4,151

(43 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi kenny...respect, respect.

i loved the words and story line....but the recording...wow knocked me out!

first impression....dylan meets paul simon meets the byrds add john prine. not copied not imitated pure kenny and totally brilliant.

your finger picking sounded great to me, as did the harmony vocals. this should be out there on general release making you money, that's my opinion and i'd buy it twice!

you've come to the bridge you've taken the first step, now walk on, the world is yours.

phill

4,152

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hello people,

this song has now been finished and i've posted it on soundclick, follow the link below, click my name below the photo and you'll find the song there with one or two others.

have fun.

note to S.N.S, dont try too hard, let it come naturally. if you have a few words popping into your head, just write them down. if a tune comes with them try to play it on whatever instrument you play, then post it....you'll get plenty of help here if you ask for it.

phill

4,153

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

this is a ctech original which he threw open for a melody line, here's what i've done.

If I see you in another wayUndefined


Intro




Verse 1




[E] All the time, you were [Amaj7] there,


Can't understand why, I did'nt [E] run to you,


I miss-treated your [Dbm] trust, I can lie no more,


[F#m] Is it to late now?, I'm [A] so confused, -[E]


Chorus




If I could see you in [B] another way,


[Dbm] Would you hold me in your [E] arms,


[Dbm] If I could see you in [B] another way,


[A] Would you let me stay,-[E]


Would my devotion make the [B] difference,


[Dbm] Would your tears fade [E] away,


[Dbm] Would it bring a smile [B] to your face,


[F#m] If I [A] see you in [E] another way,


[D] In a [A] different [E] way-----



Verse 2




[E] Love is a strange [Amaj7] emotion,


Sometimes you dont just know its [E] th-e-re,


Please don't walk away, [Dbm] I need you to stay-,


Give me the [F#m] chance to grow [A] and show you I can [E] care




Chorus repeat


Bridge




[Dbm] I was wrong, this [Abm] life belongs to a [A] fool.-[E]


[A] Will you forgive me, [Dbm] say that you do,


[F#m] Cos I can't stand the thought of [B] living without [C] you.-[D-E]




Chorus repeat to end




Lyrics by Trevor Scrivens 20/12/88 music by Phill Williams 20/08/09





4,154

(18 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi russ,

i love this....as someone says above, it suits your voice. kinda reminds me of the eagles sound and feel, so it's a guaranteed winner for me.

talk soon buddy?

phill

4,155

(2 replies, posted in Songwriting)

My big mate Kenny from Canada, asked me to post this and as I'm only too happy to provide my services here it is...The Sleeping Princess

Sleeping Princess.Undefined


[Am] How sweet she lays in silken sheets.


[C] Eyes are closed, does she dream?


[Dm] And if those dreams are dreams of me.


[F] How can I live [E] up to be?




[Am] The golden knight on a Godly quest.


[C] To fight the beast in the demons lair.


[Dm] To save her from a fate unsaid.


[F] And make her safe laying [E] in her bed.




(Chorus).




[C] Dreams of the [G] sleeping princess.


[Dm] Beautiful in [F] shades of amber[Em] light.


[F] When the moon wanes, [F m] and the stars take flight.





[Am] There's a pleasure being in her presence.


[C] Incense burning bells that tinkle light as [Dm] light.


If I sleep will her [F] vision fade into the [G] night?


[E] And be lost to me again.


(solo- Am-C- Dm-F-E > Repeat Chorus)




[Am] Now I return to sleepy meadows.


[C] Summer dream on a hay-stack filled with [Dm] light.


And my dream was a [F] dream of her.


[G] And I wish to [E] dream that dream [Am] tonight.




Words and Music by Phill Williams.  10th August 2009   


   





Intro. Am- C-Dm-F-E





4,156

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

53? a mere child!

would babara be the little lady perchance?

nice one robert, wish her a happy birthday from me, and give her a big kiss

phill

4,157

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi trevor,

it's that old story of unrequited love. [haven't the faintest what that means] but if i had to guess it would be that she made you fall in love with her, then decided that she didn't want you after all...women!

nice little song

phill

4,158

(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hiyah  and thanks,

Daddy,

Glad you like it, you were in the back of my mind as I wrote this. COOL IT BABY!

Hi KajiMa,

No problemo amigo, if you want to cover it I would be over joyed, I'd love to hear the result though. Songs are meant to be played and shared, and there's no buzz like what you get hearing someone else singing your words.

Hey Kenny,

Always great to hear from you, I thought I had posted "Princess" I shall check and if I haven't I shall rectify the situation ASAP.
"Fading Away" is an old song, at least 30 years old and it's about a young lady I knew just after I got divorced, but before I met Ann. It's funny how relationships just sort of fade out like a pop song?

Hi Ark,

Thank you for the kind words. "Princess" is a bit of a fantasy thing. I think about certain people when I write, and I know Lena is into this type of thing, and she was on my mind when I was writing. Hope she's doing OK.

Phill

4,159

(11 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

hi gtx,

i've got a crafter fx55, and i love it, it's left hand, a sort of greenie blue colour and with a built in pick up.

i'd seen it in a shop in swansea, south wales, and picked it up to waste a few minutes. my wife phoned me an hour later! so i went back a couple of days later and bought it....one perfect thing in my life....after my wife of course.

enjoy it, and welcome to chordie

phill

4,160

(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

This is a bit of fun to help me relax. it's on soundclick, so click the link at the bottom and then click my name under my photo. There's another two new recordings there too!

Fun For Me and Jeb.Undefined


[C] Well my teeth don't fit and my eyes don't go.


I walk with a limp and my butt is sore.


My [C7] lights are on but there's no one home [F] today.


And the [Fm] girls round here dont want to come and [C] play.


So I [Dm7] know, [G] I'll have to [C] go.




[C] I had new shoes two years ago.


The heel's worn flat and the soles got holes.


And my [C7] hair looks like it needs a damn good [F] wash.


I got [Fm] one front tooth and my eyes are [C] crossed.


So I [Dm7] know, [G] I've got to [C] go.


(chorus)




[F] Back to the swamp in the [Am] middle of the woods.


Where the [F] buzzards eat what the [C] gators leave.


And the [F] girls all look the [Am] same as Jeb and [G] me.


There's [F] holes in your shoes and there's [Am] holes in your clothes.


There's a [F] hole in the swamp where the [C] tax men go.


And the [F] moonshine burns a [Am] hole right through your [G] head.


Like I [F] said, [Fm] Fun for me and [C] Jeb..



Well my [C] pants dont reach down to my feet.


And my armpits dont smell all that sweet.


But that [C7] dont mean so much to Sue and [F] Pearl.


They [Fm] dont wash so much as city [C] girls.


So I [Dm7] know, [G] I've got to [C] go.




(SOLO OVER VERSE CHORDS)


(repeat chorus]


So [C] here we go got mud on my face.


And my shirt's tied up with an old boot lace.


And [C7] Sue's with Jeb and I'm with [F] Pearl.


[Fm] City life's no life for [C] me.


So I [Dm7] know, [G] I've got to [C] go.


[Am] So I [Dm7] know, [G] this is [C] home.


[Am] Yes I [Dm7] know, [G] I've got to [C] go.






Words and Music by Phill Williams. 14th August 2009.





4,161

(6 replies, posted in Poems)

this guy sounds like a right smelly lump of curry eating kangaroo excrement!

it's good therapy to get it out though, and you've got a world of readers, cos you can write with the best.

phill

4,162

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi trevor,

i took this as a coming of age story, but i can see the religious aspect of it.

nice heart-felt words, is this a big ballad? no time now to check out your web...work to do smile

phill

4,163

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi trevor,

just seen your song, do you know what sort of thing your looking for, or has daddycool sorted it out for you?

i like the flow of the chords, but i'm afraid i played it in a waltz time 3/4 beat, or as russ keeps telling me 6/8 ?

you can email me direct if you have anything you'd like to discuss, i'll be on-line till about 9.00pm tonight [wednesday]

phill.

4,164

(27 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

hi toney,

i appreciate your pique, and i know i am guilty of using this "catch phrase" my self quite a lot.
the reason for this is that i feel i have made a lot of friends here on chordie, and so i dont use the phrase when i dont actually feel friends with someone. i hope you understand this?

i agree with most of the others you mention, some are words that have been corrupted to make a "slang" metaphor. this usually stems from people just being too lazy to speak properly, and others then copying as if it's a new trend, which is one of my "pet hates"

so in future, i'll try and limit my expression of friendship to the bare minimum.

phill

4,165

(47 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

as an addendum,

[i think i'd better put things straight]

in the UK, you can go to the A&E with broken or suspected bones at any time, i went last year after almost splitting my head open in work, and had the full treatment for free, MRI the lot as they thought i'd broken my neck! i hadn't, but in case. the NHS is a wonderful institution. in wales we also have free doctors prescriptions, which they dont have in england, but the tories have already said that they will withdraw them if they get in next time!

come on LABOUR

phill

4,166

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

As a special request from Ctec

Maybe I'm Wrong.Undefined


[Cm] Maybe I'm wrong, [G aug] maybe your right.


[Eb] Maybe there's nothing left to [F] say here tonight.


[Fm] Maybe as lovers we've [C] used it all up.


[Dm] Maybe it's time we said “[F] enough is [G] enough� .




[C] It breaks my heart to think we're [G] through.


I still feel that I have [Am] love for you, here inside.[F-G]


[C] How can I live if we're [G] apart, each day would break my [Am] heart.


A little more.[F-G]




[Am] Maybe I'm wrong, [F] maybe your right.


[G] Let's talk it [F] over tonight.[C]


[Db-Ab-F-G]


[C] I'm not designed to be [G] alone.


I wont survive outside our [Am] home, is that a [F] lie?-[G]


[C] If I'm a victim in your [G] game.


Apuppet dancing [Am] from your chain, make me [F] go.-[G]



[Am] Maybe I'm wrong, [F] maybe your right. [G] Lets talk it [F] over tonight.-[C]


[F] We dont [G] have to take this kind of, [C] bussybodiness.[Am]


[Dm] Stay on your [G] own side of the [C] door. [Ab-Bb]


[Ab] I'm telling [Bb] you, and you [Eb] know what I say is [F] true.


[Fm] Forget the [G] outside, let's [Ab] play our own [C] game.


[Cm] Maybe I'm wrong, [Gaug] maybe your right.


[Eb] Maybe there's nothing left to [F] say here tonight.


[Fm] Maybe as lovers we've [C] used it all up.


[Dm] Maybe it's time we said “[F] enough is enough� .[G]


But then again....


[Cm] Maybe I'm right, [Gaug] maybe your wrong.


[Eb] If I had to chose another, [F] would she be as strong?


[Fm] Would she care for me the [C] way that you do?


[Dm] Would I love her, the [F] way that [G] I love [C] you?





Words and Music by Phill Williams.       29/07/86 & 17/01/06 & 21/07/09

4,167

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi again trevor,

your right lennon is the man, i've never been into dylan or donovan that much.

your wish is my command, i'll dig out maybe i'm wrong and post it asap.

phill

4,168

(47 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

I have found over the last few years the NHS has become a lesser reflection of what it was. Consecutive Conservative governments have tried their hardest to rid itself of this money pit, and even the Labour government has tried cutting back, preferring to spend our taxes on saving banks and funding unwinable wars.

here's an example;

you phone up your local GP surgery to ask for an appointment, they tell you that all the appointments for today have been filled, so you say OK, can I make one for tomorrow, they say phone back in the morning about 8.30....
so you phone back at 8.30, but you cant get through!!! so you keep trying. then at 9.00, you get an answer and they say....you guessed it, sorry all today's appointments have gone....

You eventually get to see your doctor, he says what's wrong, and you say nothing, I've recovered now waiting for an appointment!   You get the idea?

My wife suffered with abdominal problem's for about 6 months and lost half her body weight before the surgeons  decided that there was something wrong. They eventually removed half her bowel and a lump the size of a tennis ball. She's good now, put the weight back on and Ill be eternally grateful to the surgeon.

It's not the fault of the medical staff, as they are as good if not better than medics anywhere in the world, it's just that because it's free, people will abuse the system. People from abroad come and use the service we have paid for all our lives, for free! And yes, you can jump the queue by going private, which is what our government would like, which means you pay twice!

Phill

4,169

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi wayne,

i found myself in the same situation a month ago, i was depressed as hell to begin with but i'm learning to live with it now. but as long as e can strum that old guitar we'll survive.

strum on

phill

4,170

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi trevor,

just went to your zebox site, little disapointed this wasnt there, still gave a listen to the other tracks till the player got stuck....my luck!

very dylanesque with a touch of donovan, melodic and sensitive.very nice

phill

4,171

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi ken,

very emotive words my scotish friend.

i think we've all made our feelings clear on the subject of war recently, but i still wouldnt berate what our brave lads [brits and yanks] are doing over there, they are risking their lives not just for the greedy multi-millionaires and self-serving governments, but for us, their friends countrymen and most of all their families.
please dont forget what happened in lockerbie, and that was before we invaded iraq or afghanistan.

hail the hero's

phill

4,172

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

dont we all wish....

4,173

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

nice twist robert.

phill

4,174

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

nice one, coulndt help noticing the epiphone guitar, lovely tone. good vid too

phill

hi ctech,

nice flow to the words, i'll have a listen tomorrow and comment properly then

phill