https://th.bing.com/th/id/OIP.1bG_-BJb5uOp9b-1vlJwlgHaE8?w=298&h=199&c=7&r=0&o=5&pid=1.7 

Ok the FOUR WORDS pulled out of the hat were:

Dreaming
Picture
Electronic
Remember     

TIGLJK wrote:

Jan
This song was perfect for you . It sounds great. I I think your voicing was really,really well done, some great pauses which were very effective - just waiting for the "golden voice" to start again!

I sure wish I had your vocal abilities.

Thanks for sharing.

Jim

ps  thanks for the kind words on my song - unfortunately - it is a sad song lyrically.  I actually think it might be my best lyrics.

Thanks, Jim, for having a listen and for your comments on it.  It`s interesting because I do actually struggle with SLOW songs and singing them.  For some reason, my natural tendency is to go for fast or medium paced songs, so doing a slow song like this throws me a bit lol.  All a learning curve isn't it and I guess it is good to make yourself do something that is not in your normal style.  So, thanks for your great feedback smile
On another note, your song as I said above was great and yes, I definitely think lyrically one of your best .... the fact it brought tears to my eyes, a sure sign of a good song smile     

Ok will be putting these words into a hat and will draw them out tomorrow when I write up the new FSOTM.  Thanks, neophytte and TIGLJK for putting some words down for us.  Thanks, easybeat, yep, I tend to agree.  We will have to see what gets pulled out of the hat.     

Grah1, nice one, it suited you voice very well.     

Grah1, nice one, it suited you voice very well.     

Thankyou Peatle and neophytte for having a listen to my cover of Sea of Love.  Probably not my best attempt to cover as I rushed it in my 2nd attempt to cover it as I knew I was running out of time and wasn't going to get time to practice it b4 the end of the month.  Oh well, guess that's the nature of it.     

732

(7 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Peatle, that was very touching.  The lyrics tell the story that is so relevant today to so many young and I might add not so young people these days.  Phones, technology have taken over so much.  I think your voice totally suited this song as well, you did the song proud, and your guitarist friend was great as well.     

Hi everyone, been a bit of the busy month for me, so catching up tonight.

TIGLJK, great lyrics from you once again in your song.  I re-read them a couple of times tonight and it kinda made me sad, which lyrically is a good thing right?  It hit the spot to your listener or in this case reader.   Relationships, marriage losing that first love or that special thing between two people.

neophytte, Dancing in the dark, you covered it really well, it suited you vocally and your style.  I agree with the above comments that the guitar could be quieter or increase the loudness of your voice recording.  Otherwise, a good cover and suited you.
neophytte, your Crowded House cover was good as well.  I could definitely hear the phaser sound to this recording.  Nicely performed.


And with all that said, better late than never, here is my very quick recording tonight for FSOTM with the word SEA. 
https://soundcloud.com/ukulelejan/sea-of-love     

Anymore suggestions before October, only a couple of days left to put down your choice of words smile     

Peatle Jville wrote:

Richard and Uncle Joesband great to see your videos on here. I have had to more of less stop playing guitar a health thing. So I will put up a song I wrote three years back, "Mountains To Sea."  I hope it makes sense as it's about the weird way songs come to me sometimes.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jua53gh04NY

Peatle, wow, I loved the lyrics in this one, quite thought provoking.  I see you wrote it back in 2019 and what is very cool as the lyrics are still relatable today.  A very heartfelt song.  I listened very much to the words which grabbed me straight away.

unclejoesband wrote:

I did this at on open mic a couple days ago so I thought Id use it for this months song.


The daylight coming in the windows washes me out but you don't need to see me. lol

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=09-cBKm … ChordiePa.

Good to see your out there performing unclejoesband, looks like you're thoroughly enjoying yourself.   Great to see you doing something you love.  P.S. if you get time, please give the other Chordians feedback on their efforts too smile     

737

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Jets60, I agree with what Peatle said on Soundcloud, a good yearning type song.  Nicely performed and written .     

neophytte, nice performance by you both.  Your son is doing so well joining you.  Is this one you have posted before as it looked familiar?  The only thing in this recording I would change slightly is maybe to have the piano a bit louder or maybe the guitar a bit quieter, just so the full effect of the piano could come through as parts of it was hard to hear the piano.  Otherwise nicely done and suits your vocals.     

neophytte, thanks for the great feedback on my cover smile
I really liked your cover of Vincent, you performed it really well, especially if you have just gotten over a cold.  You managed the high notes and just the right amount of reverb on this one.  Great to hear you chatting a little bit before hand as well.  Big Thumbs up from me.

zurf, lol sorry if your not a fan of Neil Youngs music big_smile  Just what I could hear in parts of your vocals on one of your songs.  I like some of the old Neil Young songs, so didn't mean to insult you big_smile   
Thanks for the neat feedback on my cover too smile

Nicely performed easybeat, good all round with what you have written, sung and instrumentally.     

Ok for this MONTH of OCTOBER, looking for WORDS that YOU the members SUGGEST we could perform for FSOTM.  

List BELOW a WORD or WORDS that you would like us to perform in the MONTH of OCTOBER.  Enter as many WORDS as you would like and just before the MONTH of OCTOBER starts, all the SUGGESTED WORDS will go into the HAT and 4 of the WORDS will go into OCTOBERS FSOTM.

Look forward to what you SUGGEST

READY!  SET!  GO!

A big Hi to everyone this month of SEPTEMBER, it`s a change of season worldwide, the start of SPRING for some countries in the Southern hemisphere and the beginning of FALL /AUTUMN in the Northern hemisphere.

So, for this month of SEPTEMBER, looking for SONGS with any of the following WORDS in them.  The WORDS are   HELP …. HOUSE …. ROAD …. SEA.

It can be a COVER SONG or an ORIGINAL SONG, it can have one of the words somewhere in the song or more than one of the words in the song, heck it can have all 4 of the words in the song if you want.

Here are some suggestions from members of Chordie. 
Help - The Beatles
Try a little kindness - Glen Campbell (has the words Road and Help in the song)
House of the rising sun - The Animals
Burning down the house - The Cardigans
On the road again - Willie Nelson 
Roadhouse – The Doors 
Hit The Road Jack – Ray Charles

Looking forward to seeing what you all come up with this month and remember, the above are only suggestions, you can COVER, perform an ORIGINAL even if its not been suggested.

READY!  SET!  GO!  

Thanks so much Peatle, Grah1, easybeat and TIGLJK for the AWESOME feedback, made my day today actually and put a smile on my face from all the lovely comments and feedback.   I was doing housework, blah,  and it lifted my spirit up as I did my jobs around the house.     

744

(26 replies, posted in Poems)

easybeat, that was real old school big_smile, reminded of me of the stuff we used to watch as kids at primary school.  The voice of the person speaking, was like all the old school documentaries when they spoke lol

Peatle, that was very much old school (as well) Kiwi shearing days, and I remember that song.  That dog was pretty amazing jumping those fences.     

745

(2 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Nice one Jim,  you have written this song well.  I agree, those 3 words are a bit nerve racking when your young in particular and most of us cross the nervous bridge and say them.  Love that line out of the bible too.     

746

(26 replies, posted in Poems)

oh my gosh Peatle, I have never seen those before, they are like a snail without the shell.     

747

(5 replies, posted in Poems)

Peatle, nicely written and  your thoughts come through strongly.  Well done, I enjoyed it as I visualized certain things you mentioned in there.  Like you, we have lots of Tui`s around the place and wood pigeons as well.  The wood pigeons, who weigh the trees branches down with their size and weight sometimes.     

zurf, I enjoyed listening and watching both of those and I always enjoy your chat before hand. I actually don't know either of those songs so I cant compare  them to the originals but they sounded fine by me and I think you covered them both well and with enthusiasm.   I was listening to the sound of your vocals, I reckon your voice would also suit some Neil Young songs, just at certain points I could hear your vocals sounded a bit like his vocals.

Anyway here is my very late entry and done very quickly as its the last day of the month for this months entries.  I was hoping to do another 2 songs that I had lined up but time has run out for me as we were away on holiday and I just haven't had time to get anything more done for this.  So here it is, rushed as it is.
https://soundcloud.com/ukulelejan/where … owers-gone     

Any suggestions for next month, September?

Here are a few from me.

Help - The Beatles
Try a little kindness - Glen Campbell ( has the words Road and Help in the song)
House of the rising sun - The Animals
Burning down the house - The Cardigans
On the road again - Willie Nelson     

750

(26 replies, posted in Poems)

Peatle, that was great writing, loved it, very clever piece of writing.

As for the jokes, well done, made me laugh everyone. 

Tig, I used to love watching Lambchops as a kid, I still have a lambchops soft toy.

Peatle, that video clip was a hardcase too, a bit like you, I love some of the kids programs big_smile