Peatle Jville wrote:Neo the solo and band version have come out good. Back in 95 sounds like you had a good band going then. Excellent hard hitting lyrics.
Thanks; that wasn't a band in '95, I recorded the track on an 8 track recorder (Tascam 488), then hired a studio to record the drummer from my old band ...
Jandle wrote:neophytte, firstly thanks for popping your song into this month, because this link doesn't close like the suggestion ones do
I had a listen again to both versions and I thought both were good but the band version really made this song pop! It felt to me, at least in my humble opinion, that the song really suited having backing.
Thank you; I've noticed a lot of my old songs, particularly those with distortion or guitar riffs, don't transfer well to acoustic interpretation, this one isn't too bad in that respect, though, and I really appreciate your (and everybodys!) input - it's always interesting to hear different opinions about what works and doesn't work, and hear different perspectives about the music!
Sorry, commented on each track on the external sites, but not here:
I like this song; it has a good rocky beat and the lyrics fit in well - the vocals add to the effect of 'all about keeping my spirits up', while sounding monotone and down; it reminded me somewhat of a song that Dylan would write and perform. Keep it up!!
Jandle wrote: I did find this though one though 'Crazy World' which I did 7 years ago, the first song I ever performed on soundcloud and it was one easybeat had written the lyrics to and I put chords to it and performed. Going down memory lane now. https://soundcloud.com/ukulelejan/crazy-worldmp3
Our (boy) cat is called Joy!!
This song really suited both the uke and your voice - and my only complaint would be it feels like it could go for a bridge and then another verse ...
Peatle Jville wrote:I had to put it up again my April entry as in my rush to put it up I put the wrong version up and also the wrong title for my song. So here is the proper version sorry about that. The song is called My World For Chordie.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FNzfPx-p6qQ
Yes, I also noticed you'd edited a bit more than the title, didn't see your wife walk past, and some of the vocal lines were a bit different (going from memory!!) - but I did like the content of 'my world' as you've written it; we all seem to be reaching a common theme, which I think you've piqued quite well - "keep the crazies and politicians away, and let me live my life in harmony"!!
I always love the effort you put into the video editing too!! I'll draw some inspiration from that ...
Cheers
Richard (better get back to work now!!) 