601 Reply by TIGLJK

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks for all the comments !

Graham - yes - quite sad - I can't really say why - guess it was just the mood I was in.
Easybeat - I like the lyrics - IDK about being my best, as I can't sing a lick, so it only sounds good in my head. smile 
Peatle - thanks for giving it a go - I always like when others do my songs - it is so interesting
to see how others interpret the lyrics and play the music. I like how you did the chorus - with the walk down !
Phill - Thanks for giving it a look - yeah a bit on the downside - just trying to envision a person
trying to figure out what the heck went wrong in a relationship - and knowing it isn't going to
get fixed.

Thank you all - I will try to get it recorded so you can hear what it sounds like to me. 

Jim     

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602 Topic by TIGLJK

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I wrote this morning for my  Chordie SOM  entry

I liked it - so I thought I'd post here as well.

let me know what you think.
Jim


Time Whispers by Jim Kenyon


Verse 1


.




[C] It feels like we’ve been lost


[C]at sea for months


as I [F] sit in a house, that’s filled


with [C] everything but love


.




[C] who was it that said,


[C]don’t build your house on sand ?


It will [F] crumble in the storms,


‘til there’s [C] nothing left, to speak of




.




Chorus


as [G] time whispers [F] love is slipping a[C]way


and [G] time whispers [F] love is slipping a[C]way


.




Verse 2


.


[C] Seems that we’ve forgotten


[C] Why our lips have kissed


And how [F] our hearts used to


beat [C] together as one


.




[C] every road is lonely now


[C] every word prays for help


What was [F]once, now is


gone , and [C] the passion’s done




.





Chorus


.


as [G] time whispers [F] love is slipping a[C]way


and [G] time whispers [F] love is slipping a[C]way


.




Verse 3


.




[C] was it chances afraid to take


[C] promises we didn’t keep


maybe[F] secrets we didn’t share


or words [C] spoken long ago


.






[C] feelings that aren’t the same


[C] hearts with too much ache


Why this [F]love story has to end


I guess [C] we’ll never know


.




Chorus



as [G] time whispers [F] love is slipping a[C]way


and [G] time whispers [F] love is slipping a[C]way


.




(fade out)




as [G] time whispers [F] love is slipping a[C]wayy


and [G] time whispers [F] love is slipping a[C]way



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603 Reply by TIGLJK

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Here is my entry   - as usual - I used all the words.   
I posted it in songwriting as well

Time Whispers by Jim Kenyon


Verse 1


.




[C] It feels like we’ve been lost


[C]at sea for months


as I [F] sit in a house, that’s filled


with [C] everything but love


. [G][F][C]




[C]who was it who said,


[C]don’t build your house on sand ?


It will [F] crumble in the storms,


‘til there’s [C] nothing left, to speak of


.




Chorus


as [G] time whispers [F] love is slipping a[C]way


and [G] time whispers [F] love is slipping a[C]way


.




Verse 2


.




[C] Seems we’ve forgotten


[C] Why our lips have kissed


And how [F] our hearts used to beat


to [C]gether as one as one




[G][F][C]


[C] every road now feels lonely


[C] every word prays for help


What was [F]once, now is



gone , and the [C] passion is done


.




Chorus


as [G] time whispers [F] love is slipping a[C]way


and [G] time whispers [F] love is slipping a[C]way


.




Verse 3


.




[C] was it chances afraid to take


[C] promises we didn’t keep


maybe[F] secrets we didn’t share


or words [C] spoken long ago




[G][F][C]


[C] feelings that aren’t the same


[C] hearts with too much ache


Why this [F]love story has to end


guess we’ll [C] never know


.




Chorus


as [G] time whispers [F] love is slipping a[C]way


and [G] time whispers [F] love is slipping a[C]way


.




(fade out)




as [G] time whispers [F] love is slipping a[C]way


and [G] time whispers [F] love is slipping a[C]way


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604 Reply by TIGLJK

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Jeff

Terrific
emotional
well developed
soul moving thoughts

Thanks for sharing
Jim     

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605 Reply by TIGLJK

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Brian

I don't see anything in my email from you.
Jim     

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606 Reply by TIGLJK

(14 replies, posted in Poems)

I agree with Brian !

Parking space blues
or Road Rage symphony     

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607 Reply by TIGLJK

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Phill
Sorry for the loss for all of the UK and the World. She was a kind soul who symbolized what a leader should be.
The world is a better place b/c of her.  I wish our leaders today had her mentality and compassion.
The epitome of class!

Best wishes to King Charles III    and all of England.

Jim     

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608 Reply by TIGLJK

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Nicely done Brian - I kept waiting for the whistling ! smile  Quite agree with Peatle - guitar playing is very good.  thanks for starting this month off !

yes Peatle - very good ! love the lyrics - words are very true.  Totally agree with what Richard Morse said !

UJB -   sounds great - wish video was clearer.    Nice playing and singing - cool song - did you write it ?

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609 Reply by TIGLJK

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that would be so awesome - love to experience it     

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610 Reply by TIGLJK

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Richard 

very nice cover of this song.
I had not heard this for a long time thoroughly enjoyed it !     

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611 Reply by TIGLJK

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Jan - Girl with the golden voice ! She should have been in a recording studio years ago IMHO !

Just leaves it to imagination what she would sound like with a band rather than her Uke (which is very good! )

Jim     

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612 Topic by TIGLJK

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A new song I wrote - pretty much thinking about when I was first dating my wife. ( and being scared to tell her those three magic words smile  !!!    I chose the title bc - it seemed to capture  what happened - we've been married 39 years  smile
I borrowed a couple lines from the Bible - but I figured if the Byrds could do a whole song (Turn,Turn Turn) , I could pilfer a couple sentences. smile  Still needs some tweaking - feed back is appreciated !


Here To Stay by Jim Kenyon


.


Verse 1




[G]Well I‘ve been too scared to [C]say thatI [G]love you


Oh, I [G]want to, but I’m [C]really not sure [G]how


I guess in [C]love, you don’t need any [G]reasons


But I [D]know that I could [C] use a couple [G]now




.


Verse 2


.




[G]You and I are far from [C]perfect, as we both[G]know


but we [G]are perfect for each [C] other it now [G] seems


You know it’s [C] love when you can't fall [G]asleep


Because[D] reality is [C] better than my [G] dreams




Chorus


.


[C]Love is always patient [G]Love is always kind


[C]Love endures whatever comes it’s [G]way


And it’s [C] always ready to offer trust and[G] comfort



Oh, I [D]surely hope that [C] love is here to [G] stay




.


Verse 3


.




[G]How you hold me at night, just[C]drives me [G] wild


and your [G]kisses, bring out the [C]hot desire in [G]me


you make me[C] smile even when you’re not [G]around


lost with [D]you for[C]ever, is where I want to [G]be.


.




Chorus


.




[C]Love is always patient [G]Love is always kind


[C]Love endures whatever comes it’s [G]way


And it’s [C] always ready to offer trust and[G] comfort


Oh, I [D]surely hope that [C] love is here to [G] stay


Oh, I [D]surely hope that [C] love is here to [G] stay


Oh, I [D]surely hope that [C] love is here to [G] stay




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613 Reply by TIGLJK

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Jeff - Love this song - strong message about persevering !  Music sounds terrific - it made me feel like you were putting a voice inside my head to keep on keeping on !  Thanks for sharing.  Jim     

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614 Reply by TIGLJK

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Peatle
I totally agree with Phill
It is exactly how I feel about my town.
I felt smart reading this as well because you (and Jan ) have already educated me on what a Tui is !  smile

Great poem Peatle - I know bc I have re-read it several times !!
Excellent messages from the heart.

Jim     

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615 Reply by TIGLJK

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Graham

How long does it take to get a band to be able to nail a song completely ?  If you are adding nine songs it must take quite a bit of practice and tweaking.
Have you been playing together a long time.

I ask you these questions bc I know it takes me a long time just to remember the lyrics smile

and as to my critique of the song, I am an expert on bad timing and voicing bc all my songs are that way smile     

I am looking forward to your new posts on the songs !  Once again , I AM SOOOO JEALOUS - I wish I had the talent to be a performer.

Jim     

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616 Reply by TIGLJK

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Graham

Sounded great - loved the songs except - knocking on Heavens door. Thought the timing or voicing of the lyrics was off.
Still-  it is awesome you and the boys can do this.. Great sound - lots of fun - I am jealous !

Jim     

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617 Reply by TIGLJK

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EB

My choice would be d) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nzX4xK6jZaM   
  it's on " ewe" tube !
It's a " shear delight" to hear so many funny thing here.!

Did you know that there are three times as many sheep in Wales as there are people ?
They come in all sheeps and sizes !
You "herd" it here first !

What instument do  Jan and Peatle on Chordie like to play ?   A " ewekulele ".



you guys are all tooooo funny !  If you keep writing all these sheep puns you could win  the 2022  "Woolitzer" Prize !


Thanks for the laughs

Jim     

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618 Reply by TIGLJK

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Brian
That last line is hilarious !     

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619 Reply by TIGLJK

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Fantastic Peatle     

the poor guy - doesn't he know the weirdest part of gathering a sheep at a bar, is that on the way out the door - the rest will follow you ?  smile

you are so clever Peatle

really enjoyed it

Jm

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620 Reply by TIGLJK

(9 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Mojo that looks like a real clean machine !  Hope it sounds great for you.

Jim     

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621 Reply by TIGLJK

(46 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)

Brian Thanks  for the kind words.


Thanks Graham

Here is my version.   I can only imagine how much better you will make it !  Can't wait for that !

https://soundcloud.com/tigljk/everythin … al_sharing     

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622 Reply by TIGLJK

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Brian

Really liked your song

https://soundcloud.com/rough-as-gut/flowers-and-whisky   

I left comment on SC

Great job!

Jim     

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623 Reply by TIGLJK

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OK as usual I couldn't resist the challenge of using them all in an original..... smile
TOMORROW… FLOWERS …WITHOUT… WHISKEY.
so here it is .. bluesy, country song

Everything In The World To Me by Jim Kenyon


.


Verse 1


[Em]Seems we’re always waiting for tomorrow


[Em]believing something good will happen then


And [Em]the nighttime whispers better times are coming


but it [B7]never seems to [Am]want to tell you [Em]when


.


Verse 2




[Em]So I’ve been living in a world of yesterdays


[Em]Where you only remember things you love


Just [Em] like the smile of a woman who’s gone away


and some [B7] whiskey for [Am] when you’ve had [Em]enough


.




Chorus


[Am]So I’m waiting for a new day to make me[Em] happy


And [Am] let my heart feel again what love used to [Em]be



But i [Am] don’t want tomorrow to start without[Em] her


Because she’s[B7] everything in the [Am]world to [Em]me


.


Verse 3




Yeah [Em] I loved her like wild flowers love the sun


[Em]But she told me she needed something more


She [Em] said it was something I couldn’t understand


Right as [B7] she turned and [Am]walked out the [Em]door


.


Chorus


[Am]So I’m waiting for a new day to make me[Em] happy


And [Am] let my heart feel again what love used to [Em]be


But i [Am] don’t want tomorrow to start without[Em] her


Because she’s[B7] everything in the [Am]world to [Em]me





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624 Reply by TIGLJK

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Nice one Graham !

Fun song !


Jim     

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625 Reply by TIGLJK

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Jan
Thank you.

That is probably the best description - wish I had of thought of it ! smile

Jim     

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