Graham
Yeah, well, I liked this one too !!  smile

You are a really talented musician.

Jim     

Graham

That is awesome - great song - well played !   

I am sure there are thousands that have the same sentiments regarding urban life

Jim     

728

(8 replies, posted in My local band and me)

That is way cool Richard !
It must have taken  a lot of work to put that together. 
Fantastic achievements!

Congratulations!  I hope it gets accepted - it is very well done.

Jim     

729

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks Phill on both accounts!     

730

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

The Door  (Mama’s song) by Jim Kenyon


originally for a SOTM entry 


A song about how my mom inspired all 10 of her children after our Dad was killed in an accident.




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Verse 1


[G]She carried the weight of the[C] world upon her [G]shoulders


Though I don’t recall that I [C] ever saw her[G] cry


Oh she[C] had a way to make the broken look [G]beautiful


oh she could [D] lift your spirits right [C]up into the[G] sky




.






Chorus


She’d say it’s [C]funny that neither side of a [G]door


can [C]know just what’s waiting on the other [G] side


but a [C]door can make what was, into what will [G]be


so [D]child, step out in the [C] world and take that [G]ride


.




yeah...


she’d say [C] leave your burdens and fears all behind [G] you


and [C] have the courage to walk right out that [G] door


ya' need to [C] spread your wings and learn how to [G] fly


and let [D] love take you where you’ve[C] never gone be[G]fore





.




. Verse 2


[G] well ya’ know our family never [C]had the best of [G]anything


but we made the best of [C] everything that we [G]could


through the [C]rain and the pains, somehow she kept us [G]dreaming


that we could[D] be anything , she [C] always made us feel so [G]good


.






Chorus


She’d say it’s [C]funny that neither side of a [G]door


can [C]know just what’s waiting on the other [G] side


but a [C]door can make what was, into what will [G]be


so [D]child, step out in the world and take that [G]ride


.




yeah...


she’d say [C] leave your burdens and fears all behind [G] you


and [C] have the courage to walk right out that [G] door


ya' need to [C] spread your wings and learn how to [G] fly


and let [D] love take you where you’ve[C] never gone be[G]fore






and let [D] love take you where you’ve[C] never gone be[G]fore


and let [D] love take you where you’ve[C] never gone be[G]fore


 

OK  it's not July  but here goes.
(I am also posting this under songwriting - I hope that's ok??)

The Door  (Mama’s song) by Jim Kenyon


SOTM entry   I used all the words !   smile


A song about how my mom inspired all 10 of her children.




.






Verse 1


[G]She carried the weight of the[C] world upon her [G]shoulders


Though I don’t recall that I [C] ever saw her[G] cry


Oh she[C] had a way to make the broken look [G]beautiful


oh she could [D] lift your spirits right [C]up into the[G] sky




.






Chorus


She’d say it’s [C]funny that neither side of a [G]door


can [C]know just what’s waiting on the other [G] side


but a [C]door can make what was, into what will [G]be


so [D]child, step out in the [C] world and take that [G]ride


.




yeah...


she’d say [C] leave your burdens and fears all behind [G] you


and [C] have the courage to walk right out that [G] door


ya' need to [C] spread your wings and learn how to [G] fly


and let [D] love take you where you’ve[C] never gone be[G]fore





.




. Verse 2


[G] well ya’ know our family never [C]had the best of [G]anything


but we made the best of [C] everything that we [G]could


through the [C]rain and the pains, somehow she kept us [G]dreaming


that we could[D] be anything , she [C] always made us feel so [G]good


.






Chorus


She’d say it’s [C]funny that neither side of a [G]door


can [C]know just what’s waiting on the other [G] side


but a [C]door can make what was, into what will [G]be


so [D]child, step out in the world and take that [G]ride


.




yeah...


she’d say [C] leave your burdens and fears all behind [G] you


and [C] have the courage to walk right out that [G] door


ya' need to [C] spread your wings and learn how to [G] fly


and let [D] love take you where you’ve[C] never gone be[G]fore






and let [D] love take you where you’ve[C] never gone be[G]fore


and let [D] love take you where you’ve[C] never gone be[G]fore


732

(3 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Too bad he didn't start earlier in life - probably could have done some good songs ! smile     

Jan  Fabulous !!    I loved your voice when you dropped down for "Darling" !   I still think your vice is golden and I also still think you should try it with an acoustic guitar - maybe you could get Peatle or Brian to play for you if you don't feel comfortable.  You have what I have always said is the difference between average and great voices - uniqueness. Thanks for sharing this !

Jim     

734

(13 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Jan
It was called chordiestock - I never went but it looked like so much fun. 
There are many threads and photos somewhere on here about it.  I think Mekidsmom, baldguydude, uncle joe and a bunch of others hosted some. Pretty sure Zurf went to a few.

It would be great to have one again.

Jim     

RICHARD
That is way cool !  To be able to have video that spans time is priceless.

Well done

Jim     

736

(5 replies, posted in Poems)

Jeff
I agree with everyone - I think it may be your best one.
The title " Blank Page" would be so mysterious and an attraction magnet in MHO !
It is a hook unto itself - it could mean a million things - and make a person want to find out.

I am in complete agreement with Phill - it is one of those songs that you go  - Darn - wish I had thought of that and been the one that wrote it !  smile
Well done my friend - can't wait to hear it.     

737

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Nice !  I like it Phill     

738

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Beautifully written

Having three daughters myself- been there.,  and know exactly what you are saying.

Nice one Jeff

Jim     

739

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Trevor
Wow - I think this is awesome.
Love these lines  " Love can leave a memory that no one can steal
but can also leave a pain that no one can heal"

Well done my friend!
Jim     

740

(9 replies, posted in Poems)

LOL Peatle,

That's the only thing I thought was the Gin
I had pictured a Gin Bloody Mary with celery, and Olives.
Well done, my cryptic muse !

Jim     

741

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Jeff
very nice song - very descriptive of the beach. You played and sang great

Jim     

742

(9 replies, posted in Poems)

Yes Peatle - What he said !!

Oh, that is soooooooo good !

Nicely composed
Jim     

Jan
That sounds awesome. 
You have such a unique voice and just a bit of an accent ( at least to me) that enhance it greatly.
Beautifully done.

Jim     

744

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

OK  as I said earlier - this song was a work in progress

I went through this morning and made quite a few changes. 
I changed chords and lyrics - I think it is much better and the music " fits better".

Let me know what you think - thanks

Jim     

745

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Trevor,
Thanks - retirement is good - getting used to it .
It actually is still a work in progress.  - not where I feel it is complete yet - lots of tweaking to go.  Usually wait til guys/ girls on here that actually know something about music smile give me their feedback.

Jandle  - Thanks Jan - I need to write a happy one soon ! smile
                   also - thanks for bringing back SOM !!
Jeff - Thanks for the kind words.     

Trevor
Excellent song and excellent rendition.

I could not help but think of the Christmas song -

John McCutcheon: Christmas in the trenches (1984)

here is the singer explaining it  and singing 

John McCutcheon: Christmas in the trenches (1984)


Great Message Trevor - if only the world  could be so kind

Thanks for your song !

Jim     

747

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I wrote this song this morning, hope you like it
Let me know if you have suggestions for improvement.


What Love Can’t Do By Jim Kenyon


‘


Verse 1


[C] Oh, the writing was there, [Am]right on the wall


But [F]who would ever think that [G]love could fall


[C]There was a time, yeah,[Am] there was a time


That [F] I was yours, and baby, [G]you were mine


.






Verse 2


oh,[C] the passion was hot, but our [Am]hearts grew cold


we [F]never thought that love could [G] ever grow old


we were [C]young and wild, full of [Am]foolish dreams


now [F] it's like we're falling apart [G]at the seams


.


Chorus


.


[F]if only we could forget the hard times we’ve had


and [C]get through the worst,take the good from the bad


but [F] words aren't enough, as we're finding so true


it’ such a[G] shame to find out just [F]what love can’t [C]do


it’ such a[G] shame to find out just [F]what love can’t [C]do


.


Verse 3



[C]oh, you don't think it'll come, can’t im[Am]agine the day


You [F] can’t know how you’ll feel, or [G]what you’ll say


yeah we [C] started a fire, that's grown to a[Am] raging storm


and now we’re[F] feeling lonely instead of[G] safe and warm


.


Verse 4


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[C] oh, we looked for sunshine but all we[Am] got was rain


yeah we[F] ached for laughter but all we [G] felt was pain


we were [C] chasing a love we thought would [Am]never end


but now we [F] only have hearts that we can't [G]seem to mend


.


Chorus


.


[F]if only we could forget the hard times we’ve had


[C]get through the worst,and take the good from the bad


but [F] words aren't enough, as we're finding so true


it’ such a[G] shame to find out just [F]what love can’t [C]do


it’ such a[G] shame to find out just [F]what love can’t [C]do


it’ such a[G] shame to find out just [F]what love can’t [C]do


yeah, it’ such a[G] shame to find out just [F]what love can’t [C]do



Here is the song if you want to write down the lyrics.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=24swDlw6m18     

749

(5 replies, posted in Poems)

Sounds great  Scott !

I believe you might be closing in on Joey,Joey,Joey as I see a whole lot of guitars hanging !! smile

Looking forward to finished work.

JIm     

750

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Trevor,

Looks great.
There are many ways to interpret those lyrics - makes it very interesting !
Can't wait to hear it.
Nicely done.
Jim