https://soundcloud.com/mojo01/sat-and-watched-it-rain-2
ok heres another go at it. better , worse ?

G                                  D
sat and watched it rain today
G                                    D
like my mood blue and grey
A                                  G                                              D
I cant stop the rain no more than I can stop the shame

chorus
G                                          D
so I sat and watched it rain
I just sat and watched it rain
I jus sat and watched it rain

I had things I needed to say
your emotions got in the way
I cant stop the rain no more than I can stop the pain

chorus

I wanted to write a song for you
there was no music only the words came through
I cant stop the rain no more than I can light a flame

chorus

I hoped no one would see the tears
in the rain the disappear
I cant stop the rain no more than I can break these chains

chorus x2

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(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

https://soundcloud.com/mojo01/sat-and-watched-it-rain

I had posted a story\poem the other day and TIGljk suggested I make a song out it . so I took his advice. here is the first run at it

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i sat and watched the rain today, i sometimes like the rain but today it just matched my mood. no wind to move the storm just grey and blue .i cant stop the rain any more than i can stop the feelings so i sat and watched
no one would see the tear among the rain drops or the cloud over my head amond the storm clouds. i fade into the storm like a ice cube melts in my drink the two become indistinguisable, how can you be cleansed by the rain when you are the rain when you are the cloud that darkens the sky. i pray for wind to blow the rain to sea but there is no wind not a breath of life. the  wind would only take me away with the storm to rain on some one else so i sit and watch, just sit and watch  it rain.
just wanting to flow away with the streams forming on the ground trying to find my way to the sea. but there are no answers there, ony would i evaporate into the sea mist destine to form another cloud and find my may back to land and turn to rain once again, so i sit and watch
i want to write a song but there is no music in me, no eneregy or desire to force the music out, ony the rain. still the words fall from the cloud like rain on the trees. the words flow like the stream forming in the dust. and like the rain sometimes they come in a down pour and sometimes they come in a sprinkle and sometimes not at all. so i sit and watch
i cant stop the words no more than i can stop the rain, so they stain the page like the water from the sky. the page blows away in the wind along with the clouds because the words are like me today dark and blue, one with the rain. because the words are like the rain i suppose that is why they only come when the sky is dark. they well up to form a cloud and then come pouring down. sometimes i catch the words on paper like rain in a glass but  mostly they wash away with the stream looking for the sea.so i sit and watch
and like the rain the words eventualy slow to a sprinkle and stop alltogether as the wind moves the cloud and they dry up and dissapear when the sun finaly shines through. i really need the sun today, so i sit and watch
the rain has stopped and somewhere a bird is singing again maybe now the music will return and i will pick my self up. now the rain has stopped, another flood has come and gone and i just sat and watched.

Phill Williams wrote:

Hi both. Are you using a heavy or light gauge string? I've been using Martin's 11 or12 gauge but they don't seem to hold their tone for long. I've been thinking about trying a lighter gauge, maybe a 10. What do you think?

I tried ten's on my taylor had take them off not enough tension on the neck and they buzzed on the frets

how about wipe out? that bill can get in on the action with his drums

welcome back Bill hope you get to feeling better

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(13 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

thanks for the kind words everyone

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(4 replies, posted in Poems)

this is more of a short story than a poem I suppose. I have never written either. funny how a little dog can bring back memories I couldn't sleep tonight thinking about her . I hope you like it and maybe it brings back a happy memory of some one you miss


i set the six pack of beer on the counter and asked the clerk for a pint of Smirnoff vodka. he looked at me kind of funny and said beer and vodka? you ve been coming in here for years and buying nothing but Evan Williams what's the occasion? no occasion i told him the vodka is for my dad and the beer for my brother i haven't seen them for a long time and i am going to pay a visit. they don't drink much any more but daddy sure liked his Smirnoff back in the day.
i paid my bill climbed in truck and drove to the florist
told the lady i need one red rose. she asked me who is the special lady? i told her my mother i had not seen her for a while and was going to see her. one red rose for all she put up with , its the thought that counts is what they say
so i climbed back in my truck , one red rose one six pack of beer and a pint of vodka and headed home. it was late in the afternoon on a clear blue fall day when i pulled into the yard
it is strange how i remember them, i see my mother when i was very young. i see her rocking me before she sends me of to the school for the first time. i see my dad sitting with me on the front porch on a starry night of that old two bedroom frame house i bought from uncle Harvey. i see my brother walking down the dirt road to mom and dads house coming out the woods from hunting deer with a rifle slung over his shoulder.
i get the rose the beer and the vodka and walk over to where they are resting not sure what to say after all these years, will they even hear me? i tell mom i love her and place the rose on her grave. i open the vodka for dad and tell him i miss the fishing trips and nights on the porch under the stars having a drink. i tell my brother he left way to soon and i quit hunting after he left it just wasn't fun anymore as i share the six pack with him
the sun has gone down as i finish my beer, its going to be a clear cool starry night in the east Texas pines just like i remember.

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just a little tribute to my little 4 pound fur ball  who is gone today . she was a mothers day gift to my wife 10 years ago but the wife always said she was my dog. going to be hard when I get home from work this trip and her not there at the door waiting on me

https://youtu.be/-kSrV_CubiQ

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(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

ok here are the words and chords

D                         C                       G               D
I'm sure some where that the sun still shines
I see a ray of hope in the ties that bind
I know somewhere a love still burns
against the storm it still stands firm
chorus
C                 G                   D
hope and promises we keep
as you sow so shall you reap
words that hurt can be so sweet
like an innocent child as she sleeps
D           C                    G                    D
I know somewhere faith is still strong
I'm sure some one still knows right from wrong
I'm sure out there in a world so mean
there is still a place where a child can dream
chorus
I hope that when the time is right
that you and I will see the light
and maybe when the time has come
we wont regret the things we've done
chorus

did I suggest poncho and lefty???

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https://soundcloud.com/mojo01/no-name
sitting at home alone strumming my guitar and this just kind of came out what do you think? suggestions for a name. if any one is interested ill post the words and chords later

ok here are the words and chords


D                         C                       G               D
I'm sure some where that the sun still shines
I see a ray of hope in the ties that bind
I know somewhere a love still burns
against the storm it still stands firm

chorus
C                 G                   D
hope and promises we keep
as you sow so shall you reap
words that hurt can be so sweet
like an innocent child as she sleeps

D           C                    G                    D
I know somewhere faith is still strong
I'm sure some one still knows right from wrong
I'm sure out there in a world so mean
there is still a place where a child can dream

chorus

I hope that when the time is right
that you and I will see the light
and maybe when the time has come
we wont regret the things we've done

chorus

ok here's my go at good morning America, cut it short because I suffer from OLD and CRS,  forgot the last verse
https://soundcloud.com/mojo01/good-morning-america

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(15 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

I'm guilty as well of not giving a lot of feed back on peoples posting I do have a listen to all of them when I see them. but not knowing squat about music other what some else has said " I know what I like" I wouldn't know what to tell some one to improve a song.

I miss all the fun stuff, have a great time every one

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(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

ok here goes still suffering a little from the crud but managed to get through with out hacking up a lung

https://soundcloud.com/mojo01/broken-branch


ok so here is the do over, some of my critics complained about the chorus (  you know who you are and I thank you for that its the reason I post here) I must say I agree with them so here's the second go round . I tried to record it but I am still suffering from the crud and sounded bad even by my standards so you will have wait a few more days to hear it. that is if this version passes the muster. Let me know what you think

(D)                                 (G)         (A)
knew a boy who was torn in half
(A)                   (G)     (A)             (G)       (D)
watched him sail away on a sunken raft

he lost his mind on a sea of dreams
tried to cleanse his soul in a mountain stream

the prodigal son who would not come home
he was bound and chained to the seeds he sown

chorus
(D)      (G)           (A)       (G)                              (D)
now there's a broken branch in the family tree
             (G)             (A)                    (G)     (D)
yet the tree still grows   it will still be here
            (G)          (D)
when those feelings go
D)      (G)           (A)       (G)                              (D)
now there's a broken branch in the family tree
             (G)             (A)                    (G)     (D)
yet the tree still grows   it will still stand tall
            (G)          (D)
in the winter snow

he could not deny that mistakes were made
but the token queen he could not persuade

closed his ears and he shut the door
that's when I realized it was never more

now life's a two way street
I can only pray that someday we meet
chorus

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(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

thanks for all the well wishes everyone, apparently sinus problems and flying don't mix well
Amy your real close I thought the prodigal son line would give it away
CG I like the broken branch  may try to work that into a chorus

Roger Guppy wrote:
mojo01 wrote:

so how did  I beat roger to the punch on this one?

Because you cheated!! You posted yours in July it should be in August lol

So here is mine which has been uploaded and posted on the 1st of August big_smile

https://soundcloud.com/roger-guppy/knoc … avens-door

Roger

my connection was so slow I thought it wouldn't post till the next day, I was traveling for work on the first, I was looking at last years calendar when I posted it, Amy told me to post it,. ITS NOT MY FAULT

so how did  I beat roger to the punch on this one? here's my cover of knocking on heavens door
https://soundcloud.com/mojo01/knocking- … door-cover

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I don't have a name for this one yet and there may be a another verse added. fighting a summer chest cold and heading to work tomorrow so may be a few days before I post a recording of it. this song will probably not make sense to most of you but to those that know me it will

(D)                                 (G)         (A)
knew a boy who was torn in half
(A)                   (G)     (A)             (G)       (D)
watched him sail away on a sunken raft

he lost his mind on a sea of dreams
tried to cleanse his soul in a mountain stream

the prodigal son who would not come home
he was bound and chained to the seeds he sown

chorus
(D)      (G)           (A)       (G)                              (D)
not a day goes by         that I don't wonder why
             (G)             (A)                    (G)     (D)
it still makes me blue because every day
            (G)          (D)
I still think of you

he could not deny that mistakes were made
but the token queen he could not persuade

closed his ears and he shut the door
that's when I realized it was never more

now there's a broken branch in the family tree
and a world of love some may never see

chorus

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(6 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

bill your harder to find than big foot sometimes
glad to hear from you

because I used to love you but its all over now

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(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Phill Williams wrote:

hi mojo, this song does it for me, well written and performed. message left on SC

thanks Phill, I truly appreciate the positive feed back.

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thanks everyone for the positive comments, seems like the older I get the more  questions I have and fewer the answers become. the one thing I know for sure is that we are just blip in the grand scheme of things.
thanks again Amy for the inspiration,

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I had not written anything for awhile for various reasons. the other day I was listening to Amy's new song and reading all the post associated with it and sparked something. so thank you Amy for an inspiration.
https://soundcloud.com/mojo01/world-wont-stop

(A)                                                        (G)            (A)
well the world wont stop when the well runs dry
(G)                                             (D)                  (A)
just keeps on spinning while problems multiply

the world don't care if we fool ourselves
she cant hear the ringing of our bells

she will still be here when the cities turn to dust
and the sun will rise when our dreams have all been crushed

chorus

                       (D)                            (G)                      (A)
because the world goes on no matter what you do
(D)                      (G)                            (A)
it don't matter what your point of view
(G)                                              (D)                                (A)
because the stars still shine when our time is through


the world goes on when the last king's been crowned
she will still be laughing when the jester's not around

the world wont stop when our children cry
she keeps on spinning while we sing our lullaby's

the world wont stop when the last dollars made
it will keep on turning when the final songs been played

chorus

the world don't care if you loose your way
keeps on turning no matter to who you pray

the world wont stop when we've said our last goodbye
keeps on spinning while the innocent are crucified

the world wont stop when your time is past
live everyday like it was your last
live everyday like it was your last
live everyday like it was your last