thanks russ and ark,
tapping your feet eh?
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thanks russ and ark,
tapping your feet eh?
I have to thank Zurf for that fabulous link...if you haven't watched it yet...you really should!
Phill
Finished Freak-Out
by Phill Williams. 7th August 2009
As I stand here with my long hair flowing
Scent of Patchouli fills my sense
All my friends acting doped and silly
They all take this and that and say "I have as well"
Truth be told, I've never wanted that feeling
Never taken what we say expands our minds
As the music plays ever louder, ever crazy
Wild eyes rolling, arms waving are we spent?
Now the band gets really crazy
Back projections, bubbles and foam
Smoke appears and screaming solo's
The drummer strips off all his clothes
Ah! they say if you recall the 60's
Could it be that you weren't there?
I was there, I saw the chaos
I made it through, but with shorter hair
We really thought we were bucking the system
Here's one in the eye for chinless man
He who rules and takes our wages
Thinks he can do, thinks we cant...
Oh! dear friends, children of the love-in
Lost forever, gone those days
While we wish for days and times more pleasant
As we rock in armchairs and curse the change
Looking at photo's long forgotten
Stashed in wardrobes, behind old clothes
That was me in beard and loon pants
Love beads, long hair and that kaftan...oh!
Ten years later married with children
How the ideals lost their goal
A job a wage and playing bingo
Sunday lunch time, cards and home
Will someone save me from this nightmare?
Ten more years and she has gone
All that's left is singles bars and strip-clubs
How did I let my-self get so low?
Born in the 50's, died in the 70's
Just a zombie from then till now
Women came and soon departed
Still don't know just what I want
And so I close this memoir of depression
Still smiling at those days of yore
Smashing drums while in a freak-out
But all that now is just a bore.
nice one stonebridge,
well thought out and executed specially; "if love is a flower come walk in my garden"
trouble is; we will all expect more from you now...keep em coming
phill
thanks selso,
no band i'm afraid, all done by my own fair hand
phill
no lieven, your not the only one, i started to learn musical notation back in the 70's, so i can read a wee bit. but as for writing...that's a no-no.
when i come to a tabs page, i turn over as quickly as i can.
so most of the time, i listen to a piece, try to visualise what is being played, then try to sound like that!....it doesn't always work!
when i'm writing, i just hit chords until i find what i think is the right one...i'm usually wrong...
phill
i will join you in giving condolences to harry's family and friends, the picture shows a man of strength and character, and talent as he's also written his memoirs into a book, intelligence and compassion.
i wont go into politics again, so i'll just say i abhor war, but respect those that take part, as they are better men than i.
phill
hi kenny,
long time no hear old buddy, i must have been away when you posted this, but i'm so glad it's come up, i've got to say i love this song, i cant work out peoples songs from just the words and chords, so i was very happy to see you'd recorded it and put on your myspace!
10 out of 10
lets have some more
phill
hi ark,
such a departure, a catchy little hook and melody line. you seem to have got the mandolin down to a tee. nice one
phill
hi leiven,
there are so many ways that i write, i cant say i write one way more than another.
for example; i was laying in bed this morning when i had the first spark of a new song, i imagined how the intro would sound using Bb-F-Gm-Bb, in an eagles acoustic rhythm. i had no words at this time.
a couple of hours later, after breakfast, cleaning down the wall tiles in the kitchen and hoovering up, i retired to my studio [the front room] and began strumming the chords, which soon developed into some words, then i took it up a full tone to make it easier to sing, and once i finish here, i shall record the song.
i have also written songs on the piano, and once on the bass guitar!
no depends my friend
phill
hello robert,
another cracker my friend.
phill
hi kajima,
i thought "and the sun will shine" or "come right in the end"
nice words and i too look forward to hearing this. any chance of up-loading it?
phill
hi hairy botty,
thanks for the compliments, if only i could play the guitar like russ it would be ten times better!
kajima, yes i had a lot of trouble finding out how to get to the music section, but as restlessspirit said, you click my name under the picture and you go right to it. and thanks for the compliment mr spirit [3 s's...nice one!]
ark, you are the chillout king and i think i owe you and russ a big drink for this, as russ has gone into blues mode lately, and i've been listening to a lot of your music which is a lot more professional and tuneful than my stuff.
hey russ, and not a loop in sight, even if i had a looper i wouldn't be able to work it, dere's magic in dem hats? ![]()
phill
that's right robert, if she's two faced, kick `er into touch
nice song
phill
hi guys,
4 times i've tried to up-load this track!
1st time, i recorded it live, sounded good at the time, then after up-loading it sounded out of tune, so i re-recorded it. ![]()
then i up-loaded again, and the wrong song went up...give me strength. ![]()
so i deleted both tracks and tried again, still the wrong song. ![]()
anyway i've tried again, i think it's right this time. ![]()
amen
I have to put my 2 shillings worth in...
In Wales there is a tradition of the BARD. The bard, was a kind of troubadour, that would travel the highways from town to village singing songs of great battles, sometimes with the aid of a harp sometimes without.
It was often said that as the bard recited a poem that his voice was so beautiful that the sound was like angels singing. This tradition continues to this day with the Welsh National Eisteddfod, which began due to the South Welsh had sweet voices, and the North Welsh had the gift of poetry.
The song is there, it is for the listener, or reader to hear it.
Phill
I think songs and poems should be categorized for easier access.
This isn't actually a song, it's an instrumental. It's a bit of a departure for me as I think it is somewhat bluesy, if you listen to it IT'S ON SOUNDCLICK use the link at the bottom, I would like to know if you like it and if it reminds you of something else, I'd hate to have knicked someone else's tune.
Here are the chords....
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I'll shut up then!:rolleyes:
dont joke about tiger balm...it bites!
that's a disturbing thought....arthritis up the Khyber pass, or on the tonsils....euw!!!
well if no one else is going to say anything....i will
THAT'S A MIGHTY FINE LOOKING GUITAR.
phill
another fine auld oirish ballard, or is lament?
this is an excellent piece of work my friend, and i should say make a truly fine rollicking song. i could picture the scenes as you describe them, and hear the male and female voices singing their parts. i can hardly wait to hear it recorded...
congrats
phill
hi bud_wiser,
when i write, i wont force a song just cos i haven't done one in a while...let it come naturally.
they say that minor chords make a song bluesy or ballardy, not necessarily...
so, a good story teller can look around him and make a story from what he sees, eg: my son has been having a lot of problems with his girlfriend, which he wont dump! but i've got 4 or 5 songs from it!
a friend had problems with a woman he had strong feelings for, she was unhappily married, another song.
i once saw graffiti on a wall saying "tracy loves paul" yep you guessed it, but i binned the song it was rubbish! so dont expect everything you write to be the new "bohemian rhapsody" you've got to write crap to know when you've got a good one.
as for performing, if your going to do your own songs, which are [in your words] "gloomy" do a couple of up-tempo/up-beat covers. break the night up.
hope i've helped
phill
oh yes! done a lot of bus ridin' in my time. but i still love the smell of leather and diesel and rubber you used to get from the old buses back in the 50's. give me a "Guy" or an "AEC" any time.
The buses in Turkey are interesting as their called "dolmus" which apparently means stuffed, which they frequently are.
nice writing, the poems are getting more varied now which is great, not just love and death
phill
echo's of lady in red?
what were you thinking 1st or 2nd world war? weve all been a little pre-occupied with the big ones lately, but i like your images here and i could visualise the lipstick and the dress and shoes, i can remember my mother back in the early 50's wearing a crushed velvet gown she borrowed for a special night out with my dad.
one thing though...just a thought, at the end of the second verse, if you change "deserve" to "desire" it rhymes better and doesn't detract from the story!
phill
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