Thats very clever Phill.
As a side note i saw in the news the other day a fish & chip shop called the `Battered Wife`
It`s been in existence for 28 yrs,but of course you can`t have humour anymore.
I don`t fancy their chances of keeping the name.
651 2018-11-15 04:28:23
Re: Chips. (18 replies, posted in Poems)
652 2018-11-14 23:47:37
Re: There Goes Santa Claus (14 replies, posted in Songwriting)
TF
thats great,lets hear it eh?
653 2018-11-14 20:56:02
Re: Jenny (12 replies, posted in Poems)
Jan
this is an amazing piece of observation and writing!
Many years ago i read a story about the trolley man @ our supermkt
It announced he had died and told a little bit about his life,he had lived a difficult life.
I thought wow i used to take that guy for granted, a nobody.So i vowed i would never do that again.
As an example, now when i shop, it takes twice as long because of all the conversations i have.
I used to have a job where i was invisible to some people.
It tells you a lot about a person when they ignore the invisible people.
Their loss me thinks,often these people have amazing stories to tell.
654 2018-11-14 20:43:05
Re: Eighty Six Questions (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
easybeat .... definately a terrible thing suicide. I don`t think many people have the answer as each case or individual and what their circumstances leading up to their decision to kill themselves differ. Just makes me sad that they haven`t got people they can really open up too and pour their guts out too and having someone that will actually listen to them. Your song is very thought provoking and melancholy.
Thanks Jan,it was meant to be a thought provoking song.At first i thought i hadn`t been clear enough
in what i was saying in the song.I had a couple of comments that thought i was the subject in the song.
It was not a personal story,it was about a terrible epidemic that seems to be getting worse especially
amongst the young.What can i do to help me thinks?Answer write about it.
If it gets people thinking & talking i have accomplished what i set out to do.
Maybe some good will come from me raising this issue in a song.I can only hope.
655 2018-11-14 04:11:21
Re: Spin Doctor (14 replies, posted in Poems)
Yeah Canada seem to be going down this PC road in a big way.
Fisher Folk instead of fisherman
Snow folk instead of Snowman
It`s starting to get that way in NZ,only a matter of time before
Father Christmas is a black lesbian woman!
Naughty Boy Phill!! Whoops naughty person Phill
656 2018-11-14 03:17:39
Re: Eighty Six Questions (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hey Guys this ain`t about me,it`s an observation.Not all songs are love songs.
It`s a subject often in our news,there seems to be an epidemic.
I have some theories on the subject but i really wouldn`t know what the answers are.
Mainly i wanted to write a song with numbers (86) who knows where to rest came from.
thanks for listen and comments.
657 2018-11-13 21:28:28
Topic: Eighty Six Questions (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
A song that may give you something to think about.
Lets have a conversation?
https://soundcloud.com/rough-as-gut/eig … -questions
658 2018-11-10 20:17:29
Re: Back in the Smoky Mountains (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Jets
another nice song from you,i guess chordians love this kinda love song.
But i much prefer when you do that conversational folk style that is unique to you.
659 2018-11-10 20:13:15
Re: Spin Doctor (14 replies, posted in Poems)
P
I`m with you on this one,the answer is don`t believe anything in the media.
Go do some of your own research,listen to many opinions,make up your own mind.
In NZ there are a lot of sheep,not all of them are on the farm.
660 2018-11-08 21:20:23
Re: Feels like heaven (18 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Neo
I like this song a lot!!!!
Been too many serious songs lately,great to see a happy
uplifting one.
661 2018-11-08 21:15:24
Re: NOVEMBER 2018 FSOTM - ONE SONG PER CATEGORY or GENRE (19 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)
Jan
thought i`d do` Summer time` as hopefully we`ll get some summer weather soon.
It`s been a horrible week weather wise.
First time i`ve done this song,reading lyrics as i go.so far from perfect again.
Plenty of mistakes/bum notes from `The King Of Audio Torture`
https://soundcloud.com/rough-as-gut/tascam_1449mp3
i`ll delete in a week.
662 2018-11-03 21:59:55
Re: Close Your Eyes (6 replies, posted in Songwriting)
TIG
Looking forward to hearing it.
663 2018-10-30 00:18:50
Topic: Elusive Truth (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Wrote this song about a search for truth,seems you can have one news story
but depending on where you read or watch it,it almost seems to be totally different.
It gets to be, you don`t know who or what to believe or trust.
https://soundcloud.com/rough-as-gut/elusive-truth
664 2018-10-27 21:06:39
Re: Why Dont Girls Play Air Guitar. (13 replies, posted in Poems)
Peatle
great to see some creative writing on Chordie.
665 2018-10-23 00:08:31
Re: Brauns Lullaby (6 replies, posted in Bands and artists)
CS
brilliant playing,i`m glad you decided to share your music.
I`m so impressed by your playing,maybe i`ll take up the kazoo instead of playing guitar
666 2018-10-18 07:21:01
Re: Seeds To Sow (4 replies, posted in Poems)
Peatle
i love it!!!
it`s great fun jamming words.
I bit of weird music and its a hit!
667 2018-10-17 23:40:33
Topic: Seeds To Sow (4 replies, posted in Poems)
Seeds To Sow
What are these things that go round and round
Bounce off the wall then fall to the ground
Shimmer in the light and die with the night
Come with the wind and rise with the tide
Grow from the bottom the stop at the top
Cover the sky like a pink cloud of smoke
What are these things,we`ll never know
Along comes spring,seeds to sow
harvest in summer
warm coat in Transylvania
668 2018-10-17 23:39:29
Topic: Seeds To Sow (0 replies, posted in Poems)
Seeds To Sow
What are these things that go round and round
Bounce off the wall then fall to the ground
Shimmer in the light and die with the night
Come with the wind and rise with the tide
Grow from the bottom the stop at the top
Cover the sky like a pink cloud of smoke
What are these things,we`ll never know
Along comes spring,seeds to sow
harvest in summer
warm coat in transylvania
669 2018-10-15 08:45:53
Re: Too Many People (19 replies, posted in My local band and me)
Great to see you doing new stuff Peatle
670 2018-10-15 04:28:00
Re: Recording Onto SoundCloud: Do I Have To Pay? (7 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Bill
it`s free to load music,our mate Peatle records on his cellphone then loads it.
email him for advice if required.
671 2018-10-14 22:10:13
Re: It Takes Two (11 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Tig
good to see you`re still writing,is a recording coming?
672 2018-10-14 08:50:53
Re: Are Pitch Correction Devices Autonomous? (14 replies, posted in Recording)
You're speechless???
Or have I "overstepped my bounds"?
Whatever the case, I'm getting ready to put something on SoundCloud, but before I do - does it have to be original or can I cover something else? I don't know for sure if I have ever seen a post where one of you might have done a cover, so that's my reason for asking. The song I want to cover is also easy to strum, not so easy for me to stay on-key, so I want to be as "safe" as I can be.
Thanks
Bill
Bill we`ll take whatever you got,original or cover.
I can hardly wait to see what you do.Bring it on!
673 2018-10-11 08:11:24
Re: OCTOBER 2018 FSOTM – CHALLENGE MONTH (45 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)
Peatle Jville wrote:Neo did a great job of EB and Phills song. I have enjoyed listening to this months FSOTM contributions.
Thanks ... will you be contributing this month? (are you up for a challenge?)
Cheers
Richard
Yeah go on Neo,give Peatle a challenge!!!!!
674 2018-10-10 08:57:37
Re: OCTOBER 2018 FSOTM – CHALLENGE MONTH (45 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)
easybeat wrote:Neo challenged me to do `Crazy` and Jan challenged me to do a song close to the original.
So i`ve got both them in one shot.Haven`t heard the original for a long time.
this is a real singers song,so not one i should do,also i think classics are best left alone.
I`ll only leave it up for a week as it`s a bit of a dogs breakfast.But hey, i`m entering the spirit.
https://soundcloud.com/rough-as-gut/crazyThat was good ... is that in the Willie Nelson style? I haven't heard the original for a long time either, and tend to play it a bit more down-strummy rather than picked ... I hope you leave it up for longer!!
Cheers
Richard
Yeah Willie wrote it,i think he did a just kinda vocal/guitar.
i`ve never played this before, it was a quick off the cuff.
Just read the words and played the chords so probably not very accurate.
675 2018-10-10 08:15:52
Re: OCTOBER 2018 FSOTM – CHALLENGE MONTH (45 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)
Neo challenged me to do `Crazy` and Jan challenged me to do a song close to the original.
So i`ve got both them in one shot.Haven`t heard the original for a long time.
this is a real singers song,so not one i should do,also i think classics are best left alone.
I`ll only leave it up for a week as it`s a bit of a dogs breakfast.But hey, i`m entering the spirit.
https://soundcloud.com/rough-as-gut/crazy