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">G</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>me?

</div><div class="chordline">(For a <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Am</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>second, a <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Em</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>second)

</div><div class="chordline"><span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Dm</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>I?m <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">C</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>not what you want me to <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">G</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>be

</div><div class="chordline">(Just <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Am</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>listen, <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Em</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>listen)

</div><div class="chordline">I <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">F</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>wanna say that I <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">C</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>love you

</div><div class="chordline">But <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">F</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>you, you don?t even <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">G</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>care

</div><div class="textline">. . . .CHORUS 1: (harmony)

</div><div class="chordline"><span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">C7</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>But <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Bb</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>you, you <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">F</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>don?t under-<span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">C</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>stand

</div><div class="chordline"><span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Bb</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>What my <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">F</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>life is <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">C</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>like

</div><div class="chordline"><span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Bb</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>Going <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">F</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>by every-<span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">C</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>day

</div><div class="chordline"><span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Bb</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>Wanting <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">F</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>one more <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">G</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>chance

</div><div class="textline">. . . .V2

</div><div class="chordline">You <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">C</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>say, "How could you be so <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">G</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>stupid?"

</div><div class="chordline">(When <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Am</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>you, you did it your-<span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Em</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>self)

</div><div class="chordline"><span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Dm</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>You <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">C</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>say, "Stop being an <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">G</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>idiot"

</div><div class="chordline">(When <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Am</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>you, you are one your-<span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Em</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>self)

</div><div class="chordline"><span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">F</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>I know that I?m not <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">C</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>perfect

</div><div class="chordline">I <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">F</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>know that I'm not per-<span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">G</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>fect

</div><div class="textline">. . . .CHORUS 2: (harmony)

</div><div class="chordline"><span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">C7</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>But <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Bb</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>you, you <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">F</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>don?t even <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">C</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>care

</div><div class="chordline"><span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Bb</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>What you are <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">F</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>doing to <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">C</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>me

</div><div class="chordline"><span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Bb</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>Stop and <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">F</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>look a-<span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">C</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>round you

</div><div class="chordline"><span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Bb</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>I ' ' <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">F</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>don?t wanna <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">G</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>hate you

</div><div class="textline">. . . .V3

</div><div class="chordline"><span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">C</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>Mum won?t you let me ex-<span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">G</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>plain

</div></div><div id="secondcol"><div class="chordline">(<span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Am</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>Probably, probably <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Em</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>not)

</div><div class="chordline"><span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Dm</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>It ' <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">C</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>wasn?t even my <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">G</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>fault

</div><div class="chordline">(<span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Am</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>Does it, does it <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Em</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>matter?)

</div><div class="chordline"><span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">F</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>You say that you don?t <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">C</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>want me

</div><div class="chordline">You <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">F</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>say that your don't want <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">G</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>me

</div><div class="textline">. . . .CHORUS 1: (harmony)  repeat

</div><div class="chordline"><span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">C7</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>But <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Bb</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>you, you <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">F</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>don?t under-<span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">C</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>stand

</div><div class="chordline"><span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Bb</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>What my <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">F</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>life is <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">C</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>like

</div><div class="chordline"><span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Bb</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>Going <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">F</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>by every-<span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">C</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>day

</div><div class="chordline"><span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Bb</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>Wanting <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">F</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>one more <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">G</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>chance

</div><div class="textline">. . . .Bridge:

</div><div class="chordline"><span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">C</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>I?m the <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Bb</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>one that has to <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">C</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>suffer <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Bb</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>this

</div><div class="chordline"><span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">C</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>I?m the <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Bb</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>one that has to <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">F</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>pay

</div><div class="chordline"><span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">C</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>Mum look at <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="inlc"><span class="absc">Bb</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>me <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">C</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>one last <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Bb</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>time

</div><div class="chordline">And <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">C</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>tell me <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Bb</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>what you <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">G</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>think?

</div><div class="textline">. . . .CHORUS 2: (harmony) repeat

</div><div class="chordline"><span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">C7</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>But <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Bb</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>you, you <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">F</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>don?t even <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">C</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>care

</div><div class="chordline"><span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Bb</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>What you are <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">F</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>doing to <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">C</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>me

</div><div class="chordline"><span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Bb</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>Stop and <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">F</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>look a-<span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">C</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>round you

</div><div class="chordline"><span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Bb</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>I ' ' <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">F</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>don?t wanna <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">G</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>hate you

</div><div class="chordline"><span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">Bb</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>I ' ' <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">F</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>don?t wanna <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">G</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>hate <span class="bracket">[</span><span class="relc"><span class="absc">C</span></span><span class="bracket">]</span>you

</div>
</div></div><div class="grids"><img class="chord" alt="Am" src="http://www.chordimages.com../ramimages/i2/Amchord_N02210_1.png" /> <img class="chord" alt="Bb" src="http://www.chordimages.com../ramimages/i0/Bbchord_N13331_1.png" /> <img class="chord" alt="C" src="http://www.chordimages.com../ramimages/i8/Cchord_N32010_1.png" /> <img class="chord" alt="C7" src="http://www.chordimages.com../ramimages/i3/C7chord_032310_1.png" /> <img class="chord" alt="Dm" src="http://www.chordimages.com../ramimages/i8/Dmchord_NN0231_1.png" /> <img class="chord" alt="Em" src="http://www.chordimages.com../ramimages/i4/Emchord_022000_1.png" /> <img class="chord" alt="F" src="http://www.chordimages.com../ramimages/i6/Fchord_133211_1.png" /> <img class="chord" alt="G" src="http://www.chordimages.com../ramimages/i0/Gchord_320003_1.png" /> </div></div></div><div style="display:none">

{t:I Don't Want To Hate You}

{st:Words by hinder_rox07 & friend}

{c:chords suggested by James McCormick}

. . . .V1

[C]Mum, won?t you listen to [G]me?

(For a [Am]second, a [Em]second)

[Dm]I?m [C]not what you want me to [G]be

(Just [Am]listen, [Em]listen)

I [F]wanna say that I [C]love you

But [F]you, you don?t even [G]care

. . . .CHORUS 1: (harmony)

[C7]But [Bb]you, you [F]don?t under-[C]stand

[Bb]What my [F]life is [C]like

[Bb]Going [F]by every-[C]day

[Bb]Wanting [F]one more [G]chance

. . . .V2

You [C]say, "How could you be so [G]stupid?"

(When [Am]you, you did it your-[Em]self)

[Dm]You [C]say, "Stop being an [G]idiot"

(When [Am]you, you are one your-[Em]self)

[F]I know that I?m not [C]perfect

I [F]know that I'm not per-[G]fect

. . . .CHORUS 2: (harmony)

[C7]But [Bb]you, you [F]don?t even [C]care

[Bb]What you are [F]doing to [C]me

[Bb]Stop and [F]look a-[C]round you

[Bb]I ' ' [F]don?t wanna [G]hate you

. . . .V3

[C]Mum won?t you let me ex-[G]plain

([Am]Probably, probably [Em]not)

[Dm]It ' [C]wasn?t even my [G]fault

([Am]Does it, does it [Em]matter?)

[F]You say that you don?t [C]want me

You [F]say that your don't want [G]me

. . . .CHORUS 1: (harmony)  repeat

[C7]But [Bb]you, you [F]don?t under-[C]stand

[Bb]What my [F]life is [C]like

[Bb]Going [F]by every-[C]day

[Bb]Wanting [F]one more [G]chance

. . . .Bridge:

[C]I?m the [Bb]one that has to [C]suffer [Bb]this

[C]I?m the [Bb]one that has to [F]pay

[C]Mum look at [Bb]me [C]one last [Bb]time

And [C]tell me [Bb]what you [G]think?

. . . .CHORUS 2: (harmony) repeat

[C7]But [Bb]you, you [F]don?t even [C]care

[Bb]What you are [F]doing to [C]me

[Bb]Stop and [F]look a-[C]round you

[Bb]I ' ' [F]don?t wanna [G]hate you

[Bb]I ' ' [F]don?t wanna [G]hate [C]you

</div>

"That darn Pythagorean Comma thing keeps messing me up!"
[url]http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pythagorean_comma[/url]

Re: My Best friend's and my song we made up together!!

thank you i will try it out!! she will be very pleased that our song is out into a site so far!

Follow your heart
It usually makes the right decisions <3

Re: My Best friend's and my song we made up together!!

thankyou sooo much! you r like sooo talented!!!

Follow your heart
It usually makes the right decisions <3

Re: My Best friend's and my song we made up together!!

That was cool i wish you added the chords to it or dont you have any?

Re: My Best friend's and my song we made up together!!

yes i do a friend on chordie fixed someup for me...do u want them??

Follow your heart
It usually makes the right decisions <3

Re: My Best friend's and my song we made up together!!

This has been a very interesting thread to follow. It started off as a song with no music telling of parental conflict, a road that I am sure many of us have been down with a parent at some time or other.


Within a few days and with help from Ken and James a lovely song has been born. My contribution to this is a backing track for hinder_rox07 and friend which I have uploaded to:


<a href="http://www.myspace.com/friendsofchordie" target="_blank">http://www.myspace.com/friendsofchordie</a>


I have used a Christina Aguilera style and tempo that I think suits the song but if hinder_rox07 wants any changes to key, style or tempo I can very soon alter it.


I hope you like it and can play and sing along to it.


Roger

"Do, or do not; there is no try"

Re: My Best friend's and my song we made up together!!

thank you very much roger this backing track is great! and i love the style especially since im only a teenager!! its great really!!


hinder_rox07

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Re: My Best friend's and my song we made up together!!

<img src="images/smiley_icons/icon_redface.gif" border=0 alt="Embarassed"> Oooops! I forgot to mention that I have added a 4 bar intro C Bb F G. Senior moment, I'm afraid.


Roger

"Do, or do not; there is no try"

Re: My Best friend's and my song we made up together!!

<img src="images/smiley_icons/icon_smile.gif" border=0 alt="Smile"> dont worry roger...we all have those moments and im a natural blonde!!! lol so dont worry!! i always forget things to...lol <img src="images/smiley_icons/icon_biggrin.gif" border=0 alt="Very Happy">

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It usually makes the right decisions <3