601

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I wrote this song this morning, hope you like it
Let me know if you have suggestions for improvement.


What Love Can’t Do By Jim Kenyon



Verse 1


[C] Oh, the writing was there, [Am]right on the wall


But [F]who would ever think that [G]love could fall


[C]There was a time, yeah,[Am] there was a time


That [F] I was yours, and baby, [G]you were mine


.






Verse 2


oh,[C] the passion was hot, but our [Am]hearts grew cold


we [F]never thought that love could [G] ever grow old


we were [C]young and wild, full of [Am]foolish dreams


now [F] it's like we're falling apart [G]at the seams


.


Chorus


.


[F]if only we could forget the hard times we’ve had


and [C]get through the worst,take the good from the bad


but [F] words aren't enough, as we're finding so true


it’ such a[G] shame to find out just [F]what love can’t [C]do


it’ such a[G] shame to find out just [F]what love can’t [C]do


.


Verse 3



[C]oh, you don't think it'll come, can’t im[Am]agine the day


You [F] can’t know how you’ll feel, or [G]what you’ll say


yeah we [C] started a fire, that's grown to a[Am] raging storm


and now we’re[F] feeling lonely instead of[G] safe and warm


.


Verse 4


.




[C] oh, we looked for sunshine but all we[Am] got was rain


yeah we[F] ached for laughter but all we [G] felt was pain


we were [C] chasing a love we thought would [Am]never end


but now we [F] only have hearts that we can't [G]seem to mend


.


Chorus


.


[F]if only we could forget the hard times we’ve had


[C]get through the worst,and take the good from the bad


but [F] words aren't enough, as we're finding so true


it’ such a[G] shame to find out just [F]what love can’t [C]do


it’ such a[G] shame to find out just [F]what love can’t [C]do


it’ such a[G] shame to find out just [F]what love can’t [C]do


yeah, it’ such a[G] shame to find out just [F]what love can’t [C]do



Here is the song if you want to write down the lyrics.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=24swDlw6m18     

603

(5 replies, posted in Poems)

Sounds great  Scott !

I believe you might be closing in on Joey,Joey,Joey as I see a whole lot of guitars hanging !! smile

Looking forward to finished work.

JIm     

604

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Trevor,

Looks great.
There are many ways to interpret those lyrics - makes it very interesting !
Can't wait to hear it.
Nicely done.
Jim     

605

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Ok here is a song I wrote this morning - my wife just left yesterday to go to California to be with my daughter. I think I was missing her already ! smile
I actually wrote it and then realized it fit also for the Song of the month challenge.

I chose the day of the Week bc it starts with " Monday" in the lyric. !

Once in a lifetime by Jim Kenyon


Verse 1


.




[C] Monday morning is [Em] here once more


And it’s [Dm]two cups of coffee and I’m [G] out the door


[C] gotta get to work, though I [Em] don’t want to go


‘cause your [Dm] on my mind, as I’m [G] sure you know




Verse 2


.




[C] It begins to rain, but [Em]I just smile


‘because I’m[Dm] thinking of you [G]all the while


[C] your love is like a [Em] summer breeze


You know , it [Dm]warms my heart and puts [G] my mind at ease


.




Chorus


[Am]When I first met you, you took my [Em]breath away


And you [Dm] still do it to me every [G] single day



and the [Am]way you touch me tells me how [Em]much you care


and let’s me [Dm]know that this is a once in a [G]lifetime love we [C]share




Verse 3


[C] Some times gentle and [Em]sometimes wild


It seems that [Dm] everything you do just [G]makes me smile


Oh you’re the [C] center of my life, I [Em] hope you see


God knows [Dm]you’re the best thing that’s ever[G] happened to me




.


Chorus


[Am]When I first met you, you took my [Em]breath away


And you [Dm] still do it to me every [G] single day


and the [Am]way that you touch me tells me how [Em]much you care


and let’s me [Dm]know that this is a once in a [G]lifetime love we [C]share


yeah, [G]this is a once in a lifetime [Dm]love we [C]share


yeah, [G]this is a once in a lifetime [Dm]love we [C]share


yeah, [G]this is a once in a lifetime [Dm]love we [C]share





 

Ok here is a song I wrote this morning - my wife just left yesterday to go to California to be with my daughter. I think I was missing her already ! smile

I chose the day of the Week !

Once in a lifetime by Jim Kenyon


Verse 1


.




[C] Monday morning is [Em] here once more


And it’s [Dm]two cups of coffee and I’m [G] out the door


[C] gotta get to work, though I [Em] don’t want to go


‘cause your [Dm] on my mind, as I’m [G] sure you know




Verse 2


.




[C] It begins to rain, but [Em]I just smile


‘because I’m[Dm] thinking of you [G]all the while


[C] your love is like a [Em] summer breeze


You know , it [Dm]warms my heart and puts [G] my mind at ease


.




Chorus


[Am]When I first met you, you took my [Em]breath away


And you [Dm] still do it to me every [G] single day



and the [Am]way you touch me tells me how [Em]much you care


and let’s me [Dm]know that this is a once in a [G]lifetime love we [C]share




Verse 3


[C] Some times gentle and [Em]sometimes wild


It seems that [Dm] everything you do just [G]makes me smile


Oh you’re the [C] center of my life, I [Em] hope you see


God knows [Dm]you’re the best thing that’s ever[G] happened to me




.


Chorus


[Am]When I first met you, you took my [Em]breath away


And you [Dm] still do it to me every [G] single day


and the [Am]way that you touch me tells me how [Em]much you care


and let’s me [Dm]know that this is a once in a [G]lifetime love we [C]share


yeah, [G]this is a once in a lifetime [Dm]love we [C]share


yeah, [G]this is a once in a lifetime [Dm]love we [C]share


yeah, [G]this is a once in a lifetime [Dm]love we [C]share





Hello all !
I have written this about ghosts - and linked it to the war.
I have no real chords for it, so I just put a couple in so it qualifies as a song. ( needs a lot of work) smile
Anyone that has some ideas for the music - please have a go at it if you like the lyrics.
Thanks
Jim

Ghosts of Mariupolby Jim Kenyon


verse1


[Am] Fleeing without food, with faces white as ghosts


From the towns in mountains,and the [Em7] cities, by the coast


[Am]Like lost zombies they do roam, feeling [Dm] abandoned andall alone


[Em7]with lives that are broken, and [Am]running from shattered homes




.




verse 2


[Am]This is how the besieged people of Mariupol appear


pain and anguish fill their days, their [Em7]night’s consumed by]fear


[Am]rumbling bombs and bullets, sound [Dm] like distant thunder rolls


[Em7]there's too much of nothing left, and[Am] tears they can’t control




.




chorus


well there’s [Dm] blood on the conscience, and[Am] blood on the streets


it's [Dm] born from greed and power, and[Em7] covered by deceit


[Am]death so cruel it stains the air,it’s [Dm] there for all to see


[Em7]with cries of hope to no avail, just[Am] yearning to be free.


.





verse 3


[Am]Children and women being killed, has become our reality


with [Am] Oppression, suppression,in a world of [Em7]lost morality


[Am]Someday Angels will seek retribution for [Dm]what is being stole


As we[Em7] all watch, as witnesses, for the[Am] Ghosts of Mariupol




.




chorus


chorus


well there’s [Dm]blood on the conscience, and[Am] blood on the streets


it's [Dm]born from greed and power, and[Em7] covered by deceit


[Am]death so cruel it stains the air,it’s [Dm]there for all to see


[Em7]with cries of hope to no avail, just[Am] yearning to be free.


.




[Am]Someday Angels will seek retribution for [Dm]what is being stole


As we[Em7] all watch, as witnesses, for the[Am] Ghosts of Mariupol


[Em7]As we all watch, as witnesses, for the [Am]Ghosts of Mariupol


As we[Em7] all watch, as witnesses, for the[Am] Ghosts of Mariupol



Thank you all !!

If you remember, I got a lot of feedback as I was writing it and made many changes thanks to advice and comments from the good folks here on chordie. I am thankful for that !

Retirement - I'm busy, but I do miss the coaching of the sports teams.

Thanks again
Jim     

I made a video of the song I wrote.

If you are interested in watching it here is the link.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MfpoTP5MxAU

My apologies for not being very active on Chordie for the past couple months,
Since I have retired, I have had so many things going on it has made my head spin.
Hopefully I can get back to being more active here - I do enjoy it.
   Jim 

Neo

That was awesome !
Great song !

Did you take guitar lessons as a younger child ?

Jim     

611

(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thank you for the kind words.
Yes, Jim and Rachel have done several songs for me. They are great people smile
It feels great to be able to chat with my friends on chordie.

That could be made in to a song I think - " Friends I've never met"  smile

Have a great weekend everyone !
Jim     

612

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Hello fellow chordians !

I have been away about a month and a half - in California. Welcomed a new grandson to the world !! Been incredibly busy there, and enjoyed the beautiful weather.

Just got back home. I have been reading tons of great stuff today that you guys and gals have posted.
I didn't have access to chordie while in Ca.

I had my Nashville friend Jim and Rachel record my song .. they just sent it to me. Let me know what you think.

https://soundcloud.com/james-kenyon-997 … al_sharing

I will try to get back into the chordie swing of things ASAP ( it was so good to see the reappearance of so many!)

Jim 

613

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I have been away for a week and came back expecting to se loads of new topics.  Not A one that I can see !

I hope it doesn't have anything to do with the Ukraine situation.


Hope you all are well

Jim 

614

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I have been away for a week and came back expecting to se loads of new topics.  Not A one that I can see !

I hope it doesn't have anything to do with the Ukraine situation.


Hope you all are well

Jim 

615

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I have been away for a week and came back expecting to se loads of new topics.  Not A one that I can see !

I hope it doesn't have anything to do with the Ukraine situation.


Hope you all are well

Jim 

616

(0 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

I have been away for a week and came back expecting to se loads of new topics.  Not A one that I can see !

I hope it doesn't have anything to do with the Ukraine situation.


Hope you all are well

Jim 

617

(0 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

I have been away for a week and came back expecting to se loads of new topics.  Not A one that I can see !

I hope it doesn't have anything to do with the Ukraine situation.


Hope you all are well

Jim 

618

(24 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

I have been away for a week and came back expecting to se loads of new topics.  Not A one that I can see !

I hope it doesn't have anything to do with the Ukraine situation.


Hope you all are well

Jim 

619

(6 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

oooops

Sorry guys.

anyways, I have always  liked Procul Harum songs

Where does the name of the group originate and what does it mean ?     

620

(6 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

always sad news to hear.

I don't think Brooker was the original drummer with the band, but the one that lasted the longest and became famous.     

621

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Ok
so here is what I thought of when I just read  that  verse -  I immediately thought of slavery in U.S.   Slaves that ran away using underground railroad. Jumping the broomstick was how slaves on plantations got married (with owners permission or insistence in some cases - basically breeding ) of course.  It's funny how a person can look at lyrics and see something completely different that the author's intent.  That's the beauty of poetry.

Some live in the moonlight.

I live in the sun.

my folks jumped the broomstick.

at the end of a gun.

They tied the knot.

and then he ran.     

622

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Nice work fellas.
Song sounds great, nice story line, video was very cool as well.

Congrats on the collaboration!     

623

(4 replies, posted in Poems)

Jeff
That is very,very good !  Love it !

Put some music to it !

Jim     

624

(7 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Well ,  after 45 years of teaching and coaching, I retired today !
More time on chordie I guess  smile

Jim 

625

(14 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

ZURF

Still is cooler than the other side of a pillow and I'd go fishing anyways !!

Jim