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(26 replies, posted in Poems)

Cheers Jan they most probably wouldn't sing a song like that in school today and now as a sheep add on here is a more modern short piece of Kiwi sheep paddock music.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r1dr7OUkj2k

Good one Richard .     

Good one  easybeat with the start of Spring your guitar has come into full bloom and is sounding good with nice and clear vocals.     

I love your song choice on that one Jan you did a good rendition. It got me reminiscing about the coffee bars here in Wellington when I was in my teens. Many of these places would at night have folk singers singing and the patrons would singalong with them and that was one of the songs I would hear.     

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(26 replies, posted in Poems)

Cheers Jan they are interesting looking little creatures and I like the way their faces have a cartoon look.

EB that gave me a chuckle. Today the first day of Spring good to see all those cute newborn lambs running around the paddocks.  Here is a song we had to sing when I was at primary school about sheep shearing.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=plCTGKrhByk

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(5 replies, posted in Poems)

Cheers Jan  thank you for your feedback.  leading into Spring and with today being the first day of Spring I have noticed the birds around here have had plenty to feed on in the last few weeks and are getting plumper. smile

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(5 replies, posted in Poems)

Merci Piri, greetings and best wishes to you and your family  from my human and wild avian family at my domicile. Thankfully at home we don’t have to put up with pesky seagulls like you have to and also those people on the waterfront close to my part of the world also have to contend with. My mum physically is doing ok and her broken hip has recovered well, but unfortunately mentally not very good and she now requires plenty of nursing care due to her sudden onset dementia. It was only a few months back that she was very sharp and quick witted and onto things. She now is in a care centre for the confused and bewildered. Next month she turns 102 so she has had a good run up until now.



Jim, thank you for taking time to read and comment on my words. The Tui singing around here are big part of the soundscape of this place. I remember you and Jan have both written good songs about Tui. The town where you live sounds like a place with a good community. I remember you posted a video during the lockdown of a brass band playing in your town it looked real nice.



In the unlikely event reading this line in my poem anyone wonders about the use of the word preacher, “Above the preacher on a branch a singing Tui fills my head with a beautiful vibe.”

The reason I used the word “preacher” it is a  cryptic type reference to what early European colonists called Tui, the parson bird. The Parson bird  name came about because of the Tui’s  distinctive white throat tuft which  looked to them like the collar that church ministers wore back then.. When early European arrived the non Catholics here often referred to the church priest as being their parson.

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(2 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Jim
Another clever song very true, love is patient love is kind.  I have been married to Maree this September for 41 years. Maree and I relationship before we got married is a long story.
It  was after knowing each other for nearly ten years that we could say those three magic words to each other. Finding that right moment  to say, "I Love You"  when we had that epiphany about us being meant to be more than friends was a scary but when it came it was perfect. As your song says our love has endured through all the challenges that many couples face. Once again another brilliant piece of song writing by you. Nothing wrong with the bible references Bob Dylan does that a lot with his lyrics and so do many others.
Congratulations on  your 39 years.
Pete

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(14 replies, posted in My local band and me)

easybeat wrote:
neophytte wrote:
TIGLJK wrote:

I wish I had the talent to be a performer.

Jim

Sorry, but I'm going to pick on this statement, because you *do* have the talent, it's up to you to use it ....

Cheers

Richard

Agree!! just need to find a way to use it.

Jim you do write great songs and your performances have their own unique quality in what I call a Bob Dylan way.. You are a truly talented songwriter.     

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(5 replies, posted in Poems)

This is about where I live and what it means to me I hope it makes sense.                   



       Home  My Sanctuary

As long as I can get down my front steps.

This place will always be my sanctuary.

As the morning sun holds me in its embrace.

On a blue sky a hidden hand paints different colours.

Above the preacher on a branch a singing Tui fills my head with a beautiful vibe.

This place will always be my sanctuary.

The friendly toot of the horn and a beaming smile and a wave.

As the many who know me drive past.

This place is my future is my past.

Long may it last.

May it always love and hold me.

The trees and the ferns on the hill.

My little cottage in amongst it.

The days of a fast step  for me are now gone.

The spring in my heart still lives on.

I have spent many a year travelling to faraway places.

Adventures I have had some.

There are many places in the world that mean a lot to me.

This place here will always be my sanctuary.

Hidden in beautiful native bush the trill of the Grey Warblers thrills.

Bird songs enter my soul to me they are more precious than gold.

As I sit in the sun on my front veranda where our stories are told.

Maybe today in an unrealistic way before the sunset comes.

We can imagine that we put the world right.

Later on in the evening away from an uptight world.

I contently sleep building up my energy for the sunrise in the morning.

The trees close to our bedroom are  a place where the Tui break into morning song.

Are they singing about good news as they admire the valley views.

Life carries on once more as the sunlight hits the floor.

Through windows before we open the door.

This place will always be my sanctuary.

We have had many a storm and winter go pass.

Shaking earthquakes happening hard and fast and in the past.

I live for today and tomorrow even when the flags at half mast.

Those unwanted things all soon pass.

Tranquillity finds it’s way back home into my heart.

This place will always be my sanctuary. 

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(26 replies, posted in Poems)

Cheers Jan great to see you back here after your South Island adventures I hope you have managed to avoid all the recent treacherous rainy condition down south and up here in the North Island. Thankyou for taking the time to read my poem and comment I think I'm a kid at heart  Maree and I get a  kick out of watching kids films and programmes. Today a knowledgeable young ten year old told me about underwater sheep at first I thought he was kidding me but they do exist and are called leaf sheep short video attached.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AAe9zTpcIdo

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(14 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Ronnie And The Rockets interesting repertoire and a good band name.     

Zurf it was good to see and hear you doing these songs on here.     

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(26 replies, posted in Poems)

Jim and Brian that was clever thank you for sharing your playful wit. Jim  I enjoyed the video also it brought back good memories.

lamb chop Shari Lewis side kick. I remember Lamb Chop giving advice to Shari about money. Lamb Chop said to her something along the lines of, every time you meet a girl called Penny think about coins. Every time you meet a man called Bill you think about  paper money notes. Every time you meet a man called Johnny think about cash.

Talking about cash while the farmers away  his sheep get into the Pizza business in this video .  Some kids stuff can be amusing to watch and sometimes I enjoy it more than the kids do.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nEbcZtoZNR8

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(26 replies, posted in Poems)

Cheers Piri you gave me a laugh with the wet and cold miserable weather we are experiencing down here in NZ today I needed a chuckle. My humour is sick and my jokes tend to make people groan rather than laugh.  I started off talking about sheep in my poem in the hope of being a little bit funny now in a desperate attempt to get a laugh on chordie, I will throw another sheep joke into the pot. A music joke from Billy Connolly.

What is the difference between a Scottish sheep farmer and a Rolling Stone Song?

"One says,  " Hey you get off my cloud!", and the other says, ' Hey McCloud, get off my ewe., "

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(26 replies, posted in Poems)

My orthopedic specialist this morning made me laugh with his wacky  sense of humour.

If you boil a funny bone it becomes a laughing stock that’s Humerus.     

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(26 replies, posted in Poems)

I love the humour Piri . The complaint I hear most about owning vehicles nowadays is the ridiculous price of fuel,

Since I became an old age pensioner I got a thing from the Government called a Goldcard. That gives me free travel on all public transport buses and trains in the weekends and outside of workers morning and afternoon rush hour. Round here public transport is plentiful and I have been enjoying it. For years I never used public transport but now I do a lot. On the bus and trains you get to hear some interesting conversations and see some of the more eccentric people in life at times.     

Thank you Jan your doing a brilliant  job keeping this going on chordie.     

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(3 replies, posted in Bands and artists)

σε ευχαριστώ πάρα πολύ  se efcharistó pára polý thank you very much for the translation.

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(3 replies, posted in Bands and artists)

She is real good Grah and the guitarist sounds great also. Poly Kala πολύ καλά  very good Ellen. I love that style of Greek music. Maree and  I use to go to a club in Thessaloniki called in English '" Ten Steps In The Sand". I forgotten how you say the name  in Greek apart from deka being the ten part of it. There  was plenty of modern Greek music and also English folk songs played there. The atmosphere and music was always magic to me when I was there.. Ellen and her guitarist brought back good memories of Greek music flooding back to me. Also while writing this it brings back memories of Greek parties in the village where my wife parents lived in Greece. Thank you Grah I enjoyed the video.     

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(26 replies, posted in Poems)

Cheers Piri, When I was younger I saw many a fight in bars but in recent decades bars here have become more civilized. Though out on the streets on a Friday and Saturday night there can be a bit of problem amongst  inebriated young people roaming  around the main popular city entertainment area. Out here in the area where I live we don’t have that problem.

I know of a couple who own a flash car  that has all the state of the art computerised systems. To open the doors you press a button no keys those sort of things. Husbands is a runner and what they do sometimes is drive to a spot by the sea and he gets out and runs home which is miles away. He drives them to the place where he  wants to run from gets out takes his key after a certain  amount of time the car doors lock with her in it. She sits in the passenger seat admiring the view of the sea for a while then decides its time to drive home. Reaches into her bag  only to find she has left her device that open the doors and does every else on the car at home. Try’s to open the door manually they wont open . Try’s to lower the windows using the down button they wont work either. No worries I will phone hubby she thinks  on the cellphone as he always takes that with him even when running. Opps left the phone at home with the key device also. She spends the next few hours in the car trapped trying to attract the attention of passers by and  also in need of a toilet. Finally she attracts the attention of someone with a phone who rings her husband. Husband sees the number calling on his phone he doesn’t know that number  so doesn’t bother answering the phone. The passer by then calls a tow truck company who tell her that they have to call the police first before they would come to the  car.  Police and tow truck come to the car, towie breaks into car under police supervision and let her out.  I wont mention about her bowel need to let go during this time but apparently the tow company wasn’t cheap and also the other costs around them breaking into their car afterwards.     

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(26 replies, posted in Poems)

Thank you everyone for your comments.         
EB as long as the sheep don’t  follow a Judas Lamb they might live to see another day. Up until a few years ago at our local Meat Works here they use to have Judas lambs The judas lamb was a trained animal that calmly leads the other lamb s into the slaughterhouse. The Judas lamb gets to live another day where as the others don’t.  If people were to put a sheep in control of their country, no doubt  it would  be called a dictatorsheep.

As to your question EB about me writing many of my observation in bars hopefully I have also written a good amount about people I see in all sorts of other situations, Though I suppose from an observational view point society-at-large and its big diversity of people many of whom go to bars makes plenty for me to write about.. Society at large is often represented well as a microcosm in the patrons and staff, at bars. I find bars on a good night have people there from all different backgrounds and interests and beliefs. The way people behave after a few drinks can also be interesting. Bars attract everyone from good to bad people. Characters who are there because they are having a bad night or just passing through or there for many other reasons. Millions of different back stories have they. Interactions with a stranger at a bar can often quickly give us cues about their inherent morality. In those bar situations around strangers, I tend to be on my guard but still taking it all in. People watching is fun you just got to be subtle when doing it. In a restaurant or a coffee shop or whatever it's a different way of socializing or behaving to what people do in a bar. People do subtly check each other out in in situations other than in bars but outside that pub environment people tend to stick to themselves more or their group giving me less to write about.     

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(26 replies, posted in Poems)

A few months back when I was in a pub having a meal and a drink with a friend, we watched this drunken guy enter the bar. He staggered up to the bar in slurred words loudly quoting Shakespeare.  He was refused service as he left I noticed he had a jacket with the name of a sheep shearing contracting company on it. Just before he walked out the door, he yelled back to the barmaid that he loved her and she was welcome to shear a sheep with him any day. . I'm not sure if he meant share or shear a sheep. The other day while in town I saw this same man again hugging a parking meter telling it how much he loved it. Thinking about this man at home today these silly words entered my head.

        To Bar or not to Baa

Ha ha ha your not pulling the wool over my eyes.

Said the barmaid as she pulled him aside.

Shakespeare my dear you’ll never hear round here.

Blah blah bar.

Share sheep no get your own.

You’ve had enough its time to go home.

Your not a barber or a shearer dear.

I’m not serving you another beer.

Hurry up get out of here.

Be careful.

Don’t fall in the Ha Baa dear.

Blah blah bar.

Hurry up get out of here.

Sling your hook.

Go home feed your chooks.

Don’t let our boxer spoil your looks.

I’m not serving you another beer.

Hurry up get out of here.

I’m not the sort of girl you would like.

Hurry up get on your bike.

I’m not serving you another beer.

Hurry up get out of here.

Wipe that sheepish grin of your face.

Your no longer welcome in this place.

You’re leaving here in disgrace.

I’m not serving you another beer.

Hurry up get out of here.

No more bar or blah blah tonight.

Tomorrow morning you will know I was right.

So honey dear don’t get uptight.

Before the boxer here give's you a hard right.

Goodnight sleep tight.

Get home and have a bite.

Jim you have a clever way of putting lyrics together. I enjoyed hearing you sing and play it on Soundcloud in your unique way.     

neophytte wrote:
Jandle wrote:

Neophytte also suggested: Anyone but me – Phil Williams

I did this one a while ago (4 years!!): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XoQTqogR5kc

(this was Phil's version of the song, which I think sounds better than my version: https://soundcloud.com/iphillfine/anyone-but-me )

Cheers

Richard

That is real good piece of song writing a good collaboration on the composition. I really loved the way Phill covered it that is very special.