651

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hey Guys this ain`t about me,it`s an observation.Not all songs are love songs.
It`s a subject often in our news,there seems to be an epidemic.
I have some theories on the subject but i really wouldn`t know what the answers are.
Mainly i wanted to write a song with numbers (86) who knows where to rest came from.
thanks for listen and comments.     

652

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

A song that may give you something to think about.
Lets have a conversation?
https://soundcloud.com/rough-as-gut/eig … -questions 

653

(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Jets
another nice song from you,i guess chordians love this kinda love song.
But i much prefer when you do that conversational folk style that is unique to you.     

654

(14 replies, posted in Poems)

P
I`m with you on this one,the answer is don`t believe anything in the media.
Go do some of your own research,listen to many opinions,make up your own mind.
In NZ there are a lot of sheep,not all of them are on the farm.     

655

(18 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Neo
I like this song a lot!!!!
Been too many serious songs lately,great to see a happy
uplifting one.     

Jan
thought i`d do` Summer time` as hopefully we`ll get some summer weather soon.
It`s been a horrible week weather wise.
First time i`ve done this song,reading lyrics as i go.so far from perfect again.
Plenty of mistakes/bum notes from `The King Of Audio Torture`
https://soundcloud.com/rough-as-gut/tascam_1449mp3
i`ll delete in a week.     

657

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

TIG
Looking forward to hearing it.     

658

(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Wrote this song about a search for truth,seems you can have one news story
but depending on where you read or watch it,it almost seems to be totally different.
It gets to be, you don`t know who or what to believe or trust.
https://soundcloud.com/rough-as-gut/elusive-truth 

659

(13 replies, posted in Poems)

Peatle
great to see some creative writing on Chordie.     

660

(6 replies, posted in Bands and artists)

CS
brilliant playing,i`m glad you decided to share your music.
I`m so impressed by your playing,maybe i`ll take up the kazoo instead of playing guitar     

661

(4 replies, posted in Poems)

Peatle
i love it!!!
it`s great fun jamming words.
I bit of weird music and its a hit!     

662

(4 replies, posted in Poems)

Seeds To Sow
What are these things that go round and round
Bounce off the wall then fall to the ground
Shimmer in the light and die with the night
Come with the wind and rise with the tide
Grow from the bottom the stop at the top
Cover the sky like a pink cloud of smoke
What are these things,we`ll never know
Along comes spring,seeds to sow
harvest in summer
warm coat in Transylvania 

663

(0 replies, posted in Poems)

Seeds To Sow
What are these things that go round and round
Bounce off the wall then fall to the ground
Shimmer in the light and die with the night
Come with the wind and rise with the tide
Grow from the bottom the stop at the top
Cover the sky like a pink cloud of smoke
What are these things,we`ll never know
Along comes spring,seeds to sow
harvest in summer
warm coat in transylvania 

664

(19 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Great to see you doing new stuff Peatle     

Bill
it`s free to load music,our mate Peatle records on his cellphone then loads it.
email him for advice if required.     

666

(11 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Tig
good to see you`re still writing,is a recording coming?     

667

(14 replies, posted in Recording)

Strummerboy Bill wrote:

You're speechless??? smile

Or have I "overstepped my bounds"? smile

Whatever the case, I'm getting ready to put something on SoundCloud, but before I do - does it have to be original or can I cover something else? I don't know for sure if I have ever seen a post where one of you might have done a cover, so that's my reason for asking. The song I want to cover is also easy to strum, not so easy for me to stay on-key, so I want to be as "safe" as I can be.

Thanks

Bill


Bill we`ll take whatever you got,original or cover.
I can hardly wait to see what you do.Bring it on!     

neophytte wrote:
Peatle Jville wrote:

Neo did a great job of EB and Phills song. I have enjoyed  listening to this months FSOTM contributions.

Thanks ... will you be contributing this month? (are you up for a challenge?)

Cheers

Richard


Yeah go on Neo,give Peatle a challenge!!!!!     

neophytte wrote:
easybeat wrote:

Neo challenged me to do `Crazy` and Jan challenged me to do a song close to the original.
So i`ve got both them in one shot.Haven`t heard the original for a long time.
this is a real singers song,so not one i should do,also i think classics are best left alone.
I`ll only leave it up for a week as it`s a bit of a dogs breakfast.But hey, i`m entering the spirit.
https://soundcloud.com/rough-as-gut/crazy

That was good ... is that in the Willie Nelson style? I haven't heard the original for a long time either, and tend to play it a bit more down-strummy rather than picked ... I hope you leave it up for longer!!

Cheers

Richard

Yeah Willie wrote it,i think he did a just kinda vocal/guitar.
i`ve never played this before, it was a quick off the cuff.
Just read the words and played the chords so probably not very accurate.     

Neo challenged me to do `Crazy` and Jan challenged me to do a song close to the original.
So i`ve got both them in one shot.Haven`t heard the original for a long time.
this is a real singers song,so not one i should do,also i think classics are best left alone.
I`ll only leave it up for a week as it`s a bit of a dogs breakfast.But hey, i`m entering the spirit.
https://soundcloud.com/rough-as-gut/crazy     

671

(8 replies, posted in Poems)

Jan
that is  terrific,i give it a 10/10     

672

(14 replies, posted in Recording)

Bill
Go for it,looking forward to hearing you.     

Neo
you have really risen to the challenge,good on you.
Like what you have done to this song.
Just goes to show same song two versions,both great!
I often have a go @ unknown songs,you often get a feel for it from the
words & chords anyway.It`s what we do when we write, but we add our own nuances.     

674

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Bill
thanks for having a listen,it started a bit woobly but i got there in the end.
this is what happens when you do a first take demo.
the chords go.   i played it capo fret 5
Em    Am
Am   C
Am  C
Am  C  D  C     

675

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

There`s been a lot of tears & heartache songs here lately,so thought i`d do something different.
This song is a bunch of random words with a few rhymes & bum notes thrown in for good measure.
https://soundcloud.com/rough-as-gut/left-is-never-right